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Posted: 10 years ago
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UPDATE:4(It's My Life)

Prem with sudden jerk stopped the car while sid and simar saw Roli with astonished eyes.
Roli threw quick glance at every she too being equally surprised to see them staring at her.
Roli: what happened why are you all staring me like that.
Simar: did you say something to sid now.
Roli: ya. I said thanks na.
Simar: not that Roli.
Prem: wait wait... Now don't say me that you confessed your love to this puppy.
Roli: whattt?
Simar: ya you told "I love you" na
Roli: ha. Oh ok so you are all staring at me. I loved this puppy a lot so said so.
Prem: oh no man. (He murmured that only sid can hear him) you should have born as puppy instead of human sid. He smiled.
Sid too smiled and turned front. He wished her confession was to him. He blushed even for the thought.
Prem drive the car first to dwevedi house.
Rosim and presid got down the car and stepped inside the house.
All 4 saw each others face blankly not knowing what is happening.
A family was sitting in the hall talking to jamanlal and Meena.
Meena saw rosim and presid.
Meena came to them and hugged Roli.
She asked all 4 to come in first.
Now she noticed Roli was little dirty and few bruises on her body.
Meena (softly): what happened to you Roli. Why are you like this. Ok now we don't have time to talk so go get ready fast.
A lady from that family: don't worry Meenaji your daughter is beautiful even like this. Every one smiled except rosim and presid with no clue of what is happening.
Meena: simar come with me.
She took Roli into her room.
Meena gave saree to Roli and asked her get ready quickly. She asked simar to help her.
After sometime Roli and simar came down.
Meena: showing simar's- this is my elder daughter simar. And this is Roli.
She pointed at prem and introduced him as son-in-law. And sid as his brother.
In common she introduced that family as Roli's would be family.
Now all the 4 understood what was happening.
Jamanlal: if you like our daughter we can proceed further.
Male person of that family: we all liked your daughter. We will come again to complete the formalities.
Meena: by the way our simar and prem's marriage is in a week So it will be be nice if you make an appearance with entire family and also with your son this time.
Family left the house with a smile.

Meena came and hugged Roli.
Meena: Roli Iam so happy for you. You got such a good alliance.
Simar: what is this maa. You will fix marriage even without roli's concert. She did not even see him.
Jamanlal: simar beta. They said that he was struck up with some work and did not come.
Simar: oh something important than his life is it.
Meena: not like that beta...
Prem: I too agree with simar maaji.
Sid: you all wait for a moment. It is Roli's life let her say her decision.
Roli: I am ok with what ever my parents do for me.
Presim and sid shocked to hear that from Roli while jamanlal and Meena felt happy about her.
Presid left to their house and others to their respective rooms.
Sid got angry on Roli.
At night...
Sid was on terace...
Prem came and placed his hand on sid's shoulder.
Prem: sid. I know you are disturbed.
Sid was silent.
Prem: Sid try to talk to Roli once and say her about your love. She will accept you.
Sid: how prem. She will love me like how she accepted the proposal without knowing anything about him, or she will love me after taking permission from her parents.how can she blindly follow her parents words. She should allow her heart to speak out. I am not saying she should not listen to elders but she can atleast think what is good for her right??
Prem: yes sid. I agree with you. But it is not fair that you worry like this.
Sid: yes prem. Let me not worry on this. But atleast as a well wisher I should let her know what she is doing is not good.
Prem patted on his back.
Presid shared a smile and walked down to their respective rooms.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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UPDATE:5(It's My Life)


A day of presim marriage has come.
Roli's so called would be family also came.
The guy also came.
Jamanlal introduced both of them.
While they both were talking with each other sid called Roli for something.
Roli left that person alone and went near sid. Most of the time Roli was with sid.
In marriage Roli was almost with sid ignoring that guy.
That guys presence there did not affect Roli in any manner while he was not able to digest rosid's closeness.
He walked towards Roli furiously and slapped her on her cheek which made her fall down with a thud sound drawing everyone's attention present there.
Within everyone understand what has happened they heard another slap sound which was atleast 100 times than that of previous intensity.
Now all gathered at that place.
Jamanlal: he hold that guy's collar and shouted at him for slapping his daughter.
Meena helped Roli get up who was crying rubbing her cheeks.
Rajender: why are you shouting at him. This sid would have done something.
Sujatha: why do you always blame him.
Prem and simar too came down from the stage.
Simar: yes dad this fellow slapped Roli first so sid slapped him. There no mistake of sid in this.
Guy's parents: what is all this. Jamanlalji don't forget that you should send your day to our house only.
Jamanlal: shut up you idiots. How do you think that I will proceed with your proposal even after this . And you people instead of justifying the action you are warning me. Simar was correct. She told that you are not correct for Roli but I did not hear to them.
Now you please leave the hall if you don't want to be thrown out by the security.
Guy's family left the hall furiously with so much insult infront of the crowd.

Later all the marriage rituals got over.

