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Posted: 12 years ago
What happen dear pls keep going u r doing great job 😊 so pls we will wait 4 next update Nd if u think that's enough so then fine otherwise pls keep enjoying us
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Posted: 12 years ago
why d?? dnt do it... othetwise I ll nt talk 2 u..
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Posted: 12 years ago
You can end it happily. You do have your other FF to continue with too.😛


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Posted: 12 years ago
Do not end these ff.
If u can continue it
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Posted: 12 years ago
ur ff is going well anu but if u want to end it, end it happily if possible with rosid babies and we have ur another ff 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
no plz dont end it dear...ur ff is going in a good way...plz continue it with rosid baby
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Posted: 12 years ago
Pls dear don't end this.If u want then u can end ur another ff but not this one.I m waiting for a long time to see Roli suffering from a big problem/deases and Simar & Sid's love get back her from mouth of death.I want to see rosim bond & simar and family's care toward Roli.Sid & Simar's poseciveness toward Roli .U promise me for that but now u want to broke this which huart me lot.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey friends. I am sorry, I was little disturbed so I thought to end it. But I am not going to end coz of you. And Chitra di. I will keep my promise, dont worry. Here is my next part hope you like it.

Part 27

Everyone in the house is sitting. Rosid come downstairs. Simar goes to Roli and

Sim: Roli come I have made your favorite dish. We will have it together.

Roli: yes didi. (Smiling)

Sid: Prem let's go to office. We have the meeting today and it's so important.

Prem: yes siddhant!

Presid leaves. Bhardwaj family also went for a satsang.

Rosim are in the kitchen. Both are working, when Roli feels pain.

Roli: didi..Ah!!!!!!! didi...

Sim: roli! What happened? (In tense)

Roli: didi.. my stomach. Didi..

Sim: Roli! Roli! Don't worry I am here naa. Don't worry..God! What will I do now? (Roli is in so much pain and can't able to tolerate the pain) Yes Prem ji.. I will call him. Roli I am calling Prem ji wait. Haan.

She then calls Prem. But Prem didn't pick the phone. He then immediately calls Siddhant but he also doesn't pick the phone. She then tries to call the doctor but it was not reachable.

Sim: hey Matarani! What will I do now? Help me Matarani help me. How will I take her to the doctor? (After thinking) Yes. Roli come we will go to the doctor.

She takes Roli out of the kitchen. Roli is having so much pain that she can't walk properly.

Roli: didi.. i.can't walk Ah!! Didi (Feeling pain)

Sim: Roli! Look we have to go to the doc naa? So have some patience if you will lose your patience then what can we do? Roli not for you but for your child you have to.

Roli: k. didi.

Simar and Roli come out of the house. Simar then see a bench in the corner of the road. She asks Roli to sit there and she asks for lift. But no one gives them lift. Simar then tell Roli that they have to go while walking its better from asking a lift. They are walking along the street when a car come and stops aside of Rosim. Both look there. Both were shocked looking at the guy coming out from the car.

Rosim: "Bhaiya"!!!!!!!!!

Sekhar: haan. Main. (Yes. Me)

Sim: Bhaiya.. look Roli! Please let's go to the doc, please.

Sekhar: Yes simar don't worry. I am here naa. Our Roli will have no problem. Come let's go.

Three of them sits on the car and then they leaves.

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Presid in office

Prem: Siddhant!

He doesn't hear.

Prem: siddhant! Siddhant!

Sid: yes prem.

Prem: siddhant where were you lost?

Sid: yaar Prem! I am feeling worried.

Prem: Worried!!!!!!!Why?

Sid: I don't know I am feeling as if something wrong is going to happen.

Prem: Siddhant! Its coz you are thinking about Roli and your child.

Sid: yes Prem. But..

Prem: siddhant! Don't worry we will now go to home naa. You will see Roli will be fine. Come let's go.

Sid: yes.

A man enters.

Man: sir! Mr. Mehta has come for the deal.

Prem: now?

Man: yes sir.

Sid: but now we were supposed to leave. K. no problem we will attend him.

Man: k. sir. I am going to tell him.

The man leaves.

Prem: siddhant! You were just worried and now how could you attend?

Sid: Prem, don't worry I am k now. You were right I was thinking about Roli so I felt like that. Come let's attend him.

Prem: k.

Both then goes to attend mr.mehta.

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Doctor's clinic.

Sim: doctor! Please tell. What happened to her?

Doc: Aan! Look simar. I have told you before that her condition is so critical and she can't give birth to the child, but you and your families are not listening me.

Sim: but doctor. Roli is not agreeing in doing abortion.

Doc: then you make her understand!

Sim: no doc. It can't possible as Roli only hears me and Siddhantji! And we both lose in front of her.

Doc: k. then else I will leave to the God. As what a doc can do I will do everything and after that if something happens then never blame me. I am giving medicines you give her so that this pain will not come again.

Sim: k. doc.

Rosim and sekhar then leaves the clinic. On the way inside the car Roli is sleeping, simar is sitting beside her and sekhar is driving.

Sekhar: simar.

Sim: ji bhaiya.

Sekhar: what your husband do?

Sim: bhaiya. My husband works in his own office.

