premar & rosid ff 'DESTINY' part 8 updt - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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kk Radhika!!!
convey my wishes to ur sister 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ok radhu convey my wishes to ur sis too 😊 but update ur ff radhu plz m waiting 😉
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so happie to see shoaib as prem :D
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Part 2

Next day

Presid getting ready for office. When they reach 2 d car.

Sid: today I ll drive d car.

Prem: no. not at all.

Sid takes keys frm his hand.

Sid: u sit and I ll drive.

Sid then drives and prem is sitting. He is driving d car so fast.

Prem: sid! sid! drive slowly…..plz……

Bt sid is nt listening him. Then suddenly prem's eyes fall on simar standing at d bus stop. He is unable 2 takeoff his eyes frm her beautiful face. Then suddenly he realizes a girl falls in front of their car.

Prem: siddhant careful!

Sid: oh shit!

He stops d car. And both comes out. D girl is not other then roli.

Sid: u find nor any else bt my car for dying.

Roli: excuse me

Sid put his fingers on his ears.

Sid: I hate girls voice. And I ……..

All three: hate girls……

Sim comes.

Sim: roli! Wht have u done now?

Prem is staring at her continuously……

Roli: I hvnt done anything. By mistake I came in front of their car and they r……

Sim first look at sid putting finger in his ear then she tells prem

Sim: I m really sorry. By mistake my sis came in front. Now u may go.

Rosim leaves.

Sid: these girls….!

Prem: let it be sid. Perhaps they r frm good family.

Sid: I dnt mind I jst……..

Presid: hate girls.

Prem: now let's go we r late.

They sit in d car and drives away.

At evening

Presid office

Prem: sid I m going 2 get maa's medicine and I ll reach home directly frm there.

Sid: k prem.. u go I ll handle here and ll go home.

Prem: k then I m going.

Sid: ya..

Prem then leaves d office and reach at medicine store. There prem see roli.

Prem: hey roli!

Roli: prem hi!

Prem: wht r u doing here?

Roli: why people come 2 medicine store? 2 get medicine naa.

Prem:oh yes. By d way I m really sorry.

Roli: y?

Prem: for d morning incident and how sid speaks 2 u….

Roli: that's k. no need 2 say sorry especially u.

Prem: he always behave wid u badly and still u love him.

Roli: pyar to dil se kiya jata hai. Aur mujhe siddhantji k dil se pyar hua hai. Wo bahar se jitney sakht dikhte hain sayad dil se utne nahi hain.(love happened heart 2 heart and I love siddhantji's heart. And how he look so strict and rude types frm outside I know he doesn't like that frm inside)

Prem: and if u dnt get sid love then?????

Roli: one wish of my heart 2 get love of siddhantji and marry him and dnt care that if I die after marrying him on d same day.

Prem: I too wish frm d deep of my heart that sid realizes ur love.

Roli gives a smile and goes. Prem also reach home.

Rosim house

Sim is waiting 4 roli. Its so late and she hasn't return 2 home.

Sim: where this girl is? Oh god wht I wish this girl hasn't done any trouble now.

Roli then comes.

Sim: roli whr were u? u know naa I always worried abt u? why u became so late. If papa would hv asked me abt u then wht would hv I answered him? Haan. Tell.

Roli is looking at sim smilingly.

Sim: look at this girl I m worrying 4 her and she is smiling at me. Roli why r u smiling haan?

Roli: coz my di loves me a lot.(hugging sim) di. I am late coz I met one of my friend and talked. And ab papa look he hasn't asked abt me till now. Then why u always worry abt me I m not a kid now didi. U know it naa.

Sim: so wht roli. Still u ll b a kid 4 me coz I m ur mother. Understand.

Roli: yes didi…….(tears rolls frm her eyes) I had't seen maa. And 4 me u are my maa, my sis, my everything I can do anything 4 u didi. Anything….

Sim: k. k. now let d emotion keep at a side. So now u go and get fresh and come 2 d dining hall 4 some snacks k.

Roli: k didi.

Next day

Prem was going temple on foot when he gets hit by a girl. All her things fall down.

Prem: oh.. I m really sorry ma'am.. u r ok na…?

When he looks he face, he finds she is simar.

Sim: yaa.. I m ok, thank u.

She leaves. Prem smiles and goes 2 temple. He prays:

"God, if my love is true then plz, let me meet her today,"

Simar is too in d temple she climbs the stairs and comes near prem.

Prem:"if she is written in my DESTINY then plz, let me know her name, let me b her friend, let me b her life partner."

Then both of them takes their hands 2 hit d bell. Unknowingly their hands touch and they hits d bell together. Then they look at each other. There was a long eye lock.

