Saudade? ... PrAnushka FF Epilogue Page 104 and Pg 107 dt 28 Dec 17

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Read all the three parts in one go..

very refreshing story.

Keep it up

Continue soon

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poetic

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: shafy_MN
Read all the three parts in one go..
very refreshing story.

Keep it up

Continue soon

Thanks a lot Shafy 😳 Will surely update sooner

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poetic

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: bahubalifan
Vedant-Saroja...Prince-Cinderella 😳❤️I liked the names you have given them giving me a Jai-Vennela vibe not only them but the entire family maybe they were Jai-Vennela in their last birth that's why when they collided into each other they felt something ?? Cute ! Waiting to know more about Saroja 😉 😆

Thanks Priya 🤗

Maybe they were JV in their past birth 😳

Vedant - Saroja will be revealed more and more, sooner.

Hopefully.

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poetic

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: aaradhaya1688
Omg what do i say
U ve got me spellbound
That was amazinggg👏
Rachna that is so awesome and uve named her saroja and the cindrella touch is simply superb
But cant wait to know whats the past why it has to be kept hidden so much of suspense
Lovinggg it❤️

Thanks a lot Aaradhya 😃 for reading and for leaving your feedback behind 😊

Will reveal the past soon, maybe in the next 2-3 parts 😳

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tweetie19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

This was beautiful ☺️ and the similarity to Cinderella made it even more awesome and gave it a fairy tale vibe.

Eager to know who saroja is..can't wait for the next part 😊

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Kaushitaki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Totally totally totally loved it.

Your choice of words are definitely worth a bow. And also the almost rhythmic style you choose to write in.

Saroja... was she brought by Gopi mama?

Don't people in the house know of her presence?

Or is she almost locked away just because of something else? Some events of her past? Or some superstitious beliefs?

Update. Sooner than ever.

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poetic

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: tweetie19
This was beautiful ☺️ and the similarity to Cinderella made it even more awesome and gave it a fairy tale vibe.
Eager to know who saroja is..can't wait for the next part 😊

Thanks a lot Tweetie for reading 😆

Will update soon.

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poetic

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Penfolk
Totally totally totally loved it.
Your choice of words are definitely worth a bow. And also the almost rhythmic style you choose to write in.
Saroja... was she brought by Gopi mama?
Don't people in the house know of her presence?
Or is she almost locked away just because of something else? Some events of her past? Or some superstitious beliefs?

Update. Sooner than ever.

Thanks Kaushi 😊

A lot of questions there - will try to answer them in the subsequent updates.

Stay with me 😳

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Priya_KABHI

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Thanks for Update,Dear.😊

It was Amazing Part.😊

Vedant Cinderella Moment was so Interesting.😊

Cinderella Name is Saroja,it was so Nice.😊

The way Vedant thinking about Saroja was so Interesting.😊

The Flashback Part was so interestingly explained.😊

Vedant's Mama said that Saroja is a Guest in their House,it was so Interesting.😊

Vedant disturbed on thinking about Saroja,it was so Interesting.😊

What is the Mystery about Saroja? Waiting for it.😲

The Story is getting So Interesting.😊

Please Continue Soon.😊

PriyaSweety-Anu

Edited by PriyaSweety-Anu - 8 years ago

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poetic

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: PriyaSweety-Anu
Thanks for Update,Dear.😊
It was Amazing Part.😊
Vedant Cinderella Moment was so Interesting.😊
Cinderella Name is Saroja,it was so Nice.😊
The way Vedant thinking about Saroja was so Interesting.😊
The Flashback Part was so interestingly explained.😊
Vedant's Mama said that Saroja is a Guest in their House,it was so Interesting.😊
Vedant disturbed on thinking about Saroja,it was so Interesting.😊
What is the Mystery about Saroja? Waiting for it.😲
The Story is getting So Interesting.😊
Please Continue Soon.😊
PriyaSweety-Anu

Thanks so much Priyanka 😃 Yes there is a reason behind Saroja's presence being kept partly under wraps, not a pretty one, though reason nonetheless.

Will update shortly 😊