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Posted: 13 years ago

Before starting the next part.I would like to tell u all that I am nt going into the detailed description of Mohit-Sanaya's wedding.I have something else planned for JayRa's story now!

So,Part 13 will start with a twist in JayRa's life!

Part 13

We Found Our Way Back To Each Other

Mohit-Sanaya were taking 7 phere[saath phere] & everybody was showering flowers on them.

Jay was busy drooling at Ragini and Ragini was admiring the wedding moment of Mohit-Sanaya.

Suddenly she got phone call..she answered the call but was unable to hear anything because of the noise..so she went outside!

Jay observed this but didn't follow her.He thought she'll be back in 2 mins.

It was almost 5 mins now but Ragini wasnt back'Jay rushed outside the wedding hall & saw her.

Ragini was standing alone & crying'.Jay puts his hand on her shoulder'she turns around & hugs him tightly.

Jay: Arey'kya ho gaya achanak? Kiska phone tha?

Ragini didn't answer & was still crying.

Jay: Ragini'plz batao kya hua hai? I cant see u crying like his.

He breaks the hug.

Ragini: Mujhe wapas jaana padega..

Jay: Wapas'as in resort mein wapas?

Ragini: No,I have to go back to London

Jay: London??

Ragini : Dad is in the hospital he got a minor heart attack'Mom is all alone there I have to be with her.

Jay:Ohh'okay toh tum jaao na'kisne roka hai'ur mother needs you (he says this while cupping her face.)

Ragini:Par..I don't know when will I come back to India'I don't want to leave u.

Jay:Even I don't want u to go like this'but iss waqt tumhare parents ko tumhari zyada zarurat hai.

Ragini hugged him again.

Jay while hugging asks: Kabki flight hai?

Ragini: haven't booked the flight yet'most probably tmrw.

Jay:I'll call my agent'he'll book the flight'don't worry now..chalo andar chalet hain

He said so while wiping her tears.

Mohit-Sanaya were taking everyone's blessing.

They hugged their friends & left from there'Ragini all this while was trying hear to smile but was nt able to.

While on the otherhand Jay was partly getting weak.He didn't want to be tied up in a long distance relationship'he didn't want her to go!


...

It was 9am in the morning.

Ragini was sitting in her room hugging her teddy when she heard the knock on the door.. She lazily went to answer the door, her vision blurred with a fresh lot of tears when she saw him standing in front of her with the flight tickets.

They sat silently in a comfortable embrace but none of them spoke for a while.. Ragini checked the fight date & timings..the flight was of 6pm this evening

Jay kept looking at her with a fake smile signifying tht he is "Okay".On the other hand Ragini was busy feeling the sense of completeness in his embrace.. she was taking that feeling as if this was the last time she was feeling that bliss..

For a long time when he didn't say anything Ragini asked: Umm'did u tell this to Shobhit?

Jay: Yes I told him last night.

Ragini: so what did he say?

Jay: Nothing'wo kya kahega'he was sad.

Ragini: I hope Mohit-Sanaya ko nahi bataya tumne..i don't want to spoil their first day after marriage.

Jay: umm'.unko pata chal gaya Ragini'Shobhit ne unhe abhi thodi der pehle bataya.

Ragini: Ye Shobhit bhi na'

Just then Mohit-Sanaya-Shobhit entered her room.

Sanaya straight away hugged Ragini & said "Don't worry sab theek ho jayega"

Mohit: Han Ragini..tu plz chinta matt kar.Uncle theek honge.

She knew her father was alright now'but the fact that was bothering her was "leavin Jay alone"

JayRa shared an eyelock'their eyes were talking to each other.

Shobhit observed this

Shobhit: Ragini...tu aaram se London jaa..Don't worry about him..hum sab hain na..khyal rakhenge iska.

Ragini smiled.

Sanaya: Han..hum Jay ka khayal rakhenge..tu plz apna khayal rakhna.

We'll miss you soo much..

After havin a chat..they left JayRa alone.

Jay: So'packing karma start karlo ab.

Ragini: Hmmm..

Ragini started packing her stuff...

Jay while staring at her was busy in his thoughts.

He was questioning himself "would this long-distance relationship work?"

Though communication is not a problem they could do that on phone nd internet, yet a security that the partner feels while they're together would be missing..

To be continued..

