!!Promise are to be broken!! SSK SS CHAPTER 2 UPDATED - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Angellic_doll

Hi dear
Nice start...
Please do pm me when u update



hey😊

thanks.

yes surely i will pm you.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: PrincessAish



hey😊

thanks.

yes surely i will pm you.

thanks
are you going to update now?
I dont mind stalking😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Angellic_doll

thanks

are you going to update now?
I dont mind stalking😉


yes, i am going to update, half hour later😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrincessAish


yes, i am going to update, half hour later😉

thats great..
will wait
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: PrincessAish




thanks a lot, i was just watching the episode and this idea came, hope it will turn out good. 😊



k..waiting for you're update...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26


Chapter 1

It's been 2 years and nothing has changed, since then. The Bhardwaj House as usual is engaged in the Morning Prayer. The house is in silence surroundings. Their dining table are occupied with the family members except the two boys and no more gossips, no more laughter echoed in the hall. After their death the house is silent as if both sisters took the happiness with them.

"Now, it's enough. I can't take it anymore. I want my children to be happy" Mataji said bringing everyone attention to her, from their silent thoughts. She is helpless now, her grandsons have gone mad without their wives and she badly wanted them to marry else, they cannot move on in their lives and will always be stock in that bedrooms.

"We are trying Mataji, but they are denying hearing us" Sujata said sadly. She has been trying to convince her sons to marry, but they act like deaf to her. Also they demand of the girls to be exactly like Roli and Simar, who not only will take care of them but also the family. But Sujata is confident that no other girls could be like Roli and Simar, and if they would find the world also then they can't find girls and daughter in law like them.

Footsteps sound made the entire members to look upstairs. Prem and Siddhant were heading downstairs, with their office suits. They are having a big meeting, for which they had to win the contract and they would get a large property in the north side village area, where they could build their dream house, same as Roli and Simar wanted to.

"There should be a big garden on the left side, and a big fountain in the middle" Roli said dreamingly. She had always wanted a house with a garden full of flowers and a big fountain in the middle.

"Also on the right, we should built a swing, where we could enjoy reading romantic books" Simar said imagining a house with garden, fountain and swing.

Both of them talk about how there should be a big main gate and they will enter inside it with their four wheelers and there should be a garage also to keep the cars inside. The main door should be big one, when it would open, the hall should be fixed with their pictures with their husband and families. In the middle of the hall there should be big couches and a small table where they will enjoy drinking tea or coffee, when their husbands will leave them alone in the house for their work. Also there will be two big bedrooms with their pictures and with their husband pictures. Moreover there should be a big kitchen where they could enjoy cooking with the music systems.

After talking they became a little sad.

"didi, how we were so sure that we would marry in the same house, that we dreamt the house" Roli said. She didn't know that she would also marry in the same house as her sister. Some time she doubts what would have happen if the past happenings wouldn't have happened and might she wouldn't have met a loving person like Siddhant.

"Maybe we somehow knew it" Simar said. She always wanted her sister to be with her. And this only happened of the past which they never wanted to remember. But it was best for all of them and also she get a loving husband how she wanted in an arrange marriage.

"But we didn't dreamt of a big family" Roli said with guilt, she feels guilty because they never thought of the family.

"But now we have them, and they love us more than anything" Simar said assuring her and not to feel guilty. Roli nodes, with a smile.

Siddhant and Prem were listening and get surprise; Roli and Simar have never told them about their dream house. Not even it has slipped from their tongue. May be their family and both of them are so much dependent on these two sisters and always they wanted something from them like they are their strength that they almost forgot may be they should have some dreams and may be they wanted some time with their husbands alone without any one. And they had failed of being good husbands and to protect them with love and happiness. And they promised themselves that they would protect, care and love them till death.

But promise are to broken, and their promised broke the day they couldn't save their beloved wives, when they needed them most. May be they should have called them taking their last breathe. May be they had called their name for help, or may have screamed their name to protect them. And they were here with their family, enjoying the victory of winning against Meghna Singhania, and their wives were facing the death. They are shame of themselves and the reason they act silent with their internal battle.

Hope you love the update. Do like and Comments.

LOVE Aish

26/4/15

Edited by PrincessAish - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
super..start..waiting for next update...loved the concept...😊..dream house...
Edited by sowmya567 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: sowmya567

super..start..waiting for next update...loved the concept...😊..dream house...



THANKS A LOT DEAR.

WELL WE NEVER SAW ANYTHING OF ROSIM DREAMS, SO I THOUGH TO PUT IT HERE. CVS ONLY MADE ROSIM TO DO EVERYTHING FOR THEIR FAMILY NOT FOR THEMSELVES😡

SO I PUT IT HERE😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Beautiful...so emotional...
Waiting for the next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
it was well written...
So dream house?
Will roli and simar dream come true?
even if it comes true... they cant see and enjoy it...

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