New FF:Love,Lust & Lies- Part 1 Updated - Page 2

Originally posted by: FIZK6

Glen ... the new intro sounds good too. Leaving it to the readers to decide who they want with Savi.
So does that mean RK will be negative? 😕

Originally posted by: -Subbiha-

Haha Savitri jhakar... Dude just make it Priya Jhakar; no one will notice 🤣 and will make it easier for me to imagine AdiYa

Originally posted by: Ezria_Fan_4ever

haha, that was fizzus suggestion, to name her savitri jhakar...i love it, reminds me of priya when i write d FF😆

Originally posted by: FIZK6

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">OMG ...Glen loved it. Beautifully written and their feelings you expressed in detail 👍🏼
Savi already has an opinion of RaQesh without even meeting him. What will she think when she meets him and is already attracted to him. In one glance she's his.

I thought Gulika was Devs girlfriend so went back and read the intro. Aditya is still mentioned there 😆
Another thing Savitri and Satya, mythologically are meant to be so how about changing Savis name to Damyanti, just an opinion its up to you. What do other readers think?

RaQesh wants a woman who will stand up to him and he will get that in Savi, cant wait for it 😉

Update soon.

Btw, why are there 2 posts reserved? </font>

Originally posted by: Ezria_Fan_4ever

Thats coz I want all d updates or atleast most of it 2 b posted on 1 page...d problem with postin all d updates in just 1 post is dat IF editor starts giving probs then...i had a problem posting part 1 today too...with some of my edits not gettin updated.
Nyways m glad u liked it,n about ur suggestion...damyanti is a very old fashioned name...I dont like it...n ive already changed d main leads name b4...ye there r ppl who want sAVI satya together...but sm1 has to loose their lady here...lets see whether its RK or Satya

Originally posted by: drashmeet4ever

loved the update please make satya savi couple

Originally posted by: FIZK6

And i thought you had a surprise for us on the two reserved posts 😆

Originally posted by: Ezria_Fan_4ever

lol...dont tell me this is d first time ur reading a fan fiction on IF😆