ROSID FF: UNDER THE SKY LANTERNS by Archana Vinod - Page 25

Created

Last reply

Replies

260

Views

37.8k

Users

15

Likes

608

Frequent Posters

greshin thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

Emotional update di. It made me to cry seeing those parents' feelings. No one can bear it

Nd yes jamanlal is true. This law can do nothing. Not even punish them according to the crime they have done. They destroyed a family completely

Sometimes I even think like what sin a girl has done to suffer all the pains? Cant the almighty god at least save her from all these pains

I don't want to think more abt this. Its making me to remember all the news I've read related to this nd making me to cry more. Heartless bi****s

...Deeksha.... thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
yeas di emotional update it is quiet natural to see father's sobs for his delicate kid
he can bear every harshness for hin but a small injury to his child pricks his heart...


update next soon di
rishi_rosid thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Update has touched the heart di. Really its unimaginable the condition of roli like girls. really its uncontrollable for any parents to see there child in that position. Really emotional di.
Update soon di.
Archana_Vinod thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
UNDER THE SKY LANTERNS - PART 43
By Archana Vinod


ELSEWHERE IN A GOVERNMENT HOSPITAL - MORNING

A general ward filled to half capacity with patients and their relatives.

Doctors and nurses make their daily rounds, flitting from bed to bed and monitoring the patients' progress.

Amongst them is Prakash, the incorrigible wretch. He lies alone on his hospital bed, unwanted and uncared for. His partner in crime, Raman, is nowhere to be seen.

The doctor stops by and checks his report. He is quite stable as compared to last night. Yet, the intense damage done by the snake's deadly venom lingers. His skin is bruised and swollen at several spots and his clothes are a stinking mess. Under his bed is a pan loaded with bloody vomit which the nurse clears up.

DOCTOR: Haven't your relatives turned up yet?

Prakash simply stares at the doctor like a zombie. He is as good as dead and has no energy left to even lift a finger.

Just then, an attendant turns up with a man in his late 30's.

ATTENDANT: Sir, this man is the patient's relative.

Prakash's eyes darts towards the "relative". A look of confusion spreads across his face. He definitely does not seem to know this man.
DOCTOR: Oh, good that you came. We get plenty of abandoned cases in a day, I was beginning to wonder if he's the same.

THE MAN: Oh no. Not to worry. I'm there to take care of him now.

Prakash flinches. "Take care of him"? Something's not right about the tone in which he said that, nothing's right about this man at all.
The doctor and his assistants carry on with their rounds.
The man, Ram Chaudhary, sits beside Prakash on the bed and spots the bloody stains on the bed sheet.

RAM: Seems like you had a tough night.

Prakash simply looks at Ram suspiciously. Who is this guy and what does he want? Why did he say that he's my relative?

RAM: (reads Prakash's mind) Sorry about that. I had to lie to the doctor about being your relative. I didn't have a choice. He wouldn't let me touch you with a ten foot pole if I told him that I am a police officer. See the gravity of the situation?

The words "Police officer" sends a huge jolt of electricity blasting through Prakash. He is in trouble! Big trouble!

RAM: Anyways, coming to the topic. I've been told that the body of a woman was retrieved from the dumping site, right from where you got picked up. She was apparently gang-raped and tortured mercilessly.

The panic begins to build in intensity. He is breathless with anxiety. Prakash wishes that he could just get up and run away. He actually even wishes that he never committed the offense last night!

RAM: I believe you know something about it. Yeah?

Prakash doesn't respond.

Suddenly, out of the blue, the police officer makes a swift move ----

---- grabs Prakash's crotch and twists it violently.

Prakash jumps up and SCREAMS in horrendous pain.

RAM: Chup! Chup! Not a sound!

Prakash YELPS like a wounded dog.

The noise draws the attention of the other patients and the doctor.

DOCTOR: (rushes to Ram) Hey! You! What the hell are you doing?

Ram ignores them.

RAM: (to Prakash) Come on. Spit it out. Word by word.

PRAKASH: (sobs) Ahhhahhhahh!!! Please let go!

RAM: First tell me what I need to know.

Prakash begins to gag up blood.

DOCTOR: You! What the f**k! Let him go this instant or I'll call the police.

RAM: (continues to ignore the doctor) Come on! Speak up!

PRAKASH: (sobs) It was us! We kidnapped the girl and raped her!

RAM: (doesn't let go) Go on.

PRAKASH: (sobs) We took her to the site to burn her! We did it! Now please let gooo!

RAM: (still doesn't let go) We? Who's we?

PRAKASH: Ahhh! Stop!

RAM: Wrong answer. (twists it harder) Try again.

PRAKASH: Hey maaa!!!

DOCTOR: (to his attendants) Throw this fellow out! Call the police!

The attendants close in on Ram, but he waves a threatening finger at them.

RAM: Stay back. Or I'll twist his balls off. (to Prakash) So where were we? Ah yes. Who was your accomplice?

PRAKASH: (whimpers) Ram--- Ram---

RAM: Sorry? (squeezes with all his might)

PRAKASH: Ahhh!!!! Raman! Raman!

RAM: Where is he?

PRAKASH: I don't know. (gets squeezed again) Ahhh! He-he lives behind the station, the third house!

RAM: (finally lets go and gets up) Thank you. I'll see you again.

Ram walks out of the hospital and rings up Nitin.

RAM: Sir? I've caught hold of the first person in the government hospital. Prakash. The second one Ram lives close by. We're going to move in and get him.


