ROSID FF: Love Forever Completed FF - Page 4

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justloverosid thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
wow Banu awesome . I love the way you are telling the story 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: justloverosid

wow Banu awesome . I love the way you are telling the story👍🏼



Thanks a lot dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Truely didi i love this ff a lot the new style is sooo impressive they way u bring the story through flashbacks awesome idea and i sug bring some beautiful songs where it explains the emotions😳
Edited by magicalrosid - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: magicalrosid

Truely didi i love this ff a lot the new style is sooo impressive they way u bring the story through flashbacks awesome idea and i sug bring some beautiful songs where it explains the emotions😳



Thanks a lot nishaa dear. Songs good idea but the problem is other than very few Hindi songs I don't know any other songs. I leave that audio section in scope of you.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Congrats for ur 10th FF didi😉
I like this new style of writing 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Sakthi-

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">Congrats for ur 10th FF didi😉</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">I like this new style of writing😊</font>



Thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 5


Simar undersood ROli was not pleased on any of her efforts of taking her all the way to the shopping centre. SHe decided to make her relaxed and let herself come out of her problem. Simar took ROli to the nearby park. They sat in the bench under the big tree while tree was spreading its branches to wave & give windy atmosphere. SImar knows ROli likes to sit in the park like this as she is nature lover and felt she will get relaxed.
Roli was sitting in the bench quiet and slowly closed her eyes while her thoughts rolled back to chew her memories.

Roli was sitting below similar big tree in their college ground with her friends making chit chat while Siddhant moved towards her angrily. ROli was aware he will be angry on her as they fought multiple times like a Cat & Rat all these days after those 1st & 2nd incidents. They look at each other for some or the other opportunity to fight with each other which has become their regular now.

Roli with s smirk on her face puzzled 'What is the headline today?'

SIddhant was angry enough and gave a chilli hot look at her and said 'How dare you can describe me as a cat to your friend?'

Roli replied 'Then what rat you are!!!'

Siddhant who was irritated 'Look I dont want you to come on my way anymore. Just remember'

Roli without any tension on his words uttered 'What will you do if I?'

Siddhant annoyed by her attitude 'I dont know what will I do myself'

Roli burst to laugh and was unable to control her for few minutes while Siddhant was more & more irritated.

ROli said 'I will meet you tomorrow morning in this same place around 8 AM, you better think before that and tell me what you wish to do me'

Without waiting for his response she marched towards her class with her friends with a smile.


Simar touched ROli to bring her back to conscious as they were getting late to go home. Roli without even uttering single words joined her to move towards their house. Even after reaching house there was no talks from her and she went to her room silently. Her parents & simar understood she is in some mental pressure due to some misunderstanding. They dont want to pressurise her and decided to leave her freely to get back on her own.





At Simla...

After office hours, SIddhant packed his bag and moved towards his car. When he was going in the car forward, his mind went backward towards that day where Siddhant went to meet Roli to that same place at 8 AM. He thought she was just telling, but to his surprise she was waiting for him.

Roli said 'Did you decided?'

Sid replied 'Yes. Before that i want to ask you something and also give you something'

Roli surprised and nod her head.

SId continued 'I wish to know why we both are behind each other from the 1st day of our meeting. THough i do understand few were accidental, but after that. I feel like we search ourselves opportunity to fight with each other and seek pleasure in it. Am I right? Infact yesterday you tease me that i dont have reply & you wish to meet me today morning at 8 AM. I was sure you will be here and that too without any of your friends standing alone for me. What all these, please tell me?'

Roli though agree with all his points got no answer to tell him as she normally hop in to argue or fight with him on other days. Roli face turned pink which answer his questions.

Sid recommence his talk 'I have told you what i wished to tell you. Now you wish to know what i wish to give you'

Roli eyes widened to know what it is.

To ROli's surprise Siddhant pulled her towards him and wrap his hands around her waist. He tighten his grip and look at her face. ROli face turned pale by his sudden action. ROli's eyes were wondering what she is going to do now. Siddhant with a smile moved towards her lips for a peck and looked at her eyes again.

SIddhant confess 'ROli, I Love You'

Siddhant moved towards her lips again to hold it for a while. Roli did not push him instead forward her hands to wrap around his waist. Their lips moved apart after a while...

Siddhant eyes were searching for ROli's answer for his love confession while ROli blushed completely and down her eyelids in shyness.

Siddhant asked 'ROli, i wish to hear your reply'

Roli confess 'Siddhant, I Love You too'


Siddhant by now reached his house in Simla. THe house is only house without his dear ROli inside and only turns to Home once she returns Siddhant thought himself.

The empty house was welcoming him which was again & again reminding him on the mistake he did 3 days back at the time of returning home similarly like this...




Edited by banuprasa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: banuprasa

Hi Friends,

I am not sure whether the updates are liked by you all. Please provide your valuable comments & suggessions. WIll get back to you by tomorrow.

sorry banu for not posting the comments as was busy with other stuff.
Banu your adaption of this new style of narrating the story is superb👍🏼
Please continue the good work and i promise 2moro i will comment on each and every update and you have to give more update as it will be my workfree day😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: justloverosid

sorry banu for not posting the comments as was busy with other stuff.

Banu your adaption of this new style of narrating the story is superb👍🏼
Please continue the good work and i promise 2moro i will comment on each and every update and you have to give more update as it will be my workfree day😉



Thanks dear. I know you were busy. But as I adopted new it was my personal tension whether it is good.

Will sure give more updates tomorrow for you.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
hi didi... Awesome updates!!!! very nice way of depicting the story... 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

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