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shreya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#411

Originally posted by: natashu
Chapter 23:

Oh Raghav! May I snatch him from Dimple? Or would it be too much to ask for? hehe
"drooling over wifey already" Do you see why I love this guy so much? 😆

He's jumping around like that pink fluffy bunny from those energizer ads, LOL.

And finally, the golden confession arrives on the couple and us! Fact is, it's magical no matter where it takes place. The words are binding and lift you a new kind of atmosphere; then there be the last leaf on the tree of souls! My, oh my, I had always wondered what the title meant and it was explained beautifully keeping in mind the conception of this sequence - absolutely lovely!

Glad I caught the song on TV the other day for I had never heard of it before although I know how popular it has become! Aptly placed too with our dear Raghav singin' away ;)

Viresh-Varsha are such cuties! It was heartwarming to see the two hug and be this close. They're moving on from their pasts, and I can only hope Ms. Rain doesn't let surrounding stress affect her in this manner again. The love of her life is with her now!

And punishments like that, now who wouldn't want them? ☺️

Also that poster, the hues of pink, and that leaf of course! Beauty ❤️

Executed tastefully, Shreya!

Yes I totally see why you like Raghav so much, and you are put down on the list Raghav will be delivered to you at the end of the story!🤣

Oh God Really! He must have had a lot of sugar!!🤣

Awww, Thank You! Yup the confession has arrived indeed. Aww I am super glad that You liked the meaning Of The Last Leaf!

Heheh yahh I caught it on a Pranushka edit, and then I thougt about Raghav so hence he was caught singin away!!!
Ms. Rain will surely cope up with everything!! I promise! Oh yeah now Mr. Nosy is here

Hayyee look at you. I know Viresh and his sweet punishments!!

Oh My Lords the postermaster herself liked my poster ahh that is all and enough for me!! Thank you so much.

Thank You so much Tasha truly means a whole lot to me!!

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shreya

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Aaradhaya1688

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Posted: 7 years ago

#413

Loved the update

Thanks for the pm

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sonalisharma1

@sonalisharma1

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Posted: 7 years ago

#414

Thankuu for the pm

Just loved the update .

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Sammy

@sammy4u

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Posted: 7 years ago

#415

these 4 are so cute...love them

uh oh now raghav is asking about the past thing, what will varsha say???

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

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Posted: 7 years ago

#416

Thanks for Update,Shreya.😊

So Happy to see your Update.😊

It was Amazing Part.😊

Viresh and Raghav Conversation was so Nice.

Viresh gave warning to Raghav on reading Varsha's Diary which she didn't like,it was so Interesting.

Viresh said to Raghav that he will ask sorry for this also,that was so Nice of him.😊

Raghav felt so happy for Varsha having Viresh in her life,it was so Nice.😊

Viresh and Raghav Friendship bond with Dimple and Varsha,it was so Nice.😊

Raghav and Dimple caring on Varsha was so Nice.😊

Viresh love on Varsha was so Nice.😊

The Story is getting So Interesting.😊

Please Continue soon.😊

PriyaSweety-Anu

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Nishtha

@Nishtha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#417

That is super stuff shreya🤗
The bond you show between viresh and raghav is super cute and very much like their real personality I mean prabhas and rana. So it's very easy to imagine and you end up seeing it along with reading so hats off to you .
Also the million letters of apologies is something 😆 viresh legit warned raghav
We talked a lovely story which is getting really interesting with every update.. I can't wait to read another chapter my chotu 🤗
Love you n continue soon

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natashu

@natashu

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Posted: 7 years ago

#418

Much like the pink energizer bunny I ended up zipping through both chapters instead of stopping in the middle to comment on each - that would have disrupted the flow and I'm glad I sailed through!

That conversation between Dimple and Raghav was very much needed - that creep needs to be taken care of before things get out of hand!

Raghav clickin' pics though 😆 Mr. Fullfy bunny being a cutiepie himself!

Varsha's out of it and I'd have expected her to be but it's warming to see the couples get all couple-y!

Now that diary fiasco - bechara Viresh is going to have chills all over thinkin' about Varsha's consequent reactions 😆

Viresh though is just the kind of partner one could want! Protective and calm when he's not breakin' creeps like Aman!

I'd like Ms. Rain to now start including health on the top of her priority list. Conversation with near and dear ones often takes care of a lot of things. The four together can do a whole lot more now!

The dose of friendship and love sprinkled throughout the chapters despite the seriousness of some of the events keeps everything bound together just right!

Great going, Shreya! 😃

Edited by natashu - 7 years ago