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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Shashi..its amazing :) brilliant work...👍🏼👍🏼 excited for the next part 😊
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Originally posted by: Habiba-Monir

Hi Shashi..its amazing :) brilliant work...👍🏼👍🏼excited for the next part😊


Tysm dear... 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey friends m back with ff updation..first of all sorry for late updation..but I have many surprises for you as compensation.so here I present part 4 of my ffShayad..Yahi hai Pyaar...

Part 4

Location: St Xaviers collage campus

Devyani: Anu ruko...

Anu stops and looks back

Anu: Oh devyani tum...hiee

Dev: Han main..main kabse tumhe bula rahi tumhara dhyan kahan tha...

Anu Pov ( Anu was lost in last nights thot..how rajat saved her from big embarassment.)

Anu: Kuch nahi main bs

Dev: bhai k bare me soch rahi thi kya??

she starts teasing her..

Anu: kya...r..rr...

Dev: Are tumhe kya ho gaya..tumto aise darr rahi ho jaise sach me bhai k bare me soch rahi thi...main to mazak kar rahi thi

Anu: Dev plz hume aise mazak pasand nahi..khash kar rajat se judie kisi b cheeze me..jitna behuda vo hai utni hi behudi uske mazak..

(She recollects yesterdays rajats joke on her balvivah..n baby joke..she gets irritated)

Dev: Vaise aksar hum jis cheez se bhagate hai hamesha usme hi fas jate hai..

Anu: kya matlab

Dev: matlab jo tumhe kaha tumhe rajat k kisi cheeze me interest nahi..kahin aise din na aa jaye ki tumhe bas rajat ki cheezon ka hi khayal rahe..

Anu: devyani ye mazak band karo humne kaha na hume ye pasand nahi.

Dev: pasand nahi ya darti ho bhai se

Anu: Dar aur hum..vo b us loafer rajat se...kabhi nahi..

Dev: Acha to prove karo ki tum usse nahi darti

Anu: han kyu nahi..hum prove kar sakte hai hum rajat se nahi darte..

Dev: To class trip pe aake batao

Anu: Class trip??? nnna...nahiii..h..hum aur class trip..tum pagal ho gayi ho kya..aur iska rajat se darne ka kya relation hai..

Dev: matlab ki tum darti ho...darti ho ki 2 din pure tum rajat k sath rahi...to tum b bhai k titli group ki member ho jaungi..jo bhai k agal bagal titliyon ki tarah bhatakti hai..

Anu: Bilkul nahi..hum unse nahi darte..kabhi nahi..hum ate lekin piya ka dhyan kaun rakhega..islie hum nahi aa sakte

Dev: Uffo piya ko tum mere ghar chhod dena meri maa dhyan rakh dengi..ab iske alawa tumne nah kiya to mtlb tum darti ho...

ANu: pr dev hum vo kaise..piyaaa

Dev: ye vo kuch nahi..ye form hai maine bhar diya hai tumhari sign karo..baki sab humpe chhod do..aur han maine tumhare boss se b leave mang li hai..ab tum mana nahi kar sakti ..sign karo

Anu signs form

Next day at Sareen Mansion

Anu enters sareen house with piya..

Dev comes with mrs sareen

Mrs sareen: TO tum anu ho...beta tum to bahot pyaaari ho

Anu: Helllo aunty...

she turns to piya and says..piya aunty ko gm wish karo

Piya: Gm aunty

Mrs sareen: Anu tum fikar na karo...piya ka main pura pura khayal rakhungi..lekin tumhe mera ek kam karna hoga

Anu: han aunty kahiye na..kaisa kaam??

Mrs sareen: Tumhe meri iss zalli beti (Devyani) ko tumhari tarah banana hoga...

beti to tumhari jaisi mili nahi..ab bahu hi koi tumhari jaisi mil jaye...

Dev: maa..aap kya keh rahe ho...

Mrs sareen: aisa kya keh diya..sach muze to pehle laga meri bahu la di tune..fir to...

Dev: maa..chup ho jao..anu maaf karna..maa mazak kar rahi thi..

Anu turns all red..

Dev gets a calls...she starts shouting at someone..few minutes later she comes back..

Dev: Anu hume abi chalna hoga..ek urgent kaam hai collage me...

Anu: ruko devyani..humne aunty ko piya ke medicines to bataye hi nahi..5 minutes do hume..

Dev: Anu kam bahot urgent hai..tum phone pe bata dena na...

Mrs sareen: Uffo..tufani ladki..suno..devyani tum jaon..aur anu tum hume medicines bata do..tumhe mera raja beta rajat chhod dega...

