respect to the Hijabi must read

Hi guys

Just a little poem I wrote for one of the courses I am doing

Respect the Hijab(i)

A Hijabi, that's what their called,

Tightly fixed around their head,

In all colours, scarves neatly wrapped,

She's got 'respect' and called Sister.

Never mind her extra-tight skinnys.

Or the clubbing stilettos she finds appropriate,

Its only winter Bradford, with hills to climb,

Sisters a Hijabi, give her respect, yeah!

So what, if her breasts are on the floor,

Or when she bends over,

A diamond studded thong screams, Hi!

It's the latest fashion, and its matches her earrings,

Sisters a Hijabi, give her respect, yeah!

Don't matter, if she's got a fag in her right hand,

Or that she has enough blusher on to mistake her for a Drag,

It's the only thing that covers her acne,

And highlights her cheekbones,

Sisters a Hijabi though, give her respect, yeah?

Okay, so she's got a lad in a her left hand,

And that tongue-twister you just saw, was screaming hypocrisy,

Everyone has one, and his usually large hand,

On her butt cheek is nothing new, don't you know?

Sisters a Hijabi though, give her respect, yeah?

Please comment😃

hi guys well 12 views and no replies guess it's not a good poem, but this was the best one i wrote i got the highest mark out of the whole of my portfolio for this one. That's a shame. I hope I didn't cause any offence just where are live you get somme people abusing the Hijab that's all, so I felt like putting my views into a poem that's al..

nah nah.. hOw dO i read and wOnt reply.. i really appericiate yOur wOrk.. very nice 👏 👏

ahh thats really good
thanks for sharing... 😉

thanks for your comments guys 😃

welcome 😊
n plz do share more if u have 😊

to be honest, i did not like it...yeah true you were trying to defend the hijjabi sisters....but you should have done it in a nice way, for instance talk about who she truly is, the eman that she carries in her heart and what she is from the inside... and avoid talking about her breasts and butt..

sorry, im not trying to be mean or anything, just stating my views about your poem