Edited by -MadRaginiFan- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
EDIT

Vipu u started with such a twist!

realli liked how her friends all supported her and the fact that she's worried abt leaving Jay behind

hope they make it work out in coming parts

liked the part but it was too short😳
update soon...this time dont make us wait so long!😳
Edited by shona. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shona.



Vipu u started with such a twist!
LOL...yeah...tht wedding bit was getting boring for me😛
realli liked how her friends all supported her and the fact that she's worried abt leaving Jay behind

thanks😳

hope they make it work out in coming parts
thts what i will write tht how they make it work😉

liked the part but it was too short😳
it was short??? i thought zyada ho gaya so i stopped otherwise i would have written more!
update soon...this time dont make us wait so long!😳
aww...thanks a lott Shona🤗
hmm...will try updating soon now!

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Posted: 13 years ago
vips vips vips.. at last you updated your FF 😆
hmm.. i liked this part but it was DAMN short...
& W*F? Long distance-relationship won't work, r you planning on finishing your FF or something?? 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Vips ... Wonderful FF...So twist is comming in JayRa relationship.Liked how friends consoled ragini and the jay thinking Long distance-relationship won't work ??
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Heartbreaker-

vips vips vips.. at last you updated your FF 😆

hmm.. i liked this part but it was DAMN short...
& W*F? Long distance-relationship won't work, r you planning on finishing your FF or something?? 😳



LOL...dont worry...this relationship will be long distance for only 3-4 parts..uske baad they will be back together and as i told u romance will kickstart then😉

Thnaks for the comment🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhi786

Vips ... Wonderful FF...So twist is comming in JayRa relationship.Liked how friends consoled ragini and the jay thinking Long distance-relationship won't work ??


Thanks a lott abhi🤗
Yeah he is a lil worried about the long-distance relatinship but will soon realise that they do work😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part Vipra :) Loved Ragz confession.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello vipra ji! How r u? Veryyy... Long time haan??!!
Well about dis part of ur FF very very honestly I m sayin dat its TOO short in my view. I m really very sorry 2 say but dis part is not showin any othher story of dem rather she is goin 2 LONDON. Even dey r talkin wid each other very FORMALY. I hate wen jayra talk wid each other hesitantly after post confession.
AND MOST IMPORTANT PART IS " OH! DEAR WHY U TAKE SUCH A LOOO...NG TIME 2 UPDATE UR NEXT PART OF FF???????!!!!!!! BEALIEVE ME YAAR, ITS REALLY REALLY REALLY DISTURBING WHEN U DON'T POST NEXT PART OF UR FF IN 2 TO 3 DAYS OF LAST PART OF UR FF.
ITS REQUEST 4M ME & EACH & EVERY PERSON SM DIS FORUM WHO LOVES READING UR FF, " PLZZZ... POST NEXT PARTS OF UR FF IN BTWEEN 2 TO 3 DAYS... WE REALLY REALLY MISSS... IT." :-(
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Ctnr6

Hello vipra ji! How r u? Veryyy... Long time haan??!!
Well about dis part of ur FF very very honestly I m sayin dat its TOO short in my view. I m really very sorry 2 say but dis part is not showin any othher story of dem rather she is goin 2 LONDON. Even dey r talkin wid each other very FORMALY. I hate wen jayra talk wid each other hesitantly after post confession.
AND MOST IMPORTANT PART IS " OH! DEAR WHY U TAKE SUCH A LOOO...NG TIME 2 UPDATE UR NEXT PART OF FF???????!!!!!!! BEALIEVE ME YAAR, ITS REALLY REALLY REALLY DISTURBING WHEN U DON'T POST NEXT PART OF UR FF IN 2 TO 3 DAYS OF LAST PART OF UR FF.
ITS REQUEST 4M ME & EACH & EVERY PERSON SM DIS FORUM WHO LOVES READING UR FF, " PLZZZ... POST NEXT PARTS OF UR FF IN BTWEEN 2 TO 3 DAYS... WE REALLY REALLY MISSS... IT." :-(



Dont get IMPATIENT Sania...in order to increase JayRa's bond i brought up this twist...JayRa romancing in Mohit-Sanaya's wedding and exactly after confession was getting way too cheesy...I am going to bring some affection and hardcore romance in this track...and dont worry...they will be separated for 3-4 parts only...after that JayRa ill be together again😳
Also..i am thinking to sideline other characters and CONCENTRATE only on JayRa☺️

About me posting the next part...well tht depends on how free i am...i'll try my level best to post the next part on Monday!




@Siddhi: Thanks a lott🤗

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