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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one preeti..loved it👏
Hope stupid cv's also think in the same way
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Preeto goes in the crowd and Rajbeer follows her. Bj sees that Preeto is wearing the chunni and smiles. Bj walks over to Rajpreet and says- toh Rajbeer kab shaadi ki baat karne wala hai.
Rajbeer- tumne baataya nahi key Bj ko bhi patta tha.
Preeto-Bj ne hi mujhe shaadi key liye maanaya hai.
Rajbeer looks at Bj- thank u Bj agar ap nahi hoti toh najane kitne papad belne padte.
Bj- hmmm, toh ab ghar wali mil gae lekin apne Bj ko maat bholna.
Rajbeer- arey Bj apko keyse bhol sakta hon, agar ap kuch 20 saal choti hoti toh mein Preeto ko choudke apse shaadi kar leyta.
Preeto- kya
Bj- thik hai thik hai ab makhan maat laga.
She takes Rajbeer's ear- aur ab ghar meri kudi no pareshan kita hai na toh mein tuno saza bhi deni hai.
Rajbeer- palko pe bitha key rakhonga lekin please Bj kan choudo na dard ho raha hai.
Bj leaves his ear and goes to Meeta. Simmi sees Preeto wearing Rajbeer's chunni and she is hurt. She is sad, angry and has hatred against Preeto in her heart.

After the Roka is finished, Dhrishu go home and so does everyone else. Preeto is by the dinning table putting dishes away when Rajbeer goes to her. Rajbeer- toh mein soch raha tha key bhi hi Papaji se shaadi ki baat karlon. Kya kehna hai.
Preeto- nahi nahi
Rajbeer has a naughty smile- kyun
Preeto- kal suro karna.
Rajbeer- lekin sirf ek sharat pe
Preeto- kya
Rajbeer- aaj firse 12 bhaaje terrace pe.
Preeto- aur mein apse firse poch rahi hon key kya mein koi bhoot hon jo raat key 12 bhaaje terrace pe aongi.
Rajbeer- ek bhaut kubsorat bhoot.
Preeto smiles.
Rajbeer- raat 12 bhaaje terrace pe.
Preeto- aur agar mein nahi ae toh.
Rajbeer- toh... mein tumhare parents ko 12 bhaaje jagaonga aur tumhara haath manoga tumhari poori family key samhe... raat key 12 bhaaje.
Preeto- nahi nahi please issa kuch maat karna mein aongi.
Rajbeer- promise
Preeto- promise

Terrace...
Preeto comes to the terrace dressed in a simple pink and white salwar kamez. Preeto is looking around for Rajbeer but he is no where in sight. She walked over to the railing and then put her hands on the railing. Just then she felt someone hugging her from the back. She turned her head sideways and smiled to see Rajbeer. Rajbeer- aaj bhaut beautiful laj rahi thi.
Preeto teases him- kyun ros nahi lajti.
Rajbeer- nahi ros lajti ho lekin aaj kuch kas baat thi.
Preeto- thank u then
Rajbeer- ur welcome and i promise shaadi key baad tumhe ros aise hi compliment karonga.
Preeto- really
Rajbeer- ha aur jab tum pregnant hogi aur tumhara peet (stomach) baada hoga na tab bhi mein tumhe aise compliment karonga.
Rajbeer turns Preeto to face him. Preeto looks in his eyes but then feels shy and that why she looks down. Rajbeer smiles and then sees that a lock of hair was blocking his view. Preeto- Rajbeer
Rajbeer- ek minute
Preeto- kya
Rajbeer tucks the hair behind her ear- mujhe maansoor nahi key jab tum mujse baat karo tab koi aur bich mein ho.
Preeto smiles. Rajbeer- tum kya keh rahi thi.
Preeto- rajbeer mujse ek promise karogay.
Rajbeer- kya
Preeto- pehle promise karo.
Rajbeer- thik hai promise baba

Scene changes to Ahluwalia house, Simmi bedroom.
Simran threw a vase on the floor and cries more. Simmi- kyun Rajbeer kyun kiya tumne meri saath issa.
She sees a picture of Rajbeer and her as kids on her night lamp and hugs it. Simmi cries more- mein USA se itni door se tumhare liye ae aur tum uss Preeto ko pyaar karte ho. What does she have that i dont. Kyun Rajbeer kyun.
She is crying on the floor beside her bed.



Sorry guys next part later someday.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
Interesting sana ...loved it waiting for nxt

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