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Happy Valentines Day to everyone . Those who have partners may enjoy their day with their partners and those who don't have a valentine may enjoy with their beautiful parents 😳



HaYa OS - Treasure Hunt



"Damn ... Another tiring and a busy day for me" , Harman said exhausted while sitting on his chair and loosening his tie a bit

Harman Singh was a very famous business magnate . He was the owner of many hotel and restaurants and besides that , he owned many other companies in the field of technology , media , clothing's named either after his parents or his wife Saumya . He was one true and a finest creation of god , whom god has made with lots of efforts in free time . A respected person , obedient and a loving son , romantic and a dutiful husband , a best friend and everything that a person wish to have as qualities in his/her life .

But , with boon always comes the bane and so even Harman has 2 sides of the coin to witness . Being a famous personality comes with its own shares of problems and so even Harman couldn't escape the disadvantages he has to face . This romantic husband because of his new project dint get enough time in hand to spend the different 7 days which comes before the valentine's day . And now even his 14th February seems to be clouded with uncertainty of work and busy schedule .

But being this much busy doesn't means that he forgot the dates or dint expressed his romantic side to his wife . Since he is busy with his new project therefore he comes home very late at night and by that time the whole house is sleeping in a deep slumber . When rose day came , he came home so late that by that time Saumya was in a very deep sleep and Harman dint wanted to wake up his beautiful wife who was looking so innocent while sleeping . So he just placed the rose on the bedside table with a letter saying "Happy Rose Day Gulabo" and after that kissed his wife's forehead and slept cuddling her in his protective embrace . Then by morning he got up so early before the house could wake up , and after getting ready he went to office to start his work since the project was something which has taken away Harman's sleep . So he couldn't even spend some quality time with his Gulabo and that is how his other 7 days before valentine's day went . Even kiss day was something that happened in a hurry . As usual Harman came late last night and so with a forehead kiss only they had to manage .

Somewhere Harman kept on feeling bad that he was not able to celebrate those 7 days properly and now even his valentine's day was a big question mark . Besides that Harman hasn't planned anything as a surprise or a gift for 14th to surprise Saumya and so , this was also adding more to his sad and guilty form . And now today is 13th Feb's evening and tomorrow is valentine's day and still Harman is busy with his office staff .


*After few minutes*

*Harman's cabin*

"Sir ! There is a parcel for you" , Varun his assistant said and handed a small box which was nicely wrapped with a red color paper having lots of hearts drawn over it .

Harman very nicely unwrapped the gift box and found a letter with a fresh red rose sticked to it . He opened the letter and an instant smile crept over his handsome face . The letter was written in a very beautiful handwriting by his beloved Gulabo .

Dear Pati

I know you have been very busy with your new project and because of that we couldn't get quality time to spend our days before the valentine's day . But worry not my sweet husband , because this time your beautiful Gulabo is going to make your , and our valentine a very romantic and a stupendous one .

But my darling husband this valentines will not only be a romantic one but will also be full of treasure hunting . Yes ! This valentine , the hero that is you will have to scratch your brains to solve some clues to get your invaluable treasure , that is your Gulabo . So my sweetheart pati since you love adventure so let's play this Treasure Hunt game . All the best my Handsome man .

With lots of sweet kisses

Your treasure "Gulabo"

"Not bad Gulabo . That is why your Harman loves you so much . So let's play the Gulabo hunt game" , and saying so Harman folded the letter and kept it in the box while he pinned the rose on his shirts pocket


*After few minutes*


"Sir ! There is another parcel for you" , and saying so Varun handed Harman another parcel which was again a small box wrapped in a red color paper with lots of hearts drawn over it .

Does Harman Singh needs to guess that who must have sent this small parcel ?? No ... Because he very well knows that now the Gulabo (treasure) Hunt game has begun . Harman again very nicely unwrapped the box to find a paper with a red rose sticking on it . He again took that rose and pinned it in his shirt's pocket and excitedly opened the folded paper to get his first clue .

Hello Handsome ,

Let's start the hunt for celebrating the valentine's day . So here is your 1st clue and after guessing the right thing you will get your next clue at that point -

"A feeling where we forget all our tensions

A place where we get everyone's attention

But there is a twist to your first clue

Since this place doesn't belongs to you "

"Gulabo ! Your innocence is one of the qualities that just makes me fall for you more and more" , Harman said to himself with a chuckle after reading the clue .


