ShaKhi Drabble: She has dreams - Page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: RaarA

Wow

This one was beautiful. Loved how Shaurya let go of his demand for his love.

Thank you so much!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..RiMi..

Akshu , I have only one word for this!

Beautiful! ❤️


I don't how you create magic with just few words Drabble likhna koi tujhse seekhe ❤️ So apt ! It tells a whole story in few words ❤️ Amazing!!!!


Loved Prof's dialogue in the end❤️

Thank you Rimi 🤗

Aww... I am touched ❤️ I feel proud of myself when I read such beautiful reviews 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hopefully can see something like this in future too!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: AK_2010

My First piece on ShaKhi 😊


She Has Dreams.


"Spit it out, Dad." Shaurya's cold voice whispered amidst the loud clapping.

"I... Don't get me wrong, Shaurya... I am not trying to..."

"Just say it." Shaan was rudely cut off.


"Don't marry her," Shaurya's head jerked to look at him, "Don't marry Anokhi, son." Shaan had to tread carefully, they were in the middle of a graduation ceremony.


"What!? Where is this coming from?" He gritted his teeth yet smiled pretentiously for the crowd.

"Astha thinks it won't-"

"Why do you always assume that I care about what that woman thinks?" he sneered.

"And I agree with her, Shaurya. You two are no match!" His son frowned, "You wanted a housewife, remember? She is not meant for that!"


"And now I call up on our valedictorian, Ms. Anokhi Bhalla! Guys, put your hands together for our University topper!!!" The MC boomed on the mic and Shaurya along with the dignitaries stood up to honor their brilliant student.


"She is meant for greater things, son. She has dreams to fulfill. Her ambitions..." Shaan patted his back in a consoling manner.

He watched his girl walk up the stage wearing her graduation robes on and was greeted by the Education Minister and the honorable President of India who handed over her certificate and medal.

"She will get more..." Shaurya proclaimed, "Her dreams are now mine. So are her ambitions."

He proudly clapped for her and caught her eye when she slightly turned around to look at him before starting her speech.

"We will fulfill each one of them together."



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Also, criticism is welcome! Be kind though. 😆

Aww. I want the last part to be true so bad. At the same time, I hope Shaurya falls in a big confusion before he decides to marry Anokhi. It will look realistic as per his character

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hopefully can see something like this in future too!

I am actually praying that we get to see a long as promise from Shaurya. A scene or monologue where he swears to support her ambitions.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnokhiKaShaurya

Aww. I want the last part to be true so bad. At the same time, I hope Shaurya falls in a big confusion before he decides to marry Anokhi. It will look realistic as per his character

I do too!!! He has wanted a housewife for so long! I want him to think over it and decide that she is the one wants and he will support her unlike Shaan who didnt support Aastha...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: AK_2010

I am actually praying that we get to see a long as promise from Shaurya. A scene or monologue where he swears to support her ambitions.

True ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Just popping in to say that I re-read this whenever it appears on the first page of the forum.


It's that good💔

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Peppermint..

Just popping in to say that I re-read this whenever it appears on the first page of the forum.


It's that good💔

Keshni 🤗🤗

Girl you are just too sweet! This makes me feel so good, you have no idea... Thank you so much ❤️❤️ I'm emotional

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awesome. It’s seems a dream when Shaurya will speak these words and give importance to ambitious women.

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