ROSID FF:--'LOVE IS LIFE' update pg 77 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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haii friends thanku so much for comments...

not exepcted this many comments...

thanku to all...

in few min i am going to up-lode...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1

Mumbai city

Their was one big gate for two houses..
both buildings r same
(in one house mataji,rajendra,sujatha,and siddhant..will stay in another house Jamanlal,meena,and simar will stay)
Inside gate a garden and park area...with swing and slide...two children's r playing
(one girl..one boy r of same age of 6 years)in park area.. three..ladies r sitting in garden and talking about meena delivery date...and health...

suddenly they heard girl crying they went to her and asked her what happened simar

simar----ma see sid is not giving swing... he is only playing..

meena---take after some time now he is playing swing...so you play slide...

simar----no ma i wont swing ask him to give.

sujatha----sid give her same time you play slide.

sid----no ma i came first i wont give her tell her to play slide.

simar started crying...

sujatha--.meena..mataji all trying to convince them but both r not listening...

then they heard car sound...its rajender and jamanalal...coming..

Rajendra and Jamnalal just returned from office..and saw simar crying so they too went to her and asked y she is crying...mataji told they r fighting for swing.

Rajendra:---Simar beta..dont cry we will bring new swing tmrw and fix it dont cry..now

simar stopped crying...

mataji:--Is this is way to convince childrens

Rajendra:--- ma you know about sid and simar they always fight for one thing...
sid will not listen to us he will do only what he likes...simar is sensitive she cry for every thing..what can we do..so its better to bring every thing two..

mataji:---but beta we should convince them and we should tell them to share every thing.

sid:--mataji i wont share any thing with simar if she wont buy new one to her...

mataji---sid beta she is your friend you should share every thing..

sid---no she is not my friend.and she cry for every thing..that i dont like.

simar ----no mataji he will always fight with me..i dont like him...i wont new swing

sid and simar again started fighting

sujath--now don't start fighting again we will bring new swing and slide tmrw...

mataji--see this two r fighting this much..if new member comes what will be the situation
i dont know how it be..

Jamanlal----new member..who...

mataji smiled and said your next baby...

Jamanlal----oh k and smiled.and said..i am sure they fight more and we should bring three slides and three swings

and they r discussing about meena..health..

sid and simar playing one swing and other one slide.and enjoying..

days r passing but sid and simar fight continuing...it never stoped. one r other thing they will fight..both don't like each other
one day both r playing with meena and sujatha suddenly...simar sat on meena...meena felt pain..inside

sujatha :---simar. ma is felling pain came and sit with me

simar;--y what happened...y ma is feeling pain

so sujatha and meena told her a baby is inside stomach. so you should take care...you should not jump like this...(sid also hearing all this conversation) and they told simar your sibling you should take care of baby ..

simar--- k ma..i will take care..and baby will be my friend...

meena---not friend your sibling..whom you wont sister r brother

simar ---- i wont sister...she will play with me

meena ---- yes she will play...

sid:--no she will play with me she is my friend...

simar --no my sister..she will play with me

they started fighting for baby...now..(who is not even born)

sujatha and meena r in..confuse this many days they use to fight for toy and items..we should bring two now what to do..now they r fighting for baby
oh god how to manage!

day by day their fighting increased for baby...

days r passing now..its..meena delivery time

all r waiting outside operation theatre..with tension...but their also.. sid and simar r fighting for baby..

simar----my sister ..

sid----my friend...

they heard a girl sound...

doctor came out and conformed its girl and .both..r fine... you can go and see them..

all r happy and greeting each other..sid rushed inside room

baby is in cradle..sid went near her..

sid was exited to see her she is so cute..face...with big eyes..black hair...

sid touched her hand and baby was similing by seeing sid

sid was so happy to see her smiling...

all came inside and saw sid is playing with baby..all r happy..

simar came near sid

simar----she is my sister...

sid---my friend..

sid is not allowing simar to touch..

simar started crying

sid--see you always cry..see my friend how she is smiling by seeing me...I LOVE HER

I LOVE YOU ROLI! my friend

All r shocked by sid words...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful!!! 👏
Very good start!!!

I am excited to read more..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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uff...it took 2 to 3 hours to think..and type one part..i really don't no banu akka...how your giving more updates daily...and who r writing FF's wow you r doing good job...i dont no how you r getting stamina to write...for one part..i my gone no more stamina yaar...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: banuprasa

Beautiful!!! 👏

Very good start!!!

I am excited to read more..😊



thanku..so much akka...not excepted comments..and not you all will like...
but now really exited to give next part soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: deeksha.aiyer

nice concept.. all the best👏👏👏



thanku..so much...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: harsharosid-8

Wow sowmya dear u startd ff? Gr8 and superb introduction...carry on all d best... waiting fr update eagrly



yes starting my first FF' hope you all will enjoy...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Wow lovely update 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: banuprasa

All the best Sowmya dear...👍🏼

Its beautiful start... 👏

Do continue with the FF...😊




thanku akka...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: tigress.meenu

superb start sowmya ...

eagerly waiting..continue soon😊


1st part is uploaded...enjoy and thanku so much..i will try my best to give update i think you all will like...

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