Say you are mine. Short HaYa ff part 25 (3.10.2016)

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soul76

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Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: ushasri
wow great update dear👍🏼

finally harman mystery solved how painful it is😭
poor harman and soumya will take away sadness in his life
happy finally harman not allowed soumya to go away

thanks a lot dear, I was apprehensive writing about such an apprehensive topic but I am glad it was understood by you guys.

yes Harman has dealt with a lot of pain in his life and Soumya will help him come around. 😊

I believe harman understands that he wants her to be a part of his life now and he wants her the right way.

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soul76

@soul76

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: sparklingeyes
That was a tragic past of Harman.. No doubt he doesn't bother about anyone feelings in his family n treats kaka like his father..
I love this straight forward way of saumya.. She doesn't hesitate to say anything she feels..
This purity of her heart n her innocence surely made harman fall for her
I can feel those moments especially the ones in the last paragraph... U write it so beautifully
I so wish such a scene is given in the show(HaYa confrontation) or they take ur story n create a recarnation track for HaYa in the show
I cannot wait 4 next update.. Write it ASAP 😃

Yes dear Harman's past has indeed been tragic and it has made him ruthless to an extent but Harman' to the core has always been a sensitive individual and Soumya has to unearth that Harman from the facade he has become. I always wanted the serial Soumya to be like this confident hopefully she might with time. I do like women to be empowered specially in terms of making decisions and here Soumya has free will to stay or leave, what she chooses will be her decision not Harman's or anyone else's.

I am so glad I am able to paint a vivid picture for you I truly do want more intimate HaYa scenes one thing that I think this show lacks is the romance quotient you don't have to go overboard but we haven't seen Soumya and Harman intimate at all. The few scenes we got were awkward due to Soumya's inability to understand Harman and then of course the Kinnar raaz. I do wish creatives would use some of my scenes.

Thanks for the lovely comments.😊

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soul76

@soul76

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: _Ms.Funnybee_
Such a painful and emotional update.
Loved it so much.
My god harman's past is so harsh.
Only saumya's pure love can heal him.
They are each other's salvation.
This update brought tears in my eyes.
Ur an incredible author.
Continue soon.
I mostly log in on IF to check first whether u have updated or not.
U have literally got me addicted to this story and ur fabulous way of writing.
Thanks for this wonderful story.

Thank you dear for your sweet comments. Harman's past was indeed harsh and now Soumya needs to bring him out of it. I am pleasantly surprised that my writing touched you to such an extent as to bring tears to your eyes I am deeply humbled. I do so appreciate your appreciation of my work. I am thinking of starting a new ff let's see how that goes 😊

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soul76

@soul76

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: Piranha26
Brilliant update!! Can you plz make the next chapter 18+??

I have no idea what you mean by this comment. There is going to be intimacy between Harman and Soumya as the story progresses as it is a romantic ff. If that is what you want you got it.

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Kuushi

@Kuushi

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#225

Superb updates...sorry am commenting after a couple of chapters but now that I read all of them I would say you are a fantastic writer you weave all the apt words and emotions into this story and that makes the story even more interesting..soumya is simple innocent yet a strong person..we know she would be the person to bright up harmans life but the question was how long will the truth be hidden from soumya and how will it be revealed which would be the high point of the story but u have given a intelligent twist to that moment yes soumya knew his past and the reason behind his behavior and yes harman has told her the truth but the twist is she didn't believe him she thought it was his hatred towards her and the moment she tried to leave harman realised he can't let her go..he asked her what she wanted and she wanted to be his and so harman will make sure she is his forever..wow skillful writing finally time for a possessive harman..eagerly waiting for the next Chapter please continue soon

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soul76

@soul76

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: Kuushi
Superb updates...sorry am commenting after a couple of chapters but now that I read all of them I would say you are a fantastic writer you weave all the apt words and emotions into this story and that makes the story even more interesting..soumya is simple innocent yet a strong person..we know she would be the person to bright up harmans life but the question was how long will the truth be hidden from soumya and how will it be revealed which would be the high point of the story but u have given a intelligent twist to that moment yes soumya knew his past and the reason behind his behavior and yes harman has told her the truth but the twist is she didn't believe him she thought it was his hatred towards her and the moment she tried to leave harman realised he can't let her go..he asked her what she wanted and she wanted to be his and so harman will make sure she is his forever..wow skillful writing finally time for a possessive harman..eagerly waiting for the next Chapter please continue soon

hey Kuushi thanks for your lovely comments. I think him telling her the truth and her not buying it was definitely a twist. He believed she would leave him after his revelation but he can see that she is too much in love with him to desert him. He too does not want her to leave him reason he asked her to stay. Ah yes the possessive Harman will surface now! 😊