SHAKHI TS - JO TERA HOYEGA ZAROOR AAYEGA(FINAL PART POSTED NOW) - Page 3

You expressed their emotions so well. 👏 Anokhi worring for Shaurya you wrote eveything perfectly. Waiting for the next part. ❤️

Beautiful 🤗🤗

I love the conversations when things are left unsaid, because it isn't always essential. Their actions speak far louder ❤️❤️

Waiting to read the next part

This was breathtaking Ankita. I felt each & every emotion.

Love the way you are so clear in your thoughts & how you proceed to pace d story.. Absolutely beautiful.

Loved it so much. Thank you for sharing!

Looking forward to many more.

Cheers

Sumi.

Originally posted by: Rich12

When will you update the next part

Waiting for it

Gonna update today fingers crossed.

Originally posted by: GHKPM

Omg ... this is just awesome💖💖💖🌹

Thankyou so much for liking this.

Originally posted by: Coffee_Chips

Okay firstly, I thought this was a One shot & then scrolling to the start, saw this is a 2 shot 😆 So eagerly waiting to read the next..

Moving on, the entire chap had a blissful touch, an angelic one where everything was clear. Anokhi's brawl with her emotions, her senses working towards believing the person mentioned in the news was Shaurya & finally her reaching his cabin.

On the other hand, Shaurya's restlessness was nicely written. Less with witty remarks, more integrity, loved reading him coping with his sentiments. The convo without being dragged had the elements of a perfect confession without properly confessing. Also the forehead kiss was so sweet, their faith in eo & hoping for a future of togetherness at the end had my heart ❤️

Lovely work!

The first part ended up being so long and the second one has gotten even longer but I hope to post it together so there is no more wait.

Thankyou so much for such a comprehensive reply.Your feedback is so much appreciated and I really like that the you enjoyed Anokhi's conflict and Shaurya's restlessness.

Hope you like the next one too.

Originally posted by: Aimsha

Great job, every emotion was expressed so well, each word had its own depth, thanku, waiting eagerly for the next update

Thankyou so much.Glad you liked this one and I hope to update the next one asap.

Originally posted by: Shivikafan2

🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

Thankyou so much,I Am glad you liked this one.

Originally posted by: serenepeace46

It's so beautifully written OMG, I could even imagine every single scene, you write so well dear I am in awe😍😍❤❤❤

Thankyou so so much.Humbles me this one was imaginable on the beautiful pairing we see onscreen.Hope you will like the last one.

Originally posted by: ZaaraBB

love it. cant wait for the next parttt

Thankyou so much.Ill be updating asap and I hope you will enjoy reading that one too.