Sekhar: own office???

Sim: yes bhaiya our in-laws have their own business.

Sekhar: oh! That means Roli's husband also.

Sim: yes.

Sekhar: hmm. So where will I drop you?

Sim: bhardwaj house. Bhaiya. You know it naa? Then why and you also knew about our husbands so why are you asking it again?

Sekhar: no no. I was just confirming.

Sim: don't act smart bhaiya I know about you everything and more than me Roli knows as you always share everything with her. I am sure that Roli must have called you.

Sekhar: actually simar!!!.

Sim: k. k. I am now confirmed that Roli has called you here.

Sekhar: yes. She has called me here.

Sim: but why?

Sekhar: I don't know.

Simar is tensed now.

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Bhardwaj house.

Everyone is in home except Rosim. Prem and siddhant are tensed.

Sid: where would have they gone?

Matjai: prem call simar and ask.

Prem: yes mataji.

He take out his phone and sees missed call from simar.

Prem: siddhant.. simar has called me. 16 missed call is there from her.

Sid: what?

Prem: yes. Roli must have tried your one also. Check.

Sid: haan. Yes. Let me check.

He then check and get tensed. It's from simar.

Prem: what happened?

Sid: prem. I have got missed call form simar.

Prem: what?

Sid: yes. That means Roli must be...

Mataji: look they came.

Presid looks at the door and feel relaxed.

Sid: roli are you ok naa?

Roli: yes siddhant ji! I am ok.

Prem: simar, sorry actually we were in meeting so we didn't respond to your call as we have silent our phone.

Sim: its k prem ji.

Sekhar: no. it's not. K.

Everyone sees him.

Roli: Bhaiya?

Sekhar: what Roli. They should know. How irresponsible are they?

Sim: bhaiya... leave it naa.

Mataji: simar. Who is he?

Roli: mataji he is our elder brother. Sekhar bhaiya.

Sekhar takes all his elders blessings.

Sujata: elder brother, how we didn't know him? He wasn't in the marriage too.

Sim: yes. Maa. Coz of some reason he couldn't attend the marriage.

Sekhar: yes now tell me you both prem and siddhant, how could you be so irresponsible?

Presid: excuse me.

Sekhar: of course why not? I will excuse you but tell is your meeting is so important then your wife's life.

Sid: what do you mean?

Sekhar: I mean that before 1 hour Roli is having pain and simar takes her to te doctor, she calls you but you were so busy that you didn't pick the phone haan?

Roli: bhaiya.

Sekhar: wait Roli!

Sid: you are Roli's elder brother so I am giving respect to you. And what you know about me haan? You don't know that how much I love Roli and what she is in my life. And perhaps you will never know about it. You will never know it.

Sekhar: I know everything. I know how much you love my sis. And I am proud that you are my sister's hubby. (Sekhar hugs sid)

Sid: you know? (Surprised)

Sekhar: yes. Roli always tells me about you all. I know all of you. And I am so happy that my sisters are so happy with this family. Thank you for giving my sisters so much love and care. And while talking with Roli I never felt that she is unhappy here.

Prem: its. K. we are lucky to have your sisters in our lives.

Someone from door.

Roli!! Simar!!!!!...

Everyone turns towards the door.

Roli: suman!!!!

Sim: suman!!!!!!

Both goes and hugs her.

Suman: how are you?

Rosim: we are fine. Come inside.

They comes.

Roli: so...

Suman: so!!. Introduce me with your hubby.

Sim: oh yes. Sure. Come.

She takes her to presid.

Suman: wait! Wait! Let me guess who is Roli's one and who is simar's one.

Suman goes to Prem

Suman: hmm. Simple and innocent haan. This is simar's hubby. Prem. (looking at sid) haan. And the angry young man siddhant is Roli's hubby. Am I right?

Presid: absolutely. But how you know and who are you?

Roli: oops! Siddhant ji this is our one and only bestfriend, suman bhabi!!.

Presid: bhabi??????

Sim: yes sekhar bhaiya and suman are married.

Sid: oh!

Suman takes everyone's blessings.

Mataji: k. k. now you all go and fresh we will have our meal together.

Suman: mataji! I have come with someone.

Roli: someone???

Suman: yes Roli.

Sim: with whom?

Suman: wait..

She goes outside and come with a girl and looking to her. Everyone get shocked.

Rosid: naina!

Premar: naina!

Suman: roli, simar. Meet my cousin sister naina. And naina meet my sister in laws simar and roli and their respective husband prem and siddhant.

Naina: oh yes. Di. I know them.

Suman: you know them?

Naina: yes di we were in the same batch in college. Except Roli, she was our junior.

Suman: oh! That means we will have lots of fun together.

Naina: yes di.. we will have lots of fun.

Naina: (thinks) we will have lots of fun di... but not Roli,I will make her life like a heal that she will never forget it. And I will do it through you so that no one will doubt me. (Smiles)

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to be continued...

Hope you like it...

Edited by rolisiddhant - 12 years ago
HemaG thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
what to say...its so so so cute...

thanks for the pm...
Edited by HemaG - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow interesting turn in your story i like it...hope only nothing happens to roli and her. Child

Thanks for pm

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