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Posted: 11 years ago
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very interesting banu...want a very long update..pls pls pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: mvlakshmiprasan

very interesting banu...want a very long update..pls pls pls



Thanks dear. Long update will try as I am updating from my mobile
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 7


Roli (orphanage) was walking through the management people room.

She heard the conversation between them that they are not getting any good boy for roli. If any also expecting money to marry. They were wondering what to do.

After hearing all the conversations roli went back and started thinking deeply.


Prema called someone.

Prema: I will SMS you an address. Send someone from your gang to that address where you will find a girl roli. I will MMS her photo too. She need to be kidnapped and kept in far place for at least 1 month.

Person: OK madam. We will sure do. Why not for you. Intact this is small job.

Prema: take care that no one should know while take her from there. Also no one should get her till 1 month.

Person: don't worry we will take care.

Prema: I will transfer the amount as usual.

Prema disconnected the line.

She sent the address & photo.




Roli (orphanage) went to see the management person the next day.

Roli: mam, I want to talk to you

Mam: what is it roli?

Roli: you have taken all pains all these days. But now I don't want to be here & give you more burden. I have decided to go out and take care of my own

Mam: where will you go? What will you do?

Roli: don't worry mam, I will try for some job or something. I will take care of my own.

Mam: but roli nothing is known to you

Roli: let me try. If I am unable to survive anywhere you are anyway here.

Mam: roli...


Roli: please mam. You got so many kids to take care. I am grown enough. Let me go

Mam remained silent & roli step out of orphanage with a small bag holding her 2 dress.

Early morning sun rays were welcoming roli to her new world.


Roli(with parents) was in her room.

Someone climb up through the pipe.

He enter roli room through the window.

Roli turned towards window hearing the sound.

Roli was shocked.

Roli: siddhant!!!

Siddhant(gangster) who entered to kidnap roli got shocked

Siddhant: how do you know my name?

Roli: what question you are asking. How do I don't know your name?

Siddhant: its normal I know your name. But who told my name to you?

Roli: are you kidding?

Siddhant: I can't understand what are you telling. Let me do my job.

Without roli understand what he means, he spray the medine on roli & roli faints.

Siddhant look for the way out & planned well.

Siddhant took roli in his arms and moved from there hiding them from others and reached the innovative which he bring.

Siddhant out her inside the vehicle and he got into the vehicle.

Siddhant started the long drive thinking how come the girl knows my name.
Edited by banuprasa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely update Banu and what time is there don't tell me being awake all this time.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: justloverosid

Lovely update Banu and what time is there don't tell me being awake all this time.



Thanks dear. I wake up at 3 am &:was not getting sleep. So gave update. Now time is 4:30 am
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love Your FF very much and Banu you are getting better with each new FF.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: justloverosid

Love Your FF very much and Banu you are getting better with each new FF.



Thanks dear. All because of all you friends encouragement dear. Thanks to all my friends for that.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Banu I have to go to work today and so will not be able to post comment on each update. From work I try to catch up with the FF but it all depends on the net work. I may be able to read but unable to press like button and post my comments. Even you don't see my comment please know that I'm reading and enjoying the ff very much.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: justloverosid

Banu I have to go to work today and so will not be able to post comment on each update. From work I try to catch up with the FF but it all depends on the net work. I may be able to read but unable to press like button and post my comments. Even you don't see my comment please know that I'm reading and enjoying the ff very much.



Its OK dear. Read & comment as per your convenience.

Good day!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 8


Jamanlal & gauri started searching roli all over the house.

Roli was missed.

They got tensed.

Gauri:;where she might have gone in this morning? Please go & search for her immediately.

Jamanlal took the two wheeler and started his search.

He was looking for her all the way but in vain.

He was thinking, where she might have gone. She never did like this before. Is she not interested in the marriage. Is she in love with someone. If so she can at least tell us.

So many thought were occupied in his mind.

Few some more time in search he finally reached the temple.

He went inside the temple parking the vehicle outside.

He was praying to god.

Jamanlal: oh god! What is happening? Where is my daughter? Where she went suddenly? Please show her to me.

He was praying sincerely.

He rang the bell of the temple.

Hearing the bell sound, roli (orphanage) who just reached temple praying to show the way to lead her life turned her face.

Jamanlal was very happy.

He rushed towards roli.

Jamanlal: roli you came to temple only. You know how much we were worried.

Roli was surprised.

Roli was thinking, who is this? How he know my name? Is he sent by the mam?

Jamanlal: roli what are you thinking. Let's go home. maaji will be worried & waiting for you.

He took her holding her hands to the two wheeler.

Roli was yet to recover from the shock.

In the meantime she liked someone is talking to her in affectionately.

Also he said maaji is waiting

Roli was eager to know who us that.

Roli sat behind jamanlal & started her journey towards her home.


Gauri felt relaxed on seeing roli.

Gauri: roli were did you go? You know how much we were tensed

Jamanlal: she was in the temple only. Don't tell her anything.

Gauri: am I too interested to hurt her telling anything. Till date we never even scold her. I was worried. That's why said do.

Gauri hug roli.

Roli was getting different sort of feeling inside which she till date never felt.

Roli was thinking, whether to tell that she don't know them.

But she was wondering how they know my name.

In the meantime she saw the photos of roli with her parents in the wall.

Now roli is clear what the problem is.

Still she was not interested to lose the affection she is getting in her life for the first time.

This made her silent.

Roli too forward her hands to hug her mother for the first time.

Roli was excited.

Edited by banuprasa - 11 years ago

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