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Posted: 13 years ago
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Preeto ss: tu jaane na... Last part...

The wind whistled in his ears but couldn't drown out the melody of her words... "I love the way you look at me, I love the way you make me so happy, and the ways you show you care. I love the way you say, "I Love you," And the way you're always there. I love that you are with me, and I'm glad that you are mine."....


How he had yearned for these words...and finally she had admitted how madly she had been in love with him, when she had pretended that she had hardly cared... "You were a dream...A dream that filled my thoughts and my loneliest nights...the dream I held on to...the dream my heart longed to one day have...a fantasy I longed to one day come true..."


Her words were evidence...that she had felt his pain more than him... "I've treated you unkindly while your love was so genuine and kind...You came out in front and I was hiding... When I look back...On the dreams I left behind...Buried there in all my thoughts...It is you I always find..."

The windings of the hill way...reminded rajbeer of all the difficult times they had... "Every new road we had to take...because of the choices we had to make...only paved the road...that brought us closer to one another.."....but finally he had done for her what she did for him... "You've Chased my fears with just one glance...I thought my happiness was forbidden...Until you took my world and killed my demons...Read into all my deepest dreams...And gave them beautiful wings...You're the reason I believe in love.."...life is such a mystery...& love even greater..

The brakes screeched to a halt as rajbeer looked wildly around... "where on earth was the camp??"...some areas around it were burnt black...& the fear he had been trying to suppress...crept its ugly head...


"I HAVE NEVER BEEN EMBARRASSED MORE..."....growled preeto as rajbeer stood grinning sheepishly... she looked at him unsure of how long her anger could hold against charms like that...she shook her head in disbelief...An Air force officer had honked down a medical van...forced it to stop...and had shamelessly asked her to accompany him...in front of her six or so...co-volunteers..."Those feelings are back, but stronger than ever...I know you're the one I wanna hold on to forever...If I could have just one wish...I would wish to wake up every day...with the feel of your heart beating with mine...Knowing that I could never find that feeling...with anyone other than you..." Preeto turned a shade of crimson as rajbeer slowly recited lines of her own letter... "ammm...I errr...thought that...we...aaa...may not..."

"I love you in a place".... They were Somewhere on the middle of d road that led to nowhere... "Where there's no space or time"..... He walked slowly towards her... "Your caring heart keeps out the rain".... he looked deep into her eyes still telling d silent story of her tears... "YOUR LOVE, the ultimate roof..." he held her hand and kept it on his chest..."No other can stir my heart so deep".....even the tall trees seemed bowed down to their magical moments... "Or thrill me through and through".... the rustle of the leaves silenced to hear more... "And in my dreams there will never be"....the breeze blew on making some stray hair strands fall on her face..."No other love but you"... rajbeer finished as his fingers traced d edges of her face...


Here I take your leave...leaving Rajpreet alone with their love and...all my lovely readers...with d request to...continue with their appreciation...Thank you..



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow 👏 ...waiting 4r nxt part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: yukti1

Wow 👏 ...waiting 4r nxt part



ooo nooo...😳...

dere is no next part dear..😭...😭...

i am sooo sorry...😕...

but i am planning 2 write anoder 1 soon...😃...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sen_madhuban



for everyone who read/commented/liked...


so sweet Thanku Madhu...i will welcome u only after reading last part...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Madhu tooo awsomeee last part n sooo cuteee Rajpreet jus loved all the lines very well written dear...👏👏
ur always welcomed to come up with more n moreee OS/SS/FF...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: snehapatro

Madhu tooo awsomeee last part n sooo cuteee Rajpreet jus loved all the lines very well written dear...👏👏

ur always welcomed to come up with more n moreee OS/SS/FF...😃



i am finally gearing up for a ff...

dat was ur request after my first one shot (OS)...

lets c how it turns up...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sen_madhuban



i am finally gearing up for a ff...

dat was ur request after my first one shot (OS)...

lets c how it turns up...

Yipeee 🥳 waiting for it dear...😃

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