Kavitayein- the poet's corner..[chk pg 27] - Page 18

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Posted: 12 years ago
New poem from me
AS LONG AS FLOWER
Life of man,tressure of man,
Possession of man, TIME OF MAN
Have a long run;
But towards the finishing turn.
Friendship pf man,affection of man,
Admiration of man,ambition of man,
Lust for a moment- or even whole lifespan
If they are pure, they are true.
Hope of man, brine of man,
Vast as the azure...
Undoubtedly having lifelong guarantee
Always glimmer man just like a pleasure.
Love of man, Hatred of man
Stand in TIME'S EYE;
Always offer man a pleasant yearning
With a glimpse of sad sigh !
After all, our life is short.
Some golden memories glorify us...
So, don't shorten your loving moments...
They are naturally as long as flowers!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww its so beautiful..you are talented writer dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
@justjayati:main bhi poems likhti hoon lekin sirf hindi mein😊.
@surprising:extremely nice poem dear.aru di ne bilkul sahi kaha ki aap ek born writer hain👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
@machinegun: thanxxx...a ton dost😊😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome!!! lovely!!! good doing surprising!!!👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
ok this is my first poem i wrote when i was 10. so naturally its short simple and childish i guess!

THE GARDEN
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O those lovely evenings I've spent in midst of you,
Where everything I see seems familiar but distinct.
My eyes haven't seen those green leaves and grass for a long
time,
Though it gives them a sore treat.
Where every shade of green seems to have mixed with the other
Only to form a new colour.
The familiar scent of the wet mud and the sweet fresh air
together miff my nose,
Where flowers and trees have together rose.
O leave those silly poetic lines,
In the garden I thus sit, which I define.
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Posted: 12 years ago
😊nice poem.go ahead😛 & please read my poem too😉 its on the same page😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome poem dear.apne forun mein talented logon kiya koi kami nahin hai.
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Posted: 12 years ago
@surprising nd sapphirerose amazing👏
Edited by chand1234 - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chand1234

@surprising nd sapphirerose amazing👏

Obe oye, tujhe poems parne ka fursaat mil raha hay, other ffs bhi!!!!!!!!!
to...meri ss ne kiya galti kiya?????😡
do do baar pm bhejne ke baad bhi...mujhe na tujhe suit kare aisa koi adj. nehi mil raha hay!!!!!!!!
tujhe hardly 6-7 min lagega meri wo simple english parne ke liye!!!
Edited by surprising - 12 years ago

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