Anu: what...😲

Devyani: han maa ye thik rahega..anu tumhe shankarji ki kasam..plz bhai k sath aa jana..par maa aap bhai ko mana loge na? aapko to pata hai na..vo class trip bus se islie nahi aate kyunki unhe crowd me travel karna pasand nahi..vo anu ko apne sath unke car me leke jane k liye kabi ready nahi honge..!?

Mrs sareen: Vo mera raja beta hai..meri baat kabi nahi talega..

devyani: Thik hai fir anu collage me milte hai..bye ..bye maa..

Mrs sareen: bye mera betu...

She calls rajat and tells him whole story..rajat tries all sort off excuse to refuse it..but he fails in front of his mom's emotional attyachar and highvoltage drama..


Mrs sareen to Anu- Rajat...

bye mera beta..drive safely..and anu dont worry I will take care of piya...Anu-Rajat leave from there..


Itz been 1 hour since anu-rajat are in his car..but both dint talk with each other..they dint even look at each other..finally after sometime..rajat starts talking...

Rajat: Tum ye sab janbuz ke karti ho na..

Anu: Excuse me..

Rajat: han tumhare ye small town tactics..rich handsome ladko ko fasane k liye..tum janbuz ki tarike dhundhti ho mere aas pas rehne ke...

Anu: Excuse me..hum to vapas ja rahe the..vo to devyani ko humne promise kiya islie hum aa rahe..

Rajat: Rehne do...sab bahane hai tumhare..tum jais ladki ko main achese janata hoon..sorry ladki nahi billi..jungalee billi,...

Anu: Aapne fir hume billi kaha..She raises her hand to hit rajat ,rajat tries to defend himself..they start fighting...In the mean time their car hits a tree...

Few minutes later...

Rajat: Anu...Anu..tum thik ho na??

Anu: Hum thik hai..rajat...aapko chot to nahi lagi na..dikhao muze...aap thik to hai na..

Soon they realise y r they showing concern to each other..to avoid awkward moment..rajat starts shouting at anu..

Rajat: Pagal ladki dekho accident karwa diya na..

Anu : isme hamari kya galti hai..car chalane nahi aati to chalaya kyu..ab chalo...

Rajat: oh kya chalo...car band ho gayi hai ab yeh nahi chalegi...iss jungle me to mechanic bhi nahi milega..

Anu: Islie main keh rahi chalo..Rajat..kuch der me raat ho jayegi...hume yahan se nikalna chahiye..aage bus ya koi truck mil jayegi..

They start walking..

After 1 hour...sun dawns..It starts getting dark slowly slowly...

Rajat: kya kaha tha tumne bus mil jayegi..car mil jayegi...mil gaya..bas khali fukat itna chala diya..

Anu turns back..

Anu: hehehehe..thak gaye tum..kya hua maa ne bournvita nahi pilaya kya...haahha

Rajat: Tum chup baitho..aaj ye musibat me hum tumhare bajah se hi hai..muze sochne do..koi hotel hoga aas pas..hume aaj raat vahan hi rukna padega..

Anu:kya..aapke sath hotel me..main marna prefer karu..

Rajat: to maro..vaise b iss jungle sher ( lion) honge hi..tumhe khane k liye tumhe dhundh rahe honge..main to chala...

Anu: are rajat ruko to ..suno to..hum ja kaha rahe..

Rajat: vahan ek ghar dikh raha hai..matlab vahan koi na koi hoga hum usse hotel k bare me puch sakte hai...

Anu: Thik hai..par tum bhag kyu rahe ho..thoda slow nahi chal sakte kya...

Rajat: kyu thode der pehle to tum bahot strong thi..thakati nahi..ab kya hua..

Itz dark everywhere..Anu is not able to see anything clearly..

she falls in puddle...dhaadap..

Anu: Rajat..Rajat...

Rajat turns back and starts laughing..

Rajat: han ab tum sahi jagah ho..rest chahiye tha na tumhe..to kichad me hi baith gayi..hahaha

Anu: Has kya rahe ho..ek ladki ko chhod k kaise ja sakte ho..hamari help karo..

Rajat: Kya sunai nahi de rha..tumhe to pata hai..muze sirf request sunai deti hai..

Anu: Please rajat plases hamari help karo..

Rajat gives his hand to her..but he also falls in that puddle..

Both somehow manages to stand up..

Anu: hume chalna chahiye..andhera bahot ho gaya..yahan rehna thik nahi hoga..

They stop infront of a house..A man comes out of that house..

Rajat: boss..yahan koi hotel milega kya??

Man: hotel hai par vo yahan se bahot durr hai...aur abi to andhera bhi ho gaya hai..iss waqt jungle se kahin bhi jaana thik nahi hoga..

they see a car over there..

Anu: Kya aap hume chhod sakte hai plz

Man: kash main chhod pata..mera night shift hai..muze der ho rahi..mere raste me kahin hotel nahi padega..vaise aap log newly married hai kya??