"There is spa , a nature like place , home , temples/church and park where we forget our tension and find peace . But then in spa , park , temple/church we don't get anyone's attention" , Harman said after few minutes of brainstorming


"Hmmm ... So there is only one place where we get everyone's attention and no tension , and that is 'home' . But according to your clue this place doesn't belongs to me and so it means that you're not talking about my home . Then whose home are you talking about ??" , Harman said to himself while playing with the paperweight kept on his table .


"Ohk ... Other than my home you don't know anybody else's home and other than your home you don't go to anyone else's house ... Wait ... Your house ... Eureka Eureka ... So this place doesn't belongs to me but your house belongs to you ... Ohh yes ..." , and saying so Harman happily did a summersault dance in his heart and took his car keys to go to Saumya's house to get his second clue .

"Sir ! Is there anything urgent ?? You're going all of a sudden somewhere ??" , confused Varun asked Harman on seeing Harman passing a 440 volt smile , as soon as he entered his cabin to get his sign on some files

"Yes Varun . And listen just tell the whole staff that they can go to their home and tomorrow we will continue with the work . Its anyways 7pm "

"But Sir ! The project ... " , before Varun could complete his sentence , Harman said

"Varun ! I have to celebrate 14th February and that is why I'm going . So tell the staff to continue the work tomorrow" , and saying so Harman left from his office to Maninder's house


*Saumya's house*

*Knock Knock*

"Oye Nimmi ! Just see who is there at the door" , Maninder said while changing the channel on TV

"Mannu ! I'm washing utensils so my hands are dirty so you only see that who is there at the door"

"Ohk my love" , and saying so Maninder got up from the sofa and went to open the door

"Harman beta ! Welcome to home . Come in"

"Umm ... Dad actually I am in a hurry to go so can you just give me the parcel which your daughter has left for me"

"Parcel ... Which parcel are you talking about son ??" , Maninder asked confused

"This whole family is filled with actors . Stop your acting dad and please give me the parcel which Saumya has kept for me"

"But Harman , there is no such parcel and neither Somu told us about any such thing . By the way son , what is so special about that parcel for which you are getting so eager" , Maninder said with a tease to Harman

"Mannu ... Stop teasing him ... Come in Harman .. Be seated and I'll bring the parcel" , Nimmi said coming towards mannu and hitting him playfully on his shoulder

"Kya yaar Nimmi ... Such a good scene was going on between dad and son . I was on the verge of fooling Harman and coming to know that what was there in the parcel , but you just spoiled it and took Harman's side . For once take your husband's side also "

"Hehehehe ... That is why I love Nimmi so much . Thanks mom for always sticking by my side . Poor dad " , Harman said with a tease to Maninder

Nimmi bought the parcel for Harman and he hastily unwrapped the box to again find a letter sticking with a red rose . Again Harman kept the red rose in his pocket and started to read the letter

Congratulations my handsome man ,

I knew it that you will find the first clue very soon since my man is not only dashing but is also extremely clever . So here is your 2nd clue -

" This was something that we loved doing together

It was a great source of our romantic leisure

The fun and romance we used to do

Is the next place to get your clue"

This one is a bit tricky Gulabo" , Harman said to himself


"What is so tricky Harman ?" ,Nimmi asked a confused Harman


"Nothing mom ... I'll just take your leave now" , and with that Harman bid adieu to Saumya's parents and left from there .


*In car*


"Gulabo ! This time you have given a tricky clue . The only thing that we loved doing together was sex and it was fun , romantic and filled with leisure" , Harman said with a smile reminiscing those moments where they were engaged in their romantic world


"But , how can a sex give me the next clue ?? So it has to be something else ... Think Mr. Business magnate think ... What can be that thing which me and Saumya loved doing together ??"