In BW House next morning.
Simar after finishing her works she went near Sujatha.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Sorry guys for taking long time for updating
This whole week I have exams and will get over by Friday.
So little busy
I am not able to comment individually also sorry for that.
I have soo many updates to complete reading.
I have 2 more concepts. Don't know when start them.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
super updates dear..i luvd it..hw roli accepted mrg easily? n idiot slapped our roli😡..n sid reaction super
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
awesome updates 👏super reaction by sid by giving slap all the best for your exams
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: ramya2397

Sorry guys for taking long time for updating
This whole week I have exams and will get over by Friday.
So little busy
I am not able to comment individually also sorry for that.
I have soo many updates to complete reading.
I have 2 more concepts. Don't know when start them.

superb updates ramya and yes exams is more important first u complete ur exam then u give the concept of 2 updates and if possible then give update of this story gud luck for exam dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
loved the sid reaction awesome dear 👏 waiting fr next
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
wow, dear...it's fantastic...loved it...SID's one side love, his choice of living life,his advices to his bro, everything abt his character is too good...hope Roli feel his love atleast now seeing how he slapped that guy who misbehaved with her...that scene is really AWESOME😛😃...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
UPDATE:6(It's My Life)

Days are passing...
Prem came home with lots of excitement. He called simar to terace and walked quickly upstairs.
Simar who was talking with mataji and Sujatha excused her from them and went to terace.
Simar: premji what happened. You seems to be very happy today. What is it that is making my husband so happy.
Prem hold her shoulders and said: ha simar Iam very happy today but let even sid come I will tell you.
Sid: no need to wait for me I have come.
Prem rushed to sid and hugged him tightly.
Sid: prem calm down. Ethini emotional kyu ho.
Prem showed some magazine to sid and simar.
Simar and Sid were happy to see the news.
They both hugged him and congratulated him.
Simar: I am so happy for you premji. I finally got it.
Sid: ha prem. Oh my god you got a chance to participate in music lights with one of the most popular teams in India. And that too in Bangkok. Congrats prem.
Prem who was happy till now became pale.
Sid: oye now what happened.
Prem: Sid the chance I got is most prestigious one but what if pappa gets to know about it.
Sid: prem. This is the reason I kept telling you to say what you are doing with pappa.
Ok now we should plan something so that pappa allows you to go to Bangkok.
Simar: don't worry premji. Every thing will be fine.
Sid after thinking for sometime...
Sid: prem how about planning your honeymoon.
Prem: what now? Sid please don't play pranks on me now.
Sid: arey I am quite serious about it. What is so funny in this. Listen first... We will tell everyone in the family that you both are going for honeymoon trip to Bangkok. You can even participate in the program and also your honeymoon.
Prem: wow Sid. Nice idea. But Sid I want you by my side as support.
Sid: yeah prem I too want to see your performance in live. But nothing can be done right.
Prem and Sid hugged each other.

In the night... Presim room
Simar talking to Roli on phone and told about their trip to Bangkok and about prem's participation in music lights program.
Roli congratulated prem. And wished him all the best.
Prem thanked her and asked her to come home tomorrow.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
UPDATE:7(It's My Life)


Next day Roli came to BW house.
Roli joined presim and Sid in their conversation.
Simar: Roli I forgot about this. You have your interview on The same day we are leaving na.
Roli: ha didi. I asked dad to drop me but he said he is busy on that day. Even you are going on the Same day. Don't know who will drop me.
Prem: don't worry Roli sid will drop you.
Sid: hey prem you are going to enjoy shoving me in trouble.
Roli pretended angry and pouted her lips.
All laughed
Sid: I was just kidding Roli. I will drop you as well as pick you up ok.
Roli: thank you (smiling)
Prem slowly escaped from that place and appeared after sometime with an album in his hand.
Sid saw it was his photography collection and warned him with his eyes not to bring it here.
Prem did not listen to him and gave album to Roli before sid could pull it from his hands.
Sid: no Roli please give it back to me.
Prem covered sid's mouth with his hand and said: Roli see those photos quickly.
Roli opened out of curiosity...
The album had photos only of Roli which sid took unknown to her.
Sid was trying to free himself from prem's hold. But invain
Roli was shocked to see such good collection of her photos which she herself don't have.
Prem: Roli turn to last page fast.
Sid was sighing her not to do so.
Prem: Roli don't listen to him fast open the last page.
Roli was completely shocked to see the writings there.
She started reading...
The most beautiful thing in the world is you.
One which I hate to see is tears from your eyes.
One which I love to see is your smile.
When I see you hurt my heart cries.
When I see you world around me stops
I don't have a dream without you and a day with out you memories.
I LOVE YOU ROLI.
I am incomplete without you sweet heart. My only prayer to God is to bring you in my life and fill my life with colors of ROLI.
(Sorry guys I am bad in poetry still tried to write something)
After reading this Roli closed the album and saw sid.
Sid was closing his eyes not know what would her reaction be.
Roli kept the album on table and walked out of the room and from the house.
Simar tried to stop her but did not listen to her.

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