Anu: hum..kya baat kar rahe aap..naahi hum to

Before she could finish rajat puts his hand on her mouth..

Rajat: han hum pati-patni hai..hum apne honeymoon pe nikale the ki hamari car kharab ho gayi..kya aaj raat hum aapke ghar ruk sakte hai...plz..aap chahe to hamare identity proof le lijiye..aur ye kuch paise bhi rakh lijiye...

Man: Han thik hai..itni raat ko bhabhiji ka bahar rehna thik bhi nahi..thik hai aap log ruk jaye.meri wife apne mayke gayi hai..main kal subah tak vapas aa jaunga..tab tak aap ghar ka dhyan rakhna..

Man leaves from there..Anu-Rajat enters his house..

Anu: uff finally..kitne bhale aadmi the..anjan log ko ghar de diya rehne..pr aapne jhuth kyu bola..

Rajat: oh madam ye delhi hai..yahan koi ek ladka ek ladki ko ghar me akele rehne aise hi nahi de deta..pati patni nahi bolta to aaj raat jungle me hi katna padta..

after few minutes...both of them realise they are in dirty clothes..immediately they run towards washroom..

Rajat: Hato...pehle muze jane do..paise maine diye hai use..uss hisab se pehle mera haq hai..

Anu: kya..aapne suna nahi kya kabhi..ladies first..

Rajat: aur tumne kabhi nahi suna kya pati parmeshwar hota hai..hato aur iss parmeshwar i mean muze andar jane do..

Anu: kabhi nahi..hato muze jana hai..she pushes hard on his chest..

Rajat gets angry..he takes mug filled with water..and throws water on Anu's face..

Rajat; Lo jaldi jana tha na...ho gayi saaf tum..

Anu gets irrittated she takes a bucket filled with soapy water..and throws all soapy water on rajat..

Rajat: u...how dare u...wait..

Anu starts running..floor is very slippery bcz of soapy water spilled all over washrum

Anu slips bcz of water..rajat goes to save her..but he also falls down..

Rajat: Pagal ladki..tumhara naam jungalee billi nahi manhoss billi hona chahiye..

Anu: aapne fir hume billi kaha..ruko tum utho..fir hum tumhe batate hai ye billi kya kya kar sakti hai..

Rajat: kyu nahi..agar aap mere lap se uthe to main uthu na..

Anu realises she is in rajats lap..somehow rajat managed to save anu..so that she wont get hurt as much as rajat is having pain in his back rytnw...

Anu: M sorry..she stands up..she gives her hand to rajat..they start walking..as itz very slippery..again both of them slips..but this time rajat manages to control both of them..

Anu: Rajat chhodna nahi..hum gir jayenge..

Rajat: hahaha..fir to muze chhodna hi chahiye..

Anu: closes her eyes..nahi nahi rajat nahi...

Rajat holder her tightly..

Anu opens her eyes..and sees rajats has hold her tightly so that she doesnot fall..

Now Anus hand on rajats shoulder..rajats arms around her waist..

Both are feeling something for each other..but not able to figure out what is it..

Anu pov ( I was not like this before..Anu is in a man's arm..and se has no problem with it..she wants to stay in those arms forever..she wants those arms to save her from all her bad problems..she wants to look into those chocolaty eyes..this feeling are new for her..but her mind doesnot allow to accept it..bcz she doesnot trust anyone..)

Rajat pov ( Y I find her so beautiful..Gals are like toys for him..then y does he find anu as mystery..he wants to unfold her..he wants to see real anushka..her beautiful eyes..her soft silky hair..her skin like cream..her lips like rose petals..he has never seen beautyful girl like her..)

soon anu comes into her senses...They start walking..

Anu: ruko..lo mera hath pakad lo..lets walk slowly slowly..

They get out of washroom

Anu: Suno..ye lo towel..tum pehle ja sakte ho

rajat (Isse kya hua..yeh lad nahi rahi)

Anu: muze pata hai aap kya soch rahe..ab jab hume raat ek sath nikalni hai to..dosto ki tarah niklte hai..

Rajat: chalo kabhi to tum samazdari se kam le sakti ho..

He takes towel and goes into washroom

Anu goes in kitchen to make food for both of them..

After sometime rajat comes out of washroom..

Rajat: waah bahot acchi khushboo aa rahi..kya ban raha hai..lao jaldi do bahot bhukh lag rahi hai..

Anu: khana aise hi nahi milega uske liye kaam karna padega..

Rajat: bapre..kaisi patni ho..pati se kaam karwaogi..

Anu: kam nahi par pati patni ki help to kar sakta hai na..

Rajat: acha tumhe kaisa pati chahiye??

