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"They are planning to marry me again Soumya" Harman spoke to Soumya as he sat with her in garden, this become their new routine since the day Soumya spoke to him there and then hugged him. Every night they sit for a while in the garden and talk about any thing and every thing. Soumyas face fell listening to what he said , but she consoled her self "Thats really nice.. You should make your family happy too.. they are already worried because of me."
Harman nodded "Thats true, but this time I want to be thorough, i don't want to get some one like Mahi again. My wife should accept my friend whole heartedly." Soumyas heart broke when she heard that word again... how can she ever tell him that she doesn't want to be his friend, but his gulabo when she never had a right. She turned her face to a side so that she can wipe her tears. Harman who is looking at moon didn't see her tears. Soumya spoke "Harman ji, I am sleepy. Shall we go and sleep." Harman looked at her confused, however nodded . Soumya continued to look at him as she lied on bed, but turned her face away when he looked at her and pretended as she slept.

Next day morning...

Harman woke up to see an empty made up bed, he searched for Soumya in whole house and saw her doing some work in garden. He smiled as he looked at her, she is always at her happiest when she is with plants. He wondered is she even knows how much she loves plants. He planned to gift her few knew plants, in coming days. He went to her "Boom" Soumya looked at him startled "Harman ji, you scared me." He smirked "I just wanted to see a pure expression on your face other than sadness. Offlate there is nothing but sadness on your face." She nodded but her face became blank " Harman ji, I forgot but I have some work in kitchen .. " Not even giving him a time to reply she left..

On other day

"Soumya" Soumya looked at Harman "Ji?" Harman smiled "Shall we go to garden , I am bored.."

Soumya shook her head in No "Sorry Harman ji, but I need to do few things."

Harman shrugged "No problem, I will wait for you."

Soumya again shook her head "Nahi ji, I am tired, I will sleep as soon as I complete my work."

Harman nodded and she left. He went to his room and waited for Soumya to arrive... many hours passed but she didn't come, getting worried he went to look for her in kitchens, garden, wash area and all places. But she was found no where. On his way back he saw one of the guest bed rooms door ajar and went inside to see Soumya sleeping there. Not understanding what was happening he came to his room and opened cupboards to see all her things are gone.He can understand she is avoiding him but why? He wanted to know some answers from her.

He called for Soumya the next day morning while she is working in garden.. "Why did you shift to other room." She didn't even glanced at him, she continued to do her work " Mummy ji said me to shift to other room, I can't stay forever in your room na.. Now that you are going to get married." Harman got irritated "Who asked you to listen to Preeto. Its dangerous for you to stay in other room when you have enemies all through the house." Soumya spoke calmly "I am fine Harman ji, nothing will happen to me. Don't worry." Harman shook her " Why are you avoiding me Soumya?"
Soumya looked at him confused "I am not avoiding you Harman ji. I am just trying to be the friend you told me to be." Saying that she got her self relieved from his grip and went inside.

Harman drank a lot, he replayed Soumyas words again and again in his mind... he want her to be his friend , but also he want her much more closer. He nodded to him self and went to the room where he knew Soumya is staying . He knocked door and as she opened he almost fell on her " Soumya, just be with me like you are before. Don't be this cold to me. " Soumya have tears in her eyes , she remained silent. He continued speaking " I can't bear it when you are formal to me, it feels really empty when I don't see you following me every where, I want you to be with me every minute Soumya." She have tears in her eyes "What relation does we have for me to stay with you every minute Harman ji. Your wife won't accept it."

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Posted: 8 years ago
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beautiful OS ...
well Done ..
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U made me cry Hari
Its beautiful
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Awesome dear Hari!!! Please continue it...
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very beautifully written focusing on Harman's Friendship and Saumya's Relationship

Saumya loves Harman, only Harman, Not bec he is her Husband, ...even though it started his relationship with her as her Husband, but now Harman has taken a special place in her heart which nobody can take

while Harman looking forward to his married life with a boyish charm, must hv not imagined this drastic storm in his life, gave him big jolt...
but those stolen 21 days with Somu slowly started to grow on him, bec Somu was his only love & he was already attracted to her innocence...she took over his heart first & last time...

now all that pressure from parents & his duty towards his parents, makes him perplexed in his feelings towards Somu...

And I liked all few dialogues he said while making tea, and other one he said he has become more attached to Somu now, its definitely is not Friendship or his responsibility towards Somu but his deep feelings of Lost Love is emerging out now...

Srorm is about erupt now, which had become dormant, pushing is from his family




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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: zubeada

beautiful OS ...

well Done ..

Thank u darling...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Will wait for reply then😉😆
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Originally posted by: sparklingeyes

U made me cry Hari

Its beautiful

Bhavana dear am sorry re...
thanks for compliment any way...
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Thanks a lot dear

Originally posted by: soul76

Awesome dear Hari!!! Please continue it...

Yaar I wrote it as a OS... I will try to post similar scenes in future when the idea strikes me
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: MaryamMary

very beautifully written focusing on Harman's Friendship and Saumya's Relationship

Saumya loves Harman, only Harman, Not bec he is her Husband, ...even though it started his relationship with her as her Husband, but now Harman has taken a special place in her heart which nobody can take

while Harman looking forward to his married life with a boyish charm, must hv not imagined this drastic storm in his life, gave him big jolt...
but those stolen 21 days with Somu slowly started to grow on him, bec Somu was his only love & he was already attracted to her innocence...she took over his heart first & last time...

now all that pressure from parents & his duty towards his parents, makes him perplexed in his feelings towards Somu...

And I liked all few dialogues he said while making tea, and other one he said he has become more attached to Somu now, its definitely is not Friendship or his responsibility towards Somu but his deep feelings of Lost Love is emerging out now...

Srorm is about erupt now, which had become dormant, pushing is from his family




Thanks Maryam... yes the show took a huge leap forward from when it was introduced.. A girl who was sheltered and innocent come to understand her life and also about the society around her and also found her love. A guy who is always boyish and irresponsible became responsible ... They both love each other, but can't express because of the barriers between them.. I want them to break those barriers and express it to each other. Yes the storm is coming but I want them to get high above the storm and unite.

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