"There have been so many things that we loved to indulge in like painting , listening music , playing chess and ludo , going for couple's cooking session and gardening . But amongst all these things , majority of the romantic things were done in our home and particularly our room . And as far as I know you Gulabo , then you won't be giving me a clue which will again lead me to home , so it has to be something outside our home and the only thing that we did together outside home is couple's cooking session lessons ... Fine ... Let's go to that hotel to see if I get my next clue there or not , else I'll have to come back home to get my clues" , and saying so Harman drove to "The Oberoi Hotel"


*The Oberoi Hotel , Reception*


"Hello Mr. Singh ! Welcome to The Oberoi . How can I help you sir ?" , the receptionist asked him with a dreamy look


"Miss Neha ! Is there any parcel on my name here ??" , Harman asked the lady after seeing her name plate


"Sir let me check"


"Yes Sir ! There was a parcel on your name . Please sign here and go to left towards the kitchen area"


"Yess ... Great , now I won't have to drive to home to get my clue . Thanks a lot Miss Neha" , and with this Harman went in a jet speed towards the kitchen area


Well to be precise then 4 months back there was an advertisement for cooking session to be held at The Oberoi by expert and famous chefs and that is when Saumya decided to enroll her and Harman's name for this cooking session since she wanted to spend some fun time with Harman and being engaged in such activities always increase the bond between the partners . So Saumya told Harman about this cooking session and Harman was more than ready to spend some romantic time with his Gulabo and do every sorts of mischiefs with her . The chefs were highly surprised to see the magnate with his wife at their cooking classes but Harman being an outspoken one told them on their faces to teach less recipes and take their own sweet time in completing every recipe so that he gets ample time to romance and do mischief with his wife . After hearing these words not only chefs but the other ladies present in that room were in awe of Harman . It was always interesting to watch the other ladies ogling at Harman and Saumya passing every one of them an angry glare which meant that - this handsome man is only mine so dare not to eye him' . Half the time Harman and Saumya would use to have fun at cooking session by teasing each other , chopping veggies together , helping each other in cooking , applying sweet things like condensed milk or cream on each other's face etc etc .


Harman went to the cooking area and the incharge of that place after meeting him gave him a small box and left from there . Harman again nicely unwrapped the box and kept the rose in his pocket and started reading his next clue .


Well done my husband

Not bad Harman .. So you successfully completed the second clue also . Now here is your last clue to reach your treasure Gulabo -

"This place is far from the hotel

A place which has always casted a magical spell

Something so picturesque to view

Come soon Harman , I'm waiting for you"

"Hmm Gulabo ... This place is easy to guess since we both love this place so much" , and saying so Harman drove towards that place .


Well this place has always been a favorite place for both of them and they both loved to go to this place for long drive and spend quality time being together in each other's embrace .


*Deep inside the forest*

*Saumya's POV*

I was waiting for Harman to show up at the right time because I had planned that as soon as clock strikes 12 , then I'll surprise Harman . But it's going to be 11.30 and within half an hour 14th Feb will start but Harman hasn't reached yet . Though I know that my man is extremely smart so he will easily solve the clues and come to me with his dashing dimpled smile and those love filled eyes which is just reserved for me , but where is he ?? I can't even call him since I want to feel that excitement and happiness of seeing him here all of a sudden . But time is passing in a jet speed and there is no trace of my romantic husband .


It's always Harman who would surprise me every day with his romantic gestures like daily making the morning bed tea for both of us inspite of having so many cooks , always leaving me cute notes before going to office like how much he loves me or how much he is eager for night to come so that he can be with me or how he can't wait to come back home to go for shopping or on a date with me etc etc , painting my nails and doing nail art , then those couple cooking session , gardening , playing games , together learning the skate dance at home with youtube's help and once Harman surprised me with something extra ordinary thing - Once Harman had to go to Norway for his business meeting and I was all alone with Preeto and Harak Singh at home . I was missing him so much that most of the time I was just quiet in the house . So Preeto called up Harman and told him to make his daughter-in-law smile and that is when Harman surprised me . He placed an ad in the classified declaring that "My beautiful wife , I love you more than myself and very soon I'll be back . Till then miss me and keep smiling because I can't see you sad" . The next day when the newspaper arrived then everyone was passing me a smile and when I read the newspaper then I came to know the reason why everyone was smiling . His everyday romantic gestures would make my day .


But this time because of his very important project he dint get enough time to spend with me and even our days before valentines couldn't be spent in a proper way . So I decided that this time I'll surprise him and shower all my love on him and after a lot of brainstorming for a month , finally I got this idea of treasure hunt valentine .


