MY FIRST ROSID OS, 'LOVE'

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi friends...i wrote a short story on ROSID for the first time & i'm dying to show u all...it is something new which has surprised me too...

pls share ur views n opinions on this experiment & give ur valuable feedback😊

LOVE ROSID❤️...


She is resting in her home called HEAVEN...


Waves of melodious tunes from a blissful flute, is enchanting to her ears...

Her heart is swinging along with the tunes & a smile adorned her luscious lips...


She is mesmerized, & with an excitement to know from where it is reaching her, she opened her two curved lashes which are hiding her beautiful luring eyes that can spellbind anyone & make them lost...


She got up & placed her velvety feet on the spongy clouds which are rushing to be under her footsteps while she walks...

She confirmed the music which is creating flutters in her heart is not from her surroundings as there is no such instance which is exciting her to this extent...

She closed her eyes once again to listen the magical tunes that r enticing her to step towards its flow...she opened the doors of heaven without opening her eyes, & stepped out of her home...

The mellowing tunes got addicted to her...she swayed her hands & legs to the rhythm...

Along with the changing notes, she whirled around excitedly...

She keeps dancing, unaware of where her heart is taking her...


But the planet EARTH was aware of her arrival... it took her inside, by welcoming her with a warm embrace of air which is surrounding her...it applied the scents of the Himalayan blooms onto her cheeks...the trees in the gardens of the forest, sent the cool breeze by gently waving its branches...

But nothing pleases her & stops her, except the delightful music floats that are filling her heart...

Here comes the moment when she was obstructed as her feet touched the ground...her eyebrows were furrowed sensing that something has disturbed her...she opened her eyes & got surprised seeing the beauties of the heavenly Earth...she felt that she was taken to another world of Heaven...

While she was being enticed by the nature, the mesmerizing tunes pulled her once again from a nearest distance...she gleefully turned towards its direction & moved from there in search of it...

The search turned into a longing with the flowing time...

Her eyes which never took the strain of searching something, smiled in sparkles of happiness, when they got stuck on a MAN, who sent her the calls to reach him...


She rushed towards him as she found him at last...

She stood in front of him...

Her charming radiance flashed on him...he was disturbed from playing the flute with that reflection ...he opened his closed eyes, but was unable to prolong his gaze against the intense brightness...he tries to stop it, by covering his eyes with his hands...

He then slowly peeped through the gaps of his fingers to discover what it is!!... when his looks got accustomed to that shining glimmer, he was frozen & awed...he was seeing someone who is ecstatically beautiful in the world that he knows...his hands went down allowing his eyes to look her serenely...her two vivacious eyes, the sculpted nose with flushed cheeks on either sides of her illuminating face, the pinkness studded lips, her slender neck hidden inside her floating hairs, her structural attiring & elegance, were dragging him to her...

He was uncontrollably lost to her...he left his flute down and moved to her, who was equally fascinated by him...he forwarded his hand to sense her...she too gave her hand, losing herself by looking into his desiring eyes...

They touched each other and a pleasure of joy got mirrored on their faces...she was all smiles when his warm breathes tickle her cheeks...

He was delightedly perplexed with what he was experiencing!!...he was unable to convince himself that she is from this nature which failed to show her anywhere, neither in his dreams, nor in the life he lived so far...he deliberately assumed her to be a celestial wonder in the form of a girl who came in search of him...he astonishingly looked into her eyes which were conveying the same...he realized the pain & longing in her eyes for him...as just, she read his conscience & smiled to him...

now they know each other...

He pulled her gently into his hands ...they cuddled each other into a snuggling embrace to rest their longings...

She was thrilled in his affection, while he was lost in her love...they were loving each other irresistibly...

He cupped her face & moved to taste her lips, while she closed her eyes unable to resist his gazes, offering her lips to him...he touched her soft lips with his & kissed passionately...

She was mesmerized completely...she leaned onto him by tightening grip of her hands at his back & reciprocated to his kiss...

there was nothing to disturb them in the silence prevalent garden...

Their love for each other was enraging with every passing moment...they welled out that anguish with their wet kisses...

Got influenced by their overpowering eternal love, the floral creepers shed its flowers to arrange a bed for their sleepless sleeps, scattering their fragrances all over...


He pulled out his lips from hers, and took her into his caring hands by lifting her off the ground...she was just staring him as she was still in the trance of his kisses...he placed her on the fluffy bed of scents and leaned beside her...he pecked on her cheeks & clasped her hands with his...he continued by kissing her eyes, her nose, her lips & getting down to her neck, he placed his lips in the curves of her neck & her shoulders further...

she dragged him closely by running her fingers into his hair...she caressed his cheeks & kissed him...

She allowed him to hide her in him, when he took out her wearing...

He delightedly took all her love & rained his love by wetting her everywhere...

Both prolonged loving each other until they get fulfilled...

The moon slightly pushed away the sun, to share the greatness along with the sun of making them to become one in their presence...

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Rosidteja thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was awesome ss dear luved it
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Beautiful 👏
Good Try 👏
Romantic 😳

Edited by banuprasa - 10 years ago
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It is very different.Very nice dear👏 And so romantic
HerFiction thumbnail
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it was a great start and we cant say thisis ur first piece of writing...
all the best.
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Beautifully illustrated! Gives one 'the celestial being meets the shepherd boy' kind of feel. 👏
.Divya thumbnail
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Dreamy...😳
Good start. I like the pics too😃😃.,. Keep it up
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Very dreamy 😳 beautifully written 👏
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It doesn't look like your first try,every line was illustrated beautifully and was very lovely.
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awesome😃😃 beautiful and romantic ss😃😃😉😉 dear chaaalaa bagundi😃

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