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Posted: 4 years ago
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OMG the heat was rising on our side!!😃 😂

Loved this!! Please write more OS', they are lovely to read! ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awesome work.....simply loved it

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Rimi 🤗

Congrats on breaking your ShaKhi writing virginity🤣🤣 You finally did it! 😆😆

Mujhe likhne mei ☺️ aa rahi hai ki yeh kitna zyada decent hai... You know what I mean 😆

Title padh ke mai samajh gayi ki kisko kya tasty laga hoga... Anokhi ko bhi ab pata chal gaya ki Shaurya Sir ko chocolate kis tareeke se khane mei maza ata hai ☺️

Best part was his exposure! Anokhi ko pata chal gaya ki uske Sir uske saath time spend karne aaye the woh bhi jhoot bolke... Astha is smart! She knew why her husband ka beta is here 🤣

I wanted to be the first one but I was busy with college ki padhaibut koi naa... You left me speechless with that subtle and classy romance. Itna ache se describe kiya hai ki mere dimag mei yeh scene chal raha hai with the voices in whispers and stuff

I have always looked forward to your stories and this one is just worth the wait❤️ I loved it!

Love,

Teri Akshu 🤗❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#14

I have exams soon and this is making me grin and giggle like a teenager ❤❤ Thank you 😊 do keep writing ✍

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Aree waah finally tum yeh bhi likhi😁
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Absolutely lovely. 😳😳 I hope you write more! ❤️❤️🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#17

Aah! Hot and sweet!! keep writing

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Posted: 4 years ago
#18

Arre koi Ac on kardo...hayeee garmi🤪


Omg Rimi, what a pleasant surprise☺️☺️

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Title se hi sab samaj aa gya tha..but still I was trying to behave innocent😛

Oh god Rimi that was so classy👍🏼

Very well written, and plot is just superb... chocolate was the bestest cupid i must say☺️


Him saying, I have better option than that was enough for me to....☺️☺️ bas samajh ja😆

And then the way he took choco from her and placed it on the counter thinking her hands were needed somewhere else was☺️ smart sabbarwal☺️

Oh god that kiss🙈 my cheeks still hurting by continually grinning and blushing....and you can't believe i'm blushing while typing also☺️


And last pe finally she got to know woh kiske ke liye aya tha astha mam knows everything nahi?😆


And that msg..uffff ab kya jan logi☺️


Thank you so much Rim tumne humare liye likha🤗sach mein it was awesome👍🏼


And I love you too behna❤️


Keep writing👍🏼 waiting for more😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
#19

That was so sweet

Just like the chocolates professor sahab got for his rasgulla

Want to read more from you

Maybe the sequel of this deliciousness

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I am mesmerized. This was so beautiful! Magical. The way it was written I had a constant smile over my lips and a warmth lacing my heart!

Pen down more.

The was sheer beauty ❤️

Love and light 🤗

Akanksha

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