"Uhhh ... Come on Harman .. How long will you make your beautiful wife wait for Valentines ?" , I said impatiently by looking time and again towards the entrance



*After 10 minutes a loud sound of screeching tyres comes from a distance*

"Finally , Harman has arrived" , I said with an excitement and hid behind the long tree to look at Harman

Harman stepped out of the car and was looking all confused with the place and darkness . He started looking all around to see his morning sunshine and night's moon - his Gulabo .


*Saumya's POV*

I let out a soft chuckle on seeing Harman looking here and there with a confused face . He was looking damn cute with that confused look that I just wanted to kiss him .


I put on the lights and all of a sudden the darkness was surrounded by illuminating lights . The place was looking so serene and heavenly with the radiance and luster all around that it looked like a beautiful panorama . The forest scape looked so tranquil in this decorated lights , and the water flowing nearby was giving a glittering reflection of tress , rocks , decorated lights , and mine , that it was a beautiful scene . Harman turned towards the source of light coming from deep inside the forest and he started walking towards the direction of light . The expressions of his confused face was first replaced by a startled expression and then by an ecstatic expression . He kept on looking at his surrounding with a daze while walking . I stealthily without making any noise went back to my place where I had decorated everything .


And lo behold ! There was my handsome man standing with a dazzling smile on his face . Even in his tried form he looks damn irresistible . He took slow steps towards me without breaking the eye contact .



*Harman's POV*

Finally after solving the last clue I have reached to my priceless treasure - my Gulabo . As soon I stopped the car near the forest area , then all I could see was darkness . Though I was confident that I have solved the clue correctly but when I entered near the forest then it was all black dark . Suddenly the lights switched on and the sight around me made me feel so happy and emotional at the same time . I know my Gulabo is romantic but this much romantic was something beyond my imagination . The whole forest was so stupendously decorated that I was walking in a daze . It looked like some fairytale place to me with such a prodigious decoration .


The whole path from the forests entrance to the place where my Gulabo was standing was decorated with the rose petals which was outlined by candles . The flower and the candle path guided me to my treasure while the tress were decorated with fancy and colorful designer lights where some tress had red hearts sticking to it while some tress had huge red hearts hanging on it and ending just above my head . On reaching few feets away from Gulabo was written "I love you Harman" with candles . There was a perfect setup of a dinner date with a table and 2 chairs few feets away from the low waterfall which was reflecting everything so crystal clear . Few curtains of red and golden color were hanging around the table which were tied from the tree with dark purple bows and all around the setup , red rose , daisy and orchids were spread beautifully like a bedsheet on the floor . There were some dinner , a champagne and 2 glasses beautifully set on the table .


Gosh !!! Gulabo has just raised the bar in being romantic . After intensely looking at the surrounding my eyes landed on my possession - my Gulabo . She was looking so breathtaking that for a moment I actually forgot to breathe . Wearing a red color net saree with black border and minimal makeup and her straight hairs freely flowing on her left shoulder was making her look so captivating like an enchantress that I couldn't take my eyes off from her . She started reducing the distance between us .

"What happened my handsome man ??? You'll just keep on looking at me or you would say something ??"


"I never knew my Gulabo was this much romantic" , Harman held my waist and came closer to me


"What to do pati ... This is what you have done to me in your love" , I said while snaking my arms around his neck


"By the way Harman why are you so late ??"


"Because I had to find something suitable that can match my treasure ... But then there is nothing in this world that can match my treasure's love , still I got something for my treasure . Though it won't be able to match you and your love for me , but it will compliment you and also it will make you feel that I'm always with you and you will never miss me . So selecting that thing took some time .

"Harman there is only one thing in this world that can match your treasure Gulabo's love - and that is "your love" , I said cupping Harman's face

"I know that Gulabo"

"So Mr. Romantic ! Where is that thing which you bought for me ??" , I asked him looking excited

"Such an impatient wife you are Gulabo" , Harman said with a soft chuckle and took out a box from his jacket's pocket and forwarded the box towards me .


*Saumya's POV*

Harman handed me a box which was nicely wrapped with a blue color paper . I excitedly tore the wrapper to see my gift . When it comes to opening the gifts then I'm the most impatient person on this planet . The excitement and curiosity to see the gift makes me always tear the gift paper unlike Harman who would nicely unwrap the gift paper as if he is gonna re-use that gift paper .

