some shayris...by me-new added..page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys
i am new here ....but you all write very well..here r some shayris by me...please do comment.😊

Haal-e-dil sunate bhi to kaise,
Jazbato ko bayan karte bhi to kaise,
apne ho chale the begane sabhi,
aur begano se iqraar karte bhi to kaise.

Nazre mili to karar ho gaya,
nazre jhuki to izhaar ho gaya,
dil ko to pata hi na chala kab,
Nazro ko nazro se pyar ho gaya.

Kismat ko gawara na tha jispe dil aya tha,
Hakikat ko kabool na tha jo sapno me aya tha,
Ek hum kambakht aas lagaye baithe hai,
use to ehsaas hi na tha ki wo hamara tha.
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Neetaldesai thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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11 views? no replies?

bade zalim hai yeh sher-o-shayri forum waleeeee

aji tareef na sahi....galtiyan to nikal dijiye
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey i loved ur shayaris...they r simply awesome...keep up the good work😃👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey!!!! 😊 😉 very nice...dont be upset...atleast i saw just right now...otherwise wud have definatley replied... 😆 😊 kepp it up👏
Edited by friend_125 - 17 years ago
kewl_yuvi thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome shayari dear...👏 👏 loved all of them....

thnx 4 sharing...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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another one

Ankho ko apke intezaar ki adat ho chuki hai
Dil ko apki yado ki adat ho chuki hai,
Aap kehte hai na aao karib"jaan"
kambakht hume to aapki saanso ki adat ho chuki hai 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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AREY WAAH WAAH WAAH WAAH..APUN TO AAPKA FAN BANGAYA.. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Neetaldesai

another one

Ankho ko apke intezaar ki adat ho chuki hai
Dil ko apki yado ki adat ho chuki hai,
Aap kehte hai na aao karib"jaan"
kambakht hume to aapki saanso ki adat ho chuki hai 😊

wah wah...bohot khoob...👏👏

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