Arrange Marriage-..(Jai/Venella) Updated Pg 14 - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: aaradhaya1688

Awe ladoo this was so adorable

Jealousy is the SI unit of love
So seeing them jealous is so cute
Loveddd the updateee
Thanks a tonn for the pm


Thankyou glad you liked it..🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: poetic

Awww Laddooo, this is so sweet. And romantic

❤️

These two are so in love, and love these hesitant steps that they are taking towards each other.

Vikram is an interesting entry no doubt

Look forward to the next update, and thanks for the PM.


Thankyou so much Rachna Jiii...🤗😳...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: PriyaSweety-Anu

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was So Lovely Part.😳
The Banner was so Nice.😊
Jai and Venella getting close to each other,it was so Interesting.😊
The Feelings of Jai and Venella were so Beautiful.😊
Jai jealousy and Possessiveness was so Interesting.😊
Jai and Vennlla love Moments were so Cute.😳
Their Hug was so Cute.😳
Jai wore New Wedding Chain to Vennela,it was so Cute.😳
The Whole Part was so beautifully explained.😊
I'm So sorry for late Comment,My Health is not good due to weather Change.😭
Please Update New Update Soon.😊
PriyaSweety-Anu


Thankyou so much darling..🤗your comments are always sweet and full of love just like you..😳😉..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: tweetie19

OMG..this was so beautiful and romantic loved it so much ☺️


Thankyouu..😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: -Ambarish-

Oh this Jealous Jai ❤️.. How he has that sexy smirk always.. His possesiveness towards Vennela.. Typical hubby.. I can exaxtly imagine J staring V.. One of the type of romance i always wanted to read.. Such cute simple sweet romantic moments are a delight to watch.. J making V wear that chain as a symbol of a married lady..

Superb long update.. I wish it was never ending😉

Continue really soon.. Thank You for the pm dear


Thankyouuu...glad you liked it...🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: haya_gorgeous

Oh god!! This was soo beautiful..

Lovd their jealosy nd possessiveness..
Thnks for sharing ur beautiful thoughts..
Keep up the good work


Thankyouuu...🤗😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57

First things first.. I loved your edit.. it was perfect for this update ! Thankyouuu Jiii...😳

They seem to have become more comfortable and friendly with each other yes let them not rush let them take this slowly..

Oh this fella has started flirting with his wife ! 😉...Yesss😆😉

Jai is cute when he is jealous ! Loved the part when he goes to hospital and Vennela introduces him to Vikram and him feeling so proud ! ❤️

She keeping all girls away from him and he guarding her from all men by placing his hand around her waist.. aaaww!! What to do he is so handsome and she is beauty personified truly mad(e) for each other !

The part when he demands her to hug him and she does was sooo romantic... I know right..i dont know how I managed to write this..it was difficult to think😆

My fav part in this update was Jai getting her a wedding chain and adorning it for her. He wants the world to know she is married and belongs to him. Speechless !!

Beautiful update Laddoo! What I like is how you balance the story and romance...it's just perfect! Keep up the good work and looking forward to their progress !! Thankyouuu Jiii...your my inspiration 😉🤗😳

Thank you for the pm !

👏 👏 👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
This story is just amazing.. Just waiting for the next chapter... When u r writing the next chapter??? I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter please update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59
That was so cute and romantic❤️
Love the way they are possessive over each other⭐️
Oh my god I just dont read these scenes but I literally see them in front of my eyes this is the magic your writing has😊😊
Keep Updating😃😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: snigdha_dash

This story is just amazing.. Just waiting for the next chapter... When u r writing the next chapter??? I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter please update soon


Thank you so much..updating soon😳

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