... TO BE CONTINUED








...Deeksha.... thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
di now its time to threw this bloody bas***ds into a hell filled life...

update soon di
rishi_rosid thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Di a small request you he'll out punishment to those stupid bas***ds who think girls not even a human being they are only enjoyable machines. I want to see them severely punished. Waiting for next update di. Update soon di.
jassro thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
soul wrenching story I pray god tat no girl or child in the world shld face this hell pls punish them and screw them to the core cut them into pieces bloody rascals
nithyaji thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Really it is sad. But hope everything is fine
Archana_Vinod thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago

UNDER THE SKY LANTERNS - PART 44

By Archana Vinod

DAY 3 -

Desperate dailies have managed to scoop up this fresh piece of news to fill up their empty columns:

"In another grueling and shocking case that rocked the city of Ahmedabad, a young woman in her late 20's was brutally raped by two men in the wee hours of the weekend and left to die at a garbage dumping site with multiple fractures and grievous injuries. The main accused, Prakash, 32, is currently being treated at a government hospital in town. The other, Raman, 27, a taxi driver, continues to be at large. We tried contacting her parents but they chose to remain unavailable for comments."

AT THE HOSPITAL PARKING LOT - MORNING

Remo and Vimla approach Siddhant's car and finds him fast asleep in the back seat with his long legs dangling out of the window.

Remo slaps him gently on the legs with the rolled up newspaper in his hand.

REMO: Oye!

Siddhant wakes up with a start.

VIMLA: Morning.

REMO: Wake up buddy. It's ten.

Siddhant pulls in his legs and straightens up with a groan, rubbing his eyes and stiff neck as he does.

REMO: (straightens up the newspaper) Check this out.

Siddhant takes the paper curiously and begins to read, his eyes go round as he does. It's the article about the ill-fated incident of their friend Roli.

SIDDHANT: (mutters angrily) What the hell. Which paper is this? (flips to the front page - the Mumbai trumpet)

REMO: Tell me about it. God damn people, they have no clue what they're up to. They'd do anything to sell their lousy paper.

VIMLA: How can they exaggerate something like this? This is so awful!

Siddhant's eyes dart through the words. Spiteful and derogatory comments about Roli's ordeal linked with the provocative dressing sense of modern women fill up the space.

SIDDHANT: (throws the paper aside and pulls out his phone) Find the number. We need to screw them now. I'm getting Nitin's help.

INSIDE THE HOSPITAL

Atul walks along the corridors, disbelief and anxiety written all over his face. He had just come to know about why Roli never answered his calls or messages that night, about what had happened to her. He walks past Jamanlal huddled on the chairs in the waiting room and peeks through the glass on the ICU's door.

He feels a painful stab in his chest as he sees her condition. She is barely recognizable with the fiery purplish bruises masked onto her eyes, the shattered cheek bones and blue, swollen face. Her arm is plastered up and she is wound up to several life supporting aids and surrounded by many high tech gadgets to monitor her heart rate, blood pressure, brain activity etc.

He turns towards her father. He has his head resting on the wall and his heavy eyes fixed in a blank stare onto nothing particular. Clearly, he is overloaded with anxiety and grief. Atul has no clue what to say or how to console him.

Maybe it's not a good idea to talk to him now, he thinks, he will get more upset. I'd better talk to the doctor first.

THE MUMBAI TRUMPET OFFICE - LATER

Siddhant is accompanied by Vimla and the plain clothes officer Ram Chaudhary.

SIDDHANT: (at the front desk) We'd like to see the Chief Editor.

The receptionist, a shabbily dressed woman in her 40's glowers at them.

RECEPTIONIST: (rudely) Do you have an appointment?

SIDDHANT: No. We---

RECEPTIONIST: (cuts him off) Get an appointment first. No walk-ins please.

Siddhant sighs and hangs his head in frustration before BANGING his fist furiously on the table. The receptionist jumps onto her feet, startled. To her surprise, he storms away to the Chief Editor's cabin.

RECEPTIONIST: Hey! You! Stop there! You can't go in there!


RAM: Why not?


RECEPTIONIST: Because... because you cant!!!


RAM: (displays his ID) Go down and have a coffee break while we talk with your boss.

RECEPTIONIST: (panics) What!!? What the hell is this?

They ignore her and walk off to join Siddhant in the cabin.

THE CHIEF EDITOR'S CABIN

Siddhant OPENS the door wildly and finds the Chief Editor, laughing and talking on the phone.

C. EDITOR: (pauses, to Siddhant) Who are you? Who asked you to come in? Shirley "

Siddhant grabs his phone and ends the call.

C. EDITOR: Hey! What the f---

SIDDHANT: Shush. We need to talk.

The editor glowers in confusion as Ram and Vimla join them in the cabin.

BACK TO THE HOSPITAL WAITING ROOM

Atul returns from the doctor's cabin. He looks shaken up as he stands before the ICU's door and peeks through the glass to see Roli once again. The details of her injuries and present condition stab him painfully.

The trauma she suffered on that fateful night had given her a fracture on the skull and an inflamed brain that caused her to go into a coma. Repeated strikes to her forearm had shattered the bones which the doctor replaced with iron rods. She was covered in scratches and bites, but the worst, the men had ravaged her so brutally that she bled from her ripped and tattered groin.

With the injury to her head, it's a question if she will make it. And even if she comes out of her coma, she may never be the same again.

Atul feels an unbearable sense of guilt building up in him. If I hadn't called her to the party that evening, then this wouldn't have happened. She would have been safe. Untouched. It's... it's my fault. In a way, I am responsible for how she is now... please God... just give me one chance, I'll do everything in my power to bring her back to normal. Please... let her live.

... TO BE CONTINUED

Edited by Archana_Vinod - 10 years ago
...Deeksha.... thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
oh god nonsence is at the peak before that stupid bas***ds made the hell of a girl..and now this newspaper ppl are very desperate to brig girl to the edge of hill to end up their lives,,
disgusting people

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".