Originally posted by: WarriorB
Yoo This story is fire!! It's like a sloww slow burn! But not exactly.. And usually with stories that have to straddle the past present line, I generally feel the itch to read their past but I am actually liking the pace here instead.
And I like how they both are feeling those phantom limb pains yet don't understand that the other is going through the same! And react with all these caustic retorts!
And like the total hilarity of both of them saying yes to the project to spite the other! 🤣
I am forever unsure about what to feel about Shaan! He seems like a right things at the wrong time kinda person always!! Both him and Aastha seem like two people who themselves are arrested in their thirties and hence are never able to be there to raise Shaurya!
So Looking forward to reading the rest of this!Kudos!
OMG thank you sooooo much!! Honestly I really love slow burn because I feel like it gives me the scope to develop the feelings and show the changing dynamics!! As for the past/present I'm trying to find the right balance to weave in their moments from the past and develop what happened while also pushing the present forward so thank you!
They are honestly hilarious they are both doing the exact same thing as each other and feeling the same things but pretend like they aren't 😆
Yeah Shaan always acts a bit too late but we'll see if this time, he was able to do something for the better! Aastha still doesn't have the same right to her son's time but they have progressed a bit in their relationship with each other.
Thanks so much for reading🤗 Also please let me know what I can call you!
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