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Kim hun jei

@Kavyakrishna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: banuprasa

Yes dear.. Strange take for me... Lets see. And i am sorry... I am going to adapt the writing style like narration of story like yours...Lets see how it comes up.. Dont mind dear... Just a different try...

no worries di jst proceed as u feel... whts der to mind in it

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Banumathy Prasanna

@banuprasa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Part 1

I am looking at myself...

In a beautiful Red color Lehenga...

With full of designer work done all over the Lehenga...

Golden color blouse to add beauty to the dress...

Red color similarly deisgned Dupatta... which is covering my face...

Through the dupatta i am looking around me...

I am sitting in a well decorated bed..

The bed is filled with red rose petals...

When i moved my eyes further...

There was a night lamp in the side table... water jug, glass...

Then when i move my eyes further...

I can see the full room is decorated with red flowers... balloons everywhere in the wall...

When i looked around the room... I can see the scented candles lit here & there...

Adding beauty to the place..

On one side... i can see a dining table..

There were some fruits kept in the fruit bowl...

Then i an see a cake inside a box ready to cut and eat...

Other than the treat the room was giving to my eyes...

My nose was inhaling the fragrance...

Very nice room freshener was used it seems...

Further the fragrance of the flowers...

Scented candles...

All were adding to the atmosphere...

Creating a beautiful smell everywhere in the air...

Any girl in such romantic atmosphere will be dreaming about the sweet things which she has been expecting in her life since her teenage...

Yes... every girl whether they agree or not will be having their own dream inside their heart...

May be untold... unshared...

Still inside the heart there will be some sort of dreams...

About their life... about their married life... about the experiences they will be facing after their marriage...

I was not exceptional to it...

I too was having dreams...

About my life.. about my married life... about the sweet untold experiences which will be faced...

But am i in such dream land now...

Am i happy now...

Am i enjoying this romantic atmosphere now...

No... no... no...

My cheeks which was suppose to turn red out of shyness is now is still red... but out of anger and grief...

My eyes which should wait restlessly for her love is still restless... but out of not knowing what is going to happen...

My heart which should beat very fast out of tension about this marriage night is still beating fast... but out of tension...

I closed my eyes...

The tears started rolling from my eyes and scrolling through my cheeks... Slowly started wetting my new designer Lehenga...

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zoya.rosid

@zoya.rosid

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Perfect Start... new style of narrating.. loved it..now What's next??

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magicalrosid

@magicalrosid

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Yes very nice Start di...waiting for the rest...

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sheetal

@sheetal1979

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

really superb start eagerly waiting for nxt

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zoya.rosid

@zoya.rosid

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: magicalrosid
Yes very nice Start di...waiting for the rest...

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