I opened the gift box and there was a rose in it . I took out the rose to see something sparkling inside the petals . I brought the rose closer to my face to see that sparkling thing and I was surprised and looked at Harman with adoration . There was a beautiful platinum ring with "I Love You Gulabo" inscribed on it and outlined by diamonds . This has to be the best ring and surprise for me .


Harman took out the ring from the petals , went on his knees and made me wear that ring in my ring finger


"I know Saumya that this ring is beautiful but it's not beautiful than you" , Harman said while sliding down the ring in my finger and kissed my hand


"Harman ! I love you . You are everything to me and this ring is just depicting our love" , I said to him and hugged him tightly


"Gulabo ! I can do anything to see that beautiful smile on your face , but here for the first time you are crying with my gift . Is this gift that bad??" , Harman said with a tease to make me smile but Harman's loving gestures just always makes me emotional . At times I feel that how can I be this lucky to get a sweet , caring and a romantic husband . But sometimes good things happen to everybody in life .


"What to do Harman ?? Your love always makes me emotional and by each passing day my love for you just keeps on increasing"


"Gulabo..." , Harman said to me pulling me so closer that now not even air can pass between us and our heartbeats could be heard so clearly


"Hmmm"


"Happy Valentine's Day" , Harman said in my ears leaning on my shoulder and gave a soft kiss on my cheek


I parted from him and looked at the wrist watch to see that it was 12.05 AM . I snaked my arms on Harman's neck and stood on my toes and gave a long passionate kiss until we both fell short of breathe .


"Happy Valentine's Day Harman" , I said after parting from that long soulful kiss


"Gulabo will I get something to eat because I'm starving"


"Yes ... Lets cut the cake and then we can have food"


"By the way Gulabo ! Did anyone tell you this that you have set a new benchmark in romanticism ?? infact you have even surpassed my level of romance" , Harman said while snaking his arms on my waist and walking towards the table with my head kept on his chest .


"Harman before we cut the cake will you do one thing with me??"


"Of course Gulabo !! I'm always ready to do that thing with you anywhere" , Harman said with a naughty tease


I came closer to Harman and stood on my toes and came near to his ear , "Harman! I'm not talking about that thing but something else"


Harman's face fell and I just pulled his cheeks . I bought a sapling and held Harman's hand and brought him towards one of the tree


"Harman ! This tree represents the love between us that will grow over the years and it will always remain here telling our love story and this valentine's day to the world . Our love will always be like this tree - fresh , young , strong and full of care and love . Let's plant this sapling together for our forever love" , and saying so we both planted that tree together


"I love you gulabo . I just love you so much that even love word is short to tell my feelings for you and so this tree will always tell us how much we love each other"


"I love you to Harman . Now come and have some food


And that was how we celebrated our romantic day ...






Ignore all kinds of error & do comment to encourage me 😊


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ishu I love u
Thank u for this
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For the one moment I thought I'm in HaYa's world, wow Superb amazing mind blowing post,Really loved it...
Edited by PareezaySheikh - 8 years ago
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Happy Valentine's Day dear...😊

Wow...so well written...dil khush kar diya..
so beautifully winding up in the forest...
kash we had to get any such scenes..
out of the Singh household...Would have
loved to see this busy businessman
involved in a million things ...nonetheless
knowing and loving the love of his heart.
😳




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Thanks a lot Ishu
U made my day
Thanks for this gift for today valentines day
Love u Ishu
Haya
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Awesome and Beautiful story ishu..
Romantic haya..
Jo show ma nahi milta wo story ma mil jata hai..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful story..
love u for being a great writter..
Love the way haya celebrated their valentine day... 😳
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Wow ishu it's a marvellous story my sweetheart am still in haya land
Thanx for this special HaYa os on this special day
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Originally posted by: sparklingeyes

Ishu I love u

Thank u for this


Thanks a lot Bhawu 😳😳😳 Love you too ❤️
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Originally posted by: PareezaySheikh

For the one moment I thought I'm in HaYa's world, wow Superb amazing mind blowing post,Really loved it...


Thanks Pari . I'm glad that you liked it and went to HaYa's land for some time 😳😳

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