Originally posted by: Coffee_Chips
Hey, last night I read this on Wattpad & was waiting for you to post this here. Finally it's here & I can say everything that came to my mind 😆😆
So.. This concept is so fresh, so interesting & kept me on the edge of my seat. Shaurya & Anokhi in an age reversal with a sophisticated touch in both their lives. That got me hooked to the plot!
How they met eo, Shaurya showed genuine interest in talking to her, how Anokhi tried not to melt at his words & moves were bliss. The introduction was so good. Then ofc revelation of who he is & I really liked how she checked him out 😄
Moving on.. The way they found comfort with eo, watched movies together, had food, walked along paths was so cute. Then Shagun happened & I really liked how Ahir was being the understanding friend for Anokhi. Goals!
Anyway misunderstandings & hearts filled with unanswered questions was painful ofc. That function actually triggered Anokhi, which was necessary I feel. Neither him nor her were open about their feelings & Shaurya's behaviour came as off putting.
How she decided to apologise was sweet 💛 She couldn't take it anymore but I felt some jhol had to be there & the girl inside his house had to be his friends girl 🤣 That last convo was adorbs with frustration coming through, it was needed & OMG, the ending 🤪🤗
Refreshing, hatke, interesting, mind boggling. You can add more adjectives 😁😁😁
Made me so happy honestly & gurl, you gotta write something similar. Maybe a story with them in different professions, with Shaurya fighting his feelings for a younger Anokhi. Ofc we have that paradigm but in a different situation, place yk? Could you consider this as a request? 🤗❤️
Great work with this, nailed the story! 🤗💜
. I loved every line of it.It took me full hour to read it properly, can't imagine how much efforts and time it would have taken you to write this.
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