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sowmya567

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Posted: 10 years ago

all the best dear...waiting for updates...

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Kim hun jei

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Posted: 10 years ago

awesome explanation abt love... Seems to be interesting concept... Waiting for updates dear...

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.......... Deeksha..........

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sowmya567
all the best dear...waiting for updates...

thank u dear

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Banumathy Prasanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

Beautiful concept & Good start dear...👏

All the best...😛

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.......... Deeksha..........

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Posted: 10 years ago

PART-1

Beautiful morning,sun rising its way to spread its rays all over world...

Sweet melodious music of birds,and fragrance of mother earth due to rain is filling every sense of

body...A pink room with a beautiful family pics and there on the bed..a princess of house still a

sleep hugging her 3 inch white teddy tightly

This little princess was sleeping with a sweet smile saying she just have a pleasant dream...

Her bubbly cheeks,her long beautiful black hair disturbing her innocent sleep of princess

A hand softly caressing her hair..knowing whose hand it belongs the lil princess lay on her lap

even without opening her eyes..

A person came there kissing her lovingly ...seeing his child's innocent sleep...but suddenly..

Roli...Roli some one was shouting like she will murder next moment if she is still asleep

Meena:Roli...Roli aaj toh tu pakka late hogi news paper office kaun jayega agar tum yaaha soothi

hi rahi.. and U Simar u will never change instead of waking her up u took her on lap or aap

aapaka kam kya katham hogaya subha subha aapkei ladlei ki neendh koh dekthai rahe..

Meena:Hey matarani iss ladki ka mein kya karun...Roli...Roli get up u will be late to SB paper

house..Roli.. Roli utto beta u will be late..

I will be late...i am late mom...she said screamingly...and sat on the bed rubbing her sleepy eyes

and yawning lazily wishing, Good morning and the next min slamming door of bathroom

All chuckled seeing her innocence she readied herself and came down for tiffin runningly

Meena:Roli come slowly don't run...

Roli:Mom how could u tell me to come slow see im already late and i don't want tiffin..Bye..

Jamunala:Beta wait for 5 min i will feed my both daughters with my hands come...

After a while

Roli:Di come fast we have to hand over the article...

Simar:Yes dear come we need to rush

Rosim:Bye mom bye pappa

Jamunala and Meena:ok bye take care beta

these 2 sisters left the house to SB news paper house

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harsha

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Posted: 10 years ago

beutiful prologue dear n well start👏...waitin fr next

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.......... Deeksha..........

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: banuprasa
Beautiful concept & Good start dear...👏

All the best...😛

thanks di

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.......... Deeksha..........

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: harsharosid-8
beutiful prologue dear n well start👏...waitin fr next

thanks dear will give updates a while after

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Kim hun jei

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Posted: 10 years ago

awesome start... Roli is too crazy.,her yawning, screeming..funy... Cont soon dr...

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.......... Deeksha..........

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavyakrishna
awesome start... Roli is too crazy.,her yawning, screeming..funy... Cont soon dr...

in this ff also Roli is innocent soul..

will update next soon

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