The weirdest part is that I missed the last 3 chaps. I didn't know you had updated LOL Would be happy if there's a possibility for you to send a pm when updating, I don't wanna miss reading this beauty 😊
Talking about the 3 chaps, a roller coaster ride. So many things happened & the barriers Shaurya had built around himself were brought down when Anokhi insisted with another chance for them, it was beautifully written. The nuances, agreements & disagreements whether its with the past or present were put forward thoughtfully.
Where Anokhi was hurt & she asked Shaurya whether he wants to date another girl was adorable though she was hurt. Their past had much depth, unfiltered baatein, the openness in the relationship & were nice to read.
But I felt from before that after Anokhi left, Shaurya would slowly move away. It was meant to happen, thanks to their toxic parents 🤢 The way he was drowning in his own pain, one he was causing to the only positive factor/sunshine in his life after his brother was heartbreaking. I liked your portrayal of his pensive sadness, could feel as a reader.
I really liked the progressive step of Anokhi with her harsh words to Devi but I didn't expect her to take Shaurya with her which was an interesting turn 😊
The comment turned longer than I thought. Would be waiting for the next updates..