~SiR VoIcE PoEt - RaViYiN KiRuKkAl *NEW -Pg123*~ - Page 12

Originally posted by: priya.1

Ravi very well written 👏

ending super ah irunthichu...

Keep going...

Originally posted by: Ravi.

Poem # 2 - Kadhal na Enna

Kadhal na Enna
Kadhal vandhal thozvi illai vetri
Inga Yaaruku vanthathu Kadhal
Atho Thozhvi kitta reach panna no hard feeling Only super feeling
Kadhal la vetri vantha ellarukkum eni thaan deepavali
apo thaan ungalukku life start-u ungaluku life-u now-u understand-u
First- u Vazhkai ah parunga
Apparam love ah parunga
Love pannum pothu Money ah pakkatheenga antha kadhal short term agreement
Love pannum pothu beauty ah pakkatheenga antha kadhal mid term agreement
Love pannum pothu manasa mattum parunga apo thaan life-u good u- vu- very happu-u
Yaara love pannuromnu mukkiyam illai
Evaluthuku namma love pannuromla athu thaan matter-u
Poi kadhal thozhvi kitta reach aagum
Nalla Kadhal unmaiyana kadhal miga periya vetriyai santhikum
Purinchatha love-u matter-u

What is love?

Rough English Translation done by Radha akka

When one falls in love, it isn't a failure, but a success indeed!

Who fell in love, here?

Even if you ever reach the low point, be happy!

If you succeed in love life, its a celebration indeed!

That is when your life starts; now your life has a meaning!

Hence, first take care of your life

Then think about love!

If love is money minded, then its for a short term;

If love revolves around the outer beauty then its for a midterm period;

If you look at the inner beauty, then your love life will be rich, and you will be happy as well!

It doesn't matter whom you fall in love with...

but the depth of your love is all that matters!

There isn't much success to love that is full of lies and betrayal.

But true love will reach a great milestone!

This is the success forumal of Love

Originally posted by: avivakirk

Ravida👍🏼

Hats off to you👏 ...amazing to see that u have the wisdom of a sage though u are so young...u are so talented and keep writing...Masterpiece was the right word for u da...Mind boggling to see such grey matter fromt his chinna thampi...good job👏

Originally posted by: Ravi.

Thank you akka 😃 I just write the poem in a funny way but it turn into a serious way 🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: hopper_ocean

😲 nee dha indhu write panninei?? 😲 woh ravi.. super daa ⭐️ life pathi nalla observe panni write pannirukei. My god every word is so right and true 👏 agree about sitting and talking out with parents.

Brilliant daa ravi, U amaze me this time. Well done daa 👏⭐️

Originally posted by: nishha

👏hey thambi unaku nalla kavidhai kuda ezuda varumo...

superabpu...nalla iruku...⭐️⭐️⭐️

neenga oru kavidhai kadal😆

⭐️⭐️⭐️

Originally posted by: avivakirk

You are a bard and a funny clown who has all of us in stitches...now u need to ask Radha to make it in such a way that noone plagiarises your post

Originally posted by: Ravi.

Illai pakkathu veetu ayah kavithai eluthinathu 🤣 Enna english la peter vidureenga 🤣🤣🤣