Anu: jo hamari iss kam me madat kare..jaisi ki tum abhi ye salad cut karna vale ho..humne cooker rakha hai..3 whistle bad band kar dena..hum fresh hoke aate hai..

Rajat: Jaise ki main??!!

Anu: Hamara vo matlab nahi tha rajat..

Rajat starts walking towards her..now with his every step forward is anus step backward..anu stops because of wall..rajat places his hand on both the sides of her shoulder..

Rajat: to tum muzme apna pati dhundhti ho..?

Anu: Nahi..hum to..

Raajat: Nah!!!

Anu: Han...

Rajat: Han...!!

Anu: Nahi..matlab han bolne k liye..nahi matlab nah bolne k liye han nah han bola...

Rajat: shhh..he keeps his finger on her lips..

Rajat: Tumhe pata hai aaj hamari honemoon hai..pata hai na honemoon pe husband wife ke bich kya hota hai..tumhe darr to nahi lag raha...??

Anu: Daarrr aur aapse..bilkul nahi..

Rajat: To prove karo..jo main bolunga vo karo..

Anu: all lost in her chocolaty eyes..r...raja...

Rajat: ye pati chahta hai ki uski wife...

Anu: ki...

Rajat...ki..uski wife...

jake bath le..bahot dirty ho gayi hai..stink kar rahi hai...

Anu comes into her senses..she has turned all red now..

rajat starts laughing hahahhaa..

ANu takes her towel and leaves from there..

Rajat: suno..wifel..thik se nahana..muze gandagi bilkul pasand nahi..🤣



Precap:

Anu: Rajat vahan kaun hai?

Rajat: MAt dekho anu..tum nahi dekh paugi..tum dekhogi to darr jaungi..

Anu holds rajats shoulder tightly..she digs her face into his chest..

Anu: Rajat use bhagao na...gayi kya vo..

Rajat: nahi vo to yahin aa rahi hai..

Anu : nahii...

Rajat laughs slowly..

anu gets scared..she hold him more tightly..Rajat all lost in her...

Edited by shashi05 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey friends I have updated part 4 of my ff..I hope I have not disappointed you...please read and give ur warm warm ffedback..
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Posted: 10 years ago
mygod shashi superb update.like the way rajat calld anu junglee billi thn car conversation,pati patni oh my god evrythn was hilarious aftr thy reachd, their nok jok evrythng was fabullous osum update superb 😳 precap anu hold tightly nd rajat lost i m waiting
😉 wow wow wow 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shakku17

mygod shashi superb update.like the way rajat calld anu junglee billi thn car conversation,pati patni oh my god evrythn was hilarious aftr thy reachd, their nok jok evrythng was fabullous osum update superb 😳 precap anu hold tightly nd rajat lost i m waiting
😉 wow wow wow 😃

thank you so much dear..thanx for such a warm feedback..🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
u know i feel so good partner we are so good writers i have stories😳, leela has language😃, waida has naughtiness,😉 jyothi has her oomph factor ☺️aur tunne bhi prove kar diya if its anuraj, paagal panti bhi zaruri hai re, this was such a good update mad one coming back to the story- anu toh rajat ko kaatne ko daudi loafer bola😲 phir their drive ladte ladte atak hi gaye jungle mein😉 haaye rajat ki junglee billi😳, anu rajat husband wife haa woh bhi raatko ek ghar mein akele i really expect it too be mad yet hot and romantic☺️, the bathroom scene was bang on mazaa aagaya phir kitchen convo was something they will even do it in the future and every bit was having special shashi ka touch👍🏼, it was really good!👏🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
ek aur baat mujhe pata hai precap mein anu ko darr kyon lag rahaa tha😉
Edited by poorva22 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: poorva22

u know i feel so good partner we are so good writers i have stories😳, leela has language😃, waida has naughtiness,😉 jyothi has her oomph factor ☺️aur tunne bhi prove kar diya if its anuraj, paagal panti bhi zaruri hai re, this was such a good update mad one coming back to the story- anu toh rajat ko kaatne ko daudi loafer bola😲 phir their drive ladte ladte atak hi gaye jungle mein😉 haaye rajat ki junglee billi😳, anu rajat husband wife haa woh bhi raatko ek ghar mein akele i really expect it too be mad yet hot and romantic☺️, the bathroom scene was bang on mazaa aagaya phir kitchen convo was something they will even do it in the future and every bit was having special shashi ka touch👍🏼, it was really good!👏🤗

thank you so much partner... u know na nothing was possible bcz of u..so thank you for encouraging me to write...🤗
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Originally posted by: poorva22

ek aur baat mujhe pata hai precap mein anu ko darr kyon lag rahaa tha😉

I know u can read my mind...if you have any idea share it with me..and han u r going to get ur fav anuraj barish dance...wait for next update

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