Tumhain apna banane ka junoon sar pey hai. ff chp 7 updated 11.12.16 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry for late comment.. So, praise will be more as compensation as your episode is marvellous! Please don't be shy.

New way of excitement for Saumya when she boarded on flight for the first time. Ya! everybody won't clap as its a mixed feelings for her. New life and new journey is already initiated for beloved HaYa.

Harman, banda bilkul hero hai... Though he is staying in Gurdaspur, still he managed to get an accommodation for them. Too many contacts he has in London.. He he! Hand squeezing while drinking coffee, lovely move Harman. Not only his wife but also he is one of a kind even.

Everything has beauty, but not everyone sees it. Isn't it true? only Harman can view his wife's real beauty. And the lingerie section is too lovely and sexy to handle. I can literally imagine Harman's drooling over Somu! This is the best part of your writing. You can force viewers to imagine the moments just like viewers are in theater to watch a live scene.

Then after the examination is done, both lost words to communicate. These two days are freaking for both HaYa. but again our hero made the night extra romantic. The face is a picture of the mind with the eyes as its interpreter. And Harman through his eyes can kill us but Saumya is killing him with her appearance. The night is so so so romantic that if I will describe it then its charm will reduce.

Art is the overflow of emotion into action. For me, you are an artist.. Decode this and you will know how much I liked this update!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
super-duper update
soumya nd Harman both are in tension for report so Harman is trying to relax soumya...hope report will be in Haya side
soumya never done shopping before but Harman is ther so no worry dear...o God never think Harman will be soo naughty 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Kashish_shine

Sorry for late comment.. So, praise will be more as compensation as your episode is marvellous! Please don't be shy. I won't dear 😊

New way of excitement for Saumya when she boarded on flight for the first time. Ya! everybody won't clap as its a mixed feelings for her. New life and new journey is already initiated for beloved HaYa.

I had so wanted them to be away from the family drama and try and life a normal life which Soumya desperately needs right now so does poor Harman.

Harman, banda bilkul hero hai... Though he is staying in Gurdaspur, still he managed to get an accommodation for them. Too many contacts he has in London.. He he! Hand squeezing while drinking coffee, lovely move Harman. Not only his wife but also he is one of a kind even.

Oh yeah his transition to London was pretty smooth eh! Hand squeezing while sipping coffee he knows everything is new for her, he wants her to feel comfortable plus banda hai bhi to romantic na!

Everything has beauty, but not everyone sees it. Isn't it true? only Harman can view his wife's real beauty. And the lingerie section is too lovely and sexy to handle. I can literally imagine Harman's drooling over Somu! This is the best part of your writing. You can force viewers to imagine the moments just like viewers are in theater to watch a live scene.

Aw am so happy that what I envision is aptly put on paper for readers to share my vision that's what a good writer wants anyway. Lingerie well I needed to diffuse the medical info with some light moments :)

Then after the examination is done, both lost words to communicate. These two days are freaking for both HaYa. but again our hero made the night extra romantic. The face is a picture of the mind with the eyes as its interpreter. And Harman through his eyes can kill us but Saumya is killing him with her appearance. The night is so so so romantic that if I will describe it then its charm will reduce.

Aw yeah the night was romantic and special I'll give you a few more romantic moments before I end it!

Art is the overflow of emotion into action. For me, you are an artist.. Decode this and you will know how much I liked this update!

I tried my best to decode it lol. Thanks for the praise and sweet comments.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Supervampire

super-duper update

soumya nd Harman both are in tension for report so Harman is trying to relax soumya...hope report will be in Haya side
soumya never done shopping before but Harman is ther so no worry dear...o God never think Harman will be soo naughty 😉


Thanks dear! Yup they both are tensed 😆 well yeah of course. Well to be honest I never saw Somu shopping also Soumya once said maa aap mujhey kahin baahar jaaney nahin deti. I do hope someday Harman does all this in the show would love to see that on HaYa. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: soul76


Thanks dear! Yup they both are tensed 😆 well yeah of course. Well to be honest I never saw Somu shopping also Soumya once said maa aap mujhey kahin baahar jaaney nahin deti. I do hope someday Harman does all this in the show would love to see that on HaYa. 😊


I want too watch Haya shopping...hope someday we will see
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56



Missing accomplished.. My friend isn't shy. BTW, may I know your name? else I have to call you soul.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
This is beautiful
RS NEEDS TO TAKE IDEAS FROM HERE

I hope she reads this and see how amazing you are
like seriously this is beautiful

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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
@ Kashish my name is Muneeza you can call me by my name 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Fainting...Please let me recover...
Seriously Muneeza...am speechless...where are
you...its time you take your writing seriously...
so so beautiful...cannot express...this should
reach RS...am sure she'll grab the entire scenes..
loved every description of Saumya's nervousness
at flying first time, excitement...shopping...all.. You
really have a way of describing things well..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: anitarani

Fainting...Please let me recover...

Seriously Muneeza...am speechless...where are
you...its time you take your writing seriously...
so so beautiful...cannot express...this should
reach RS...am sure she'll grab the entire scenes..
loved every description of Saumya's nervousness
at flying first time, excitement...shopping...all.. You
really have a way of describing things well..


Aw thanks Anita, I so envision HaYa like the the most sweet loving couple. Soumya is extremely innocent she doesn't know how things work and yes Harman will definitely have a fab time in introducing her to the world. I want them to have faith trust and so much of love. I do hope RS takes all my scenes 😳😳

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