Tum bhi ho, main bhi hoon

You're here, I'm here too


Paas aao to keh doon

Come close, then I will tell you


Aakhir kyoon pal mein yun deewaana main ho gaya

Why, in a moment like this, I went mad


Tumhe jo maine dekha, tumhe jo maine jaana - 2

Since I saw you, since I came to know you


Jo hosh tha voh to gaya

Whatever sense I had, it went away

Then simar smiles and goes away. Prem follows her. But he misses her glimpse after some time. He searches her everywhere but unable 2 find her.


Badan ki yeh khushboo jagaane lagi jaadu

The fragrance of your body has awakened magic


To hoke beqaabu dil kho gaya

So, becoming uncontrolled, my heart got lost


Tumhe jo maine socha, tumhe jo maine maana

Since I thought of you, since I believed in you


Tumhe jo maine dekha, tumhe jo maine jaana

Since I saw you, since I came to know you


Jo hosh tha voh to gaya

Whatever sense I had, it went away

Then he saw her in a shop outside d temple. And goes 2 her.

Prem: excuse me…

Sim: yes please…

Prem: a…. actually I want 2 say sorry 2 u.

Sim: sorry??? For what?

Prem: a… all your things fell because of me…. I m really sorry.

Sim: ah… it's ok. No need of sorry.

Prem: so sweet of u. by d way, my name is Prem. And urs?

Sim: I am Simar.

Prem: simar…. Miss simar, would u mind being friend wid me?

Simar: friend…..

Prem: you have any problem???

Simar: not really, nice meeting u.

Prem: me too.

Simar: ok, see u later, my dad n sis must b waiting for me. Bye.

Prem: take care.

She leaves.

Prem: Simar… My Simar.

Roli in office. She goes inside. Boss is sitting facing his back 2 roli.

Roli: may I come in sir?

Boss: yes. Introduce urself.

Roli: I m ur new personal secretary.

Boss: wht? My secretary and a girl?

Roli: excuse me!

Boss turns. Both are shocked 2 see each other. Ofcourse d boss is siddhant.

Sid: u?

Roli: u?

Sid: wht r u doing in my office? Who told u that u r my secretary? Dnt u hv some logic abt it that a boss hv only d rights 2 appoint secretary and that personal secretary. I m not a foolish that I ll appoint a girl.

Roli is looking at him continuously.

KAISE BATAYEN KYUN TUJHKO CHAHEN,
(HOW CAN I TELL, WHY I LOVE U)
YARA BATA NA PAYEN...
(NO I CAN'T)
BATEIN DILON KI DEKHO JUBAAN KI,
(THINGS IN HEART)
AAKHE TUJHKO SAMJHAYEN...
(EYES WILL TELL U)
TU JANNE NA...
(U NEVER KNOW...)

Sid: hello! Answer me who has appointed u?

Roli: prem sir appointed me.

Sid: but he knows I….

Both: hate girls.

Sid: smart! If u knw dis. Then wht r u doing here?

Roli: sorry sir bt its my job. I hv 2 tolerate u for full day.

Sid: wht? R u mad? U shld say. I hv 2 tolerate u for full day.

Roli: whtever.

She goes and sits on d chair.

Sid: prem….come in front of me once. I ll surely kill u.

Roli: u ll kill him later. First discuss abt d meeting wid oberoi builders.

Sid: oh my god. Really prem has given u dis much details?

Roli: yes sir…

Sid: oh! I dnt knw how I m going 2 tolerate u.

Roli: dnt worry sir. Actually I m so much worry that how ll I tolerate a rude type person.

Roli then in mind thinks: sorry siddhantji talking wid u like this I m hurting myself. But 2 talk wid u. its necessary 2 b like u.

Sid: k. k. lets do d work. And yes u ll make some distance.

Roli: sir.. I know my limits…

To be continued…………

tried our best. hope u like it...😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hai i am the first omg really awesome update fantastic👏 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏everything is perfect 👍🏼really i was waiting for a long time 😭today only u update it plz don't take to much time this part is mindblowing .
Edited by magicalrosid - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
awesome update...every thing is perfect..keep going on!!! loved it 👏👏
Edited by ...hema23... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
nice update wish sid ill soon fall in love with roli wait 4r ur next part update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
rosid and premar scene awesome😊great job👍🏼pls continue soon thanks 4 the pm😛
Edited by visanmathi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
awesome dear really loved the premar scene and rosid s plz continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
wow wow wonderful update dear...premar scene so nice...roli loves sid.why sid hate girls like this😕k hope sid wil fall in love soon.thanks for pm.continue soon plsss...

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