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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: sneha02

This is soo beautiful... this slow growing attraction is sooo romantic

Lovely idea... n i can see the restraint that you are working on to brew things with ease n care... good job must say...
You are so good with ideas n execution... n balancing two ff is not easy.. respect ya for this but dont stress...
Thanks for this lovely work


Thanks a lot Dear. Also thanks for your appreciation & concern Dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Wow it's really intresting. Plz update soon didi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rolidivedi

Wow it's really intresting. Plz update soon didi.


Will do dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Part 9


Sid was waiting in the baggage area.

One girl was coming towards the baggage area.

She went near Sid.

Sid: Are you the one with whom my bag got interchanged.

Girl: Yes I am the one..


Sid in a second realised that it was his imagination & no one is around.

Sid was thinking, oh this RO will make me mad it seems. Where are you RO, Please come fast.




Roli was rushing towards her college.

Her friend met her on the way and hold her from going.

Friend: Roli, where are you going very fast. Time is there for college to start.

Roli: But I got some work. Thats why.

Friend: What work you have in this morning time.

Roli: I need to complete the project

Friend: Which project?

Roli: I got to play the match

Friend: What are you talking which match?

Roli: Not match. Some assignment.

Friend: ROli I think you gone mad. What happend to you suddenly?

Roli: Oh dear. I will talk to you later.

Roli did not wait for her reply & moved from there.



Sid: Oh dear. Where are you? Is my guess not right. Are you not going to come in search of me? Am I right waiting here or not?



Roli was nearing the college while her vehicle tyre got puncture

Roli: Oh god.

Roli left the vehicle in near by service shop.

Roli rushed to college by walking & running.



Sid received call from his friend.

Friend: Sid where are you. We all are waiting for you in our regular place since long.

Sid: You all go to college. It may take time for me to come

Friend: When we went to college without you Sid. Please come. We will wait for you

Sid was confused whether to wait or go.

College starting hour was also nearing.

Sid : Now the college is going to start in few minutes, let me go out now.


Sid decided to go & walked towards the door of the college

Roli entered the door of the college.

Roli & Siddhant crossed each other in the door of the college without looking at each other.



Roli rushed towards the baggage area, she found a guy waiting for her.

The guy turned towards her.

Roli: Are you the one who took my bag & left yours?

Guy: Yes. I have been waiting for your since long.


Roli realised no one there & it was her imagination.

Roli: Today only that Mala see me & start talking. This vehicle too get puncture today only.

Roli was very upset

Roli: I dont even know whether SID came here or not.

Roli was confused.

Roli: Let me go to the classroom now. The bell rang & already the class is going to start.




Sid rushed towards his college while ROli rushed towards her class half heartedly...
Edited by banuprasa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Very interesting Banu I love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Truely didi this amazing this ff makes me so crazy can't really wait plz update soon and sorry for not commenting before...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: magicalrosid

Truely didi this amazing this ff makes me so crazy can't really wait plz update soon and sorry for not commenting before...


Thanks Dear. Will update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Congrats on your 5th ff.
Lovely update
I'm sorry for the late reply
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sara1990

Congrats on your 5th ff.

Lovely update
I'm sorry for the late reply


Its ok dear. Thanks.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 10

Sid started thinking on how to locate 'RO'

Sid: RO did not come to baggage area, then where can I find her & how?

Sid was confused.

Sid: I cant go to all colleges & see the girls starting with the letter 'RO'




Roli was also in deep thought of 'SID'

Roli: SID where are you. what can be my next step to know who you are? Which college you are & through whom I can locate you?



Roli & Siddhant was in deep thinking.

They went near the cupboard and took out the bags.

Opened the bags and took out the dress & diary.

ROli: SID, I miss you

SID: RO, I miss you


ROli & Siddhant caresses the diary.

They got the idea struck in their mind.



Sid: RO missed her diary, so she may go to the same shop to purchase a new diary to continue writing.

Roli: SID may go to the diary shop to purchase a new one.

Roli & Siddhant decided to go to the diary shop in search of their heart.



ROli started the vehicle & rushed towards the shop.

Roli went to the diary section & saw anyone has come to purchase new diary of same design.

Roli was eagerly waiting to see her 'SID'



SID on the way was struck in the traffic.

He got irritated.

Sid: Now only all the traffic problems will raise.

After few minutes only the traffic got cleared.

SID rushed towards the shop.




Roli got phone call from SImar.

Simar; Roli, where are you.

Roli: Simar didi, i am in the shopping center.

Simar: It is good dear. Can you purchase few items which I tell you.

Roli: Didi, I am waiting

Roli stopped thinking how & what can she tell to Simar

Simar: Roli, what are you waiting for.

Roli: Nothing didi tell me.

Simar gave list of few item to purchase in the shopping complex.

As Roli was waiting for long time, she thought lets go & purchase those items.

In the meantime, she thought what if she miss him while going there.

Roli took the new diary and went near the staff of the shop.

Roli: Sir, I need a help from you. If any person come in search of this diary with name SID can you tell him that a girl came here for buying this diary & gave this for him.

Roli thought of writing her details in the diary, but she is not sure whether her guess is right. What if he does not come unwantedly her contact details will be left witht he staff of the shop.

Roli left the place and started purchasing the items told by Simar.




Sid reached the diary section & was searching for same design diary.

Seeing Sid searching for the diary, the staff came near SID with the diary gave by Roli.

Staff; Sir is your name SID

Sid: Yes. But how do you know my name.

Staff: One girl came here and gave me this diary & told to give this to person who comes here with name SID.

Sid was surprised.

Sid took the diary from that staff & gone through the diary whether any contact details updated by RO.

But the diary was blank. Still he was happy that his RO came to the shop like he thought and also gave the diary for him.

Sid too took a new diary and gave to the staff again.

Sid: Thanks for your help. In case if that girl come here again, ask whether she is RO & give this diary to her.

The staff was confused what is happening.

But he took the diary which SID gave.

Sid happily took the diary given by Roli and gave a kiss to it.

Sid moved towards the door of the shop & turned left towards outside

while Roli from right turned inside the shop.

Before ROli reach the diary section, SID went out of the shopping complex to his car.

Roli reached the diary section & the staff came near her.

Staff: Madam, as you said one person with name SID came here & I gave the diary to him.

Roli was excited.

Roli: Is it.

Staff; Yes. In the meantime, is your name is RO.

Roli: Yes sir.

Staff: Then he told me to give this diary to you.

Staff gave the diary given by SID to Roli & moved from there.

Roli opened the diary, but she too got the diary empty.

Though the diary was empty, it was filled with SID"s love for Roli.

Roli took the diary and gave a tight hug to it.

Roli blushed.

Roli moved towards her vehicle


Roli & Siddhant were moving towards their houses in their vehicles, but

their hearts were moving towards each other's...




Edited by banuprasa - 11 years ago

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