OS : Emotions [based on the film Baahubali]

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Kaushitaki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Now this is like so extremely beautiful. Your writing style is beyond words. I love the way you write!

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tweetie19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Hi..😊

A well written OS depicting Bhalla's feelings. I wish we had got to see all this in the movie. I wanted more hindsight on Bhalla's anger on Baahu and obsession towards Devasena. U have described all of it very beautifully. 👍🏼

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RyReyFics

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

This was a wonderful treat. Throughout the story, I was grinning from ear to ear, imagining Bhalla spying on Baahu, stalking him, and again spying and then reeling with jealousy, helplessly gnashing his teeth at his brother's good fortune. LOL. Do write more! I really loved this story!

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sandhiya_1195

@sandhiya_1195

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Loved it Rachnaji😃

Nice to see Bhalla burning😆

Edited by sandhiya_1195 - 8 years ago

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: ratna.nanda
Loved it!
Especially the Baahu devasena moment we got..even though it was from bhalla's Pov was magical!

Ha ha that's true Ratna. Anything wrt AD, it's magical

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poetic

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: sri_divya
Hey rachna!!!
As your name says your os conveys the emotions in a poetic way 👏
Happy to have read someting in bhalla's pov too..
Go gir!!! ⭐️ want more writings from you

Am glad you liked it DIvya. My own focus is always on AD 😆, but wanted to explore a bit about what others saw when they saw them. 😊

Thanks for reading.

Have 2-3 more short stories on BB2. Will post them here later.

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poetic

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Penfolk
Now this is like so extremely beautiful. Your writing style is beyond words. I love the way you write!

Thanks Kaushi 😃 Glad you liked it.

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poetic

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: tweetie19
Hi..😊
A well written OS depicting Bhalla's feelings. I wish we had got to see all this in the movie. I wanted more hindsight on Bhalla's anger on Baahu and obsession towards Devasena. U have described all of it very beautifully. 👍🏼

Thanks a lot Tweetie 😊

I am sure that there was a gap of a few days b/w Devsena reaching MM, Bhalla's coronation and then Amara-Deva's marriage.

And then the question arose - what is it that made Bhalla more mad? He wanted the Kingdom, yes. But why was he not at peace even after? I believe there were so many other angles

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poetic

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: RyReyFics
This was a wonderful treat. Throughout the story, I was grinning from ear to ear, imagining Bhalla spying on Baahu, stalking him, and again spying and then reeling with jealousy, helplessly gnashing his teeth at his brother's good fortune. LOL. Do write more! I really loved this story!

Ha ha Rachel, it must have drove him crazy witnessing all that love and Bahu's fortune 😊

Will try to write, but you need to update that magnificent FF