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Posted: 13 years ago
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😊Ok all SSSPians. Here we go with my first attempt at FF. Pls let me know if is a good one so that I may continue.

😉Waise agar aap log bekaar bhi bologe na toh bhi jab Cvs is tarah ki gadbad jab bhi karenge jaise kal kiya tab mein apne FF ke saath pahunch jaaongi aap ka dil rakhne ke liye. Mein itni bhi kathor dil ki nahin hoon.

So continuing from 7th Dec epi

Scene 1 – BF table: Preeto comments ki Simi itna time kyon le rahi hai when Simi comes in. As Bani has already left Preeto wants to leave as she has some work to get done but ishu stops Meeta di saying Dhruv and she will drop her home later. RB offers to drop Preeto and goes inside picks up his packet and moves out to his car with Preeto. On the way RB apologises again and Preeto brushes it off.😡

Scene 2 – 😲Ranhaar with Bani where she blurts out the KC exchange btwn Rajpreet while Rajpreet reach Preeto's house.

Scene 3 - RB is leaving after dropping Preeto and opens the door and sees Ranhaar at the door step. He is very angry that Ranhaar to see him at the doorstep of the Dhillon house and catches him by collar to beat him up. Preeto comes in btwn and tells him he is the new tenant. When RB tries to tell beeji-Papaji about Ranhaar, they tell him that they know everything and that ranhaar is repenting and wants to start anew and they want RB to give him one chance to be a better person. RB storms out of the house at this turn of events.

Epi ends here.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Now for the weekend epi '

Scene 1 ' Beeji-Papji are very upset that they are the cause of RB's unhappiness. Preeto is very sad that she is unable to give her support to RB. Meeta di and Bani also come and Ranhaar once more starts his drama. Suddenly the doorbell rings and all are wondering whether RB has come back.

Scene 2 ' Preeto opens the door with trepidation and it is RB at the doorstep. RB walks in without looking at Preeto and goes straight to Beeji-Papaji.

RB '" Aap chahte hain ki mein is eek mauka doon?"

Beeji ' " Haan puttar. Agar kaoi sudharna chahe toh use ek mauka toh milna chahiye."

RB ' " Toh yeh ek mauka Pankaj ko kyon nahin diya jar aha?"

Everyone is stunned with this turn by RB. RB then states that he will keep Beeji-Papji's words and give Ranhaar one chance but in turn they have to keep his word and give Pankaj one chance to become someone and then come for Meeta whom he loves wholeheartedly.

Scene 3 ' Beeji-Papaji agree to do as RB says since they consider him their son and they know he only has their good in his heart and mind and decide that they will not fix any other rishta for Meeta until RB decides that he has given enough time to Pankaj. RB then tells ranhaar that he will be watching him and one wrong step and that would be the end of Ranhaar's game. He then tell Beeji-Papji that he would take their leave and come the next day to teach Sonu. On his way out meeta di follows him and thanks him and RB just gives an understanding smile and leaves completely ignoring Preeto. As he gets into the car he looks at the chunni with a wry smile.

Ab age ki kahani weekend par soch kar bataongi.

Hope u all liked and enjoyed my efforts. Pls give ur comments.

Edited by adianasr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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finally..👏...finally...👏...finally...👏...thank u sooo much...😃...

ff was d only reason..😊..i came 2 india forums in d first place...😊

& now we have 1 on our very own rajpreet....🥳.

gr8 work...👍🏼..do...do.
..do...continue...

& i think dats d track even CVs plan 2 take.😆...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: adianasr

Now for the weekend epi '

Scene 1 ' Beeji-Papji are very upset that they are the cause of RB's unhappiness. Preeto is very sad that she is unable to give her support to RB. Meeta di and Bani also come and Ranhaar once more starts his drama. Suddenly the doorbell rings and all are wondering whether RB has come back.

Scene 2 ' Preeto opens the door with trepidation and it is RB at the doorstep. RB walks in without looking at Preeto and goes straight to Beeji-Papaji.

RB '" Aap chahte hain ki mein is eek mauka doon?"

Beeji ' " Haan puttar. Agar kaoi sudharna chahe toh use ek mauka toh milna chahiye."

RB ' " Toh yeh ek mauka Pankaj ko kyon nahin diya jar aha?"

Everyone is stunned with this turn by RB. RB then states that he will keep Beeji-Papji's words and give Ranhaar one chance but in turn they have to keep his word and give Pankaj one chance to become someone and then come for Meeta whom he loves wholeheartedly.

Scene 3 ' Beeji-Papaji agree to do as RB says since they consider him their son and they know he only has their good in his heart and mind and decide that they will not fix any other rishta for Meeta until RB decides that he has given enough time to Pankaj. RB then tells ranhaar that he will be watching him and one wrong step and that would be the end of Ranhaar's game. He then tell Beeji-Papji that he would take their leave and come the next day to teach Sonu. On his way out meeta di follows him and thanks him and RB just gives an understanding smile and leaves completely ignoring Preeto. As he gets into the car he looks at the chunni with a wry smile.

Ab age ki kahani weekend par soch kar bataongi.

Hope u all liked and enjoyed my efforts. Pls give ur comments.



i liked d preeto ignoring part best...👏...👏...wo bahut sar char gayi he...😡.

but zyada nahi dukhi karna usko...😭.k??😉

jaldi milana rajpreet ko...❤️..

u made my day..👏..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Love your take, but may i ask you to change it a bit😃, for the 8th dec scene 3: in promo it shows Preeto is already there in the house. but ur take was superb👏. keep it up and will wait for Monday for ur FF. 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: gujjugirls3

Love your take, but may i ask you to change it a bit😃, for the 8th dec scene 3: in promo it shows Preeto is already there in the house. but ur take was superb👏. keep it up and will wait for Monday for ur FF. 👍🏼

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I know dear. have written that Rajpreet return home together and Scene 3 starts with RB leaving after dropping Preeto home. Also that it is Preeto who says Ranhaar is their new tenant.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#7
ur tooo Sweet Dawn thanku very much for coming up with FF...😃
jus Loved it...Wonderful and Awsomee...👏
Do Continue waiting for next update and by the way add some cuteee scenes of Rajpreet in ur FF...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏👏👏😭 khusi ke aansu hain ... bahut badiya ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#9

Wowww i already fell in love with your track...

Very very good👏👏
Please Continue ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
Dawn, you were right on topic👍🏼, it was like you wrote the today's scenes in the show.
Plz continue with your FF and expect me in for loving it.
Pari,❤️

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