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Posted: 13 years ago
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The bell rang so the kids rapidly exited the class. Preeto was wrapping up her papers when Rajbeer entered. Preeto was writing something when Rajbeer slammed his hand on the paper. Preeto was now angry and shocked, she looked up and then stood up. Preeto- Rajbeer
Preeto quickly looked down and then picked up her papers and then was about to leave when Rajbeer held her hand. Rajbeer- itni jaldi kaha ja rahe ho
Preeto- woh ghar
Rajbeer- ghar... tumhara ghar Amritsar hai. Tumne kyu chouda apna ghar yeh sab Sonu aur Sunny ne batta diya hai.
Preeto was now trying very hard to hold back her tears and then turned to Rajbeer. Preeto- kya baataya Sunny aur Sonu ne apko
Rajbeer- ke tumhare dard ki waja Neelam Aunty hai.
Preeto- nahi Rajbeer aisa kuch nahi hai.
Rajbeer- joot pe joot
Preeto- yeh joot nahi hai.
Rajbeer- mein aaj tumse apna pyaar maangne nahi aya hon. Aaj mein Sonu ki behen ko wapas lene aya hon.
Preeto- Sonu kya hua usse
Rajbeer- Sonu bhot bemar hai, Bani Ishmeet se baat nahi karti. Kyun sirf tumhare waja se.
Preeto- yeh sach nahi ho sakta.
Rajbeer- yahi sach hai.
Preeto- nahi
Rajbeer- meine Bj se wada kiya tha ke mein unke betti ko mil ke sab baataonga. Meine ab baata diya hai. Ab tum ana chaho ya nahi chaho yeh tumhare marze hai.
Rajbeer then leaves the classrom and goes to his car and heads off to Amritsar. Preeto couldn't hold her tears back, she let them loose and then fell to the floor on her knees.
Preeto- yeh meine kya kiya. Sonu bemar hai Bani Ishu di se. Sobs more. Nahi ab mujhe wapas jakey sab thik karna hoga.
Preeto gets up leaves her papers on the desk and goes to the main office. Preeto- mujhe ab meri job choudne hai.
Office person- kyu tumhe toh bhaut pasand hain na yeh job.
Preeto- meri family problems hai. (Hands a piece of paper) Yeh mera resignation letter.
She leaves right away. She goes to her rent house. Preeto takes about 1000 rupees and puts it in a envelope and writes 'House Rent'. Preeto then packs all her clothes in a bag and heads towards the railway station.
Preeto goes to the counter person and says- mujhe Amritsar ke ek ticket chahiye.
She hands over money and the person gives her the ticket- yeh lo train sirf 5 minute mein jaane wali hai.
Preeto runs to the train but there is so much crowd that delays her. The train starts leaving, Preeto is still running then finally someone gives her a hand. Preeto grabs the hand and gets on the train. It was a aunty that give Preeto a hand, Aunty- puttar bhaut jaldi mein lag rahe ho
Preeto smiles - ha aaj poore 3 months key baad apni family ke paas ja rahe ho.
The Aunty smiles back and Preeto takes a seat. As she looks out of the window, she gets good memories back. Like the first time RajPreet met, Bani's application for the institute was accepted. Meeta in her wedding dress, Ishu and Dhruv's family honey moon.
It is like 10 pm in Amritsar, Rajbeer's car stopps outside the Dhillon house, he gets out of the car. He closes the door as he enters, Bj who is crying- kya hua Preeto mile
Rajbeer with a sad face- ha Bj,
Bj smiles- kaha hai woh
Rajbeer- woh nahi ae.
Bj starts crying again, Bani is taking water to Sonu's room. Everyone in the house is now at Sonu's room.
On the other hand, Preeto finaly after 3 months comes back to Amritsar. As soon as Preeto enters Amirtsar, Sonu opens her eyes and gets up. Sonu still says- Preeto di.
Rajbeer follows her- Sonu, kaha ja rahe ho.
Sonu then starts walking towards the door and then opens only to see that no one was there. Sonu- Preeto di.
She was going to go outside when Rajbeer stops her by the arm and says-Sonu Preeto abhi nahi hai yaha pe.
Sonu- nahi meine di ki presence mehsos ki hai.
Rajbeer- dekho hai Preeto yaha pe. Nahi na now you have to rest.
Rajbeer looks outside just for assurance that Preeto wasn't there and then closes the door behind him. He takes Sonu to her room.
Preeto takes a auto to the Dhillon house but near the market, the auto stops working. Preeto gets off and starts walking towards her house. As she walks towards her house she sees the pani poori wala (memory the sisters eating pani poori) and then walks by the gola wala (memory first time Rajbeer had a gola only because Preeto asked him to.)
Then finally she reaches home and as she goes to the front door and then stops. Preeto sighs- sach kehte hai Home sweet home. She smiles and the rings the door bell.
Everyone was in Sonu's room when the doorbell rang. When they heard the bell Bani gets up and says- mein dekhti hon
Bj nods and takes Sonu's hand and caresses it. Bani opens the door and then her mouth just drops open and then starts getting tears. Bani - Preeto di

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update. Read it with tears in my eyes. So nice that Preeto came back for her family.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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but now that she knows that Bani doesnt like Ishu at all will she be able to unite her sisters again.
O by the way this is Preeto imaginary episodes not just one of my ff's. I have like 1 major problem coming up in Preeto's life. And i think it was Aqeela that said i should have one of Rajbeer's past come out. So total i have 2 problems.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: unknownunknown

but now that she knows that Bani doesnt like Ishu at all will she be able to unite her sisters again.

O by the way this is Preeto imaginary episodes not just one of my ff's. I have like 1 major problem coming up in Preeto's life. And i think it was Aqeela that said i should have one of Rajbeer's past come out. So total i have 2 problems.



oops sorry i seem to have put more work load on you ...
btw these episode is great ... preeto and rajbeer dialogues wowww ...
and i'm sooo happy she came back to her family ...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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No Aqeela sorry for the late comment, I want there to be more problems. And guess what, while I was watching a movie. I came up with 2 more ideas. Now just wait and read my episodes.😊

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