FF:We Found Our Way Back To Each Other!Part16:Pg84 - Page 19

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Ddhi

sorry 4 commenting late...

but again awesome update yaar...
loved the song segment
waiting 4 next part


no need to say SORRY yaar...i m glad u loved the song sequence😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved this part also Vipra. Really like how you did the song sequence, I could actually picture it. And the lyrics go really well with their story/situation. Keep up the awesome work Vipra :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow..great job!!! Please PM me when the next part is ready! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
update pe update, you're going faster than Ragi pie's dream car Bugatti Veyron Vipu🤣

I'll comment once I read this part...a lil busy now since I have an exam on thursday
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Posted: 13 years ago
vipu...wat u done!!!!!its an awsmmm part..i didn't thght dat dey meet face 2 face soo erly...its soo much emotional...(but vipu pst soon dat 'why dey were separated?)'..post it, wen story need..
but luvd ur FF surprise nd also d song sequence which is truely perfect..u knw m read ur FF evryday more den 3/4 tyms on d way of my college through wen m back...so think about me HOW MUCH I LUV UR FF...KEEP GOIN GIRL..ITS REALLY SUPERB...
EGRLY EGRLY W8IN 4 UR NEXT PART...PLZZZ POST AS SOON AS POSSIBLE...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: siddhi209

Loved this part also Vipra. Really like how you did the song sequence, I could actually picture it. And the lyrics go really well with their story/situation. Keep up the awesome work Vipra :)


I m soo happy that u liked the song seuqnce Siddhi...i thought the song seuqnce spoiled the simplicity of the part
Thank u so much for ur kind words🤗

Originally posted by: smiley38

wow..great job!!! Please PM me when the next part is ready! 😃


Thanks a lott...yes will surely PM u from now on😉

Originally posted by: Tani91

update pe update, you're going faster than Ragi pie's dream car Bugatti Veyron Vipu🤣

I'll comment once I read this part...a lil busy now since I have an exam on thursday



Han Han..take ur time ji😉
All the evry best for ur exam👍🏼

Originally posted by: tajkea

vipu...wat u done!!!!!its an awsmmm part..i didn't thght dat dey meet face 2 face soo erly...its soo much emotional...(but vipu pst soon dat 'why dey were separated?)'..post it, wen story need..
but luvd ur FF surprise nd also d song sequence which is truely perfect..u knw m read ur FF evryday more den 3/4 tyms on d way of my college through wen m back...so think about me HOW MUCH I LUV UR FF...KEEP GOIN GIRL..ITS REALLY SUPERB...
EGRLY EGRLY W8IN 4 UR NEXT PART...PLZZZ POST AS SOON AS POSSIBLE...



Thats soo sweet of u Faiza...thanks a ton for lovin my FF so much..it means a lott!
Will try updating as soon as possible !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
We Found Our Way Back To Each Other

PART-5


Jay & Ragini stood facing each other.Totally zapped with the developments in last few hours.

Jay had never thought that he will see himself going to his best friend's wedding'..to Goa'.will make a plan for this with Shobhit & meet Ragini in the process.

She had her own plans of attending the wedding but had missed her flight by chance and landed up taking a lift from Shobhit who by the way was also taking Jay along with him'..AMAZING..ummm is this a coincidence?

Unable to find words, Jay turned around once, praying hard to see Shobhit'..but Shobhit was smart enough as he vanished at the right moment. Jay cursed him hard but didn't realise that Ragini heard what he said.😆

Ragini was shocked to see him'.a small part of her was thrilled as she saw someone who she had just imagined, remembered, fantasized for 4 long years'.

She realised why all her relationships in past 4 years had ended in a failure.

it was becoz that nobody had the charm like Jay😳

It wasn't as if she had never tried to move on'.in fact, she had''and she had as many as 3 boyfriends in these years but none of her affairs had lasted more than 6 months.Right now, when she looked at Jay, she wondered what charisma he had, that she unknowingly kept trying to find in every man she had come to know, all this time''..

She had never tried to meet him or talk to him all this while and seeing him here appeared to her as if some fantasy had come true😍

Right now she felt disgusted & was highly irritated at Jay's loss of words & trying to look here and there.

She thought to herself : Come'on WE'RE were meeting after 4 years, at least he could have hugged ME as a friend, maybe shook hands with ME or at least smiled at ME or showed some sort of happiness on seeing ME after a long time''But what are you thinking Gini'..he is Jay. He will never do what you expect him to.

Jay looked around just for a few seconds and when he couln't find either Shobhit or words to speak'..he looked back at her..she seemed angry & pissed..she started putting her luggage on the back seat.


He realised that he had lost his senses for a while after seeing her☺️ & then he observed slamming of the door by Ragini.😆

Jay fumbled & said : Let me help you.

Ragini : NO THANKS!!

Jay : Actually'Shobhit didnt tell me bout this.I mean, I didn't know that you would be coming.

He realised that he was speaking to her after a long time'Although he had always talked to her in his dreams...but this time it was REALITY!

Ragini : Oh really? I am sure you didn't know this otherwise you would have backed out.

Jay : Why would I back out?.

Ragini : To avoid me & I am so sorry you had to go through this pain.

They were still standing outside facing each other, only her luggage was now inside.

Jay : Why would I avoid you?

Ragini : I think you know that better..

Jay : Look Gini...

Ragini : Ragini...the name is Ragini...only people who are close to me call me "Gini"


Jay : Ok fine Ragini'I really don't understand what you are trying to say? In fact, I'm actually happy to see you.

Ragini : OMG' the way you behaved on seeing me, trying to look for a place to disappear, sure tells me that you are happy'.'and this is your happy face?

Jay : Look at your face'..the moment you saw me'ur expression were like as if u saw a GHOST. You are telling me that I would have not come..I believe that if Shobhit had told you that I was his friend who was going with him, I am sure, you would have dropped your plan.

Though they argued, they were not loud or shouting.In fact, they talked very calmly.

Ragini : Why would I drop my plans for someone who is non-existent for me? Stop over-rating yourself and believe me I am hardly bothered you are here because it doesn't matter.

Jay : It really doesn't matter...like...Really?

Ragini : Yes'.

Jay : So, then you are coming with us, because my being here doesn't bother you at all?

Ragini : Yes, Of Course, it doesn't!!

Jay turned around and went and sat on the front seat.

Ragini opened the door of the back seat & sat quietly just behind the driver's seat where could see Jay clearly😳


Jay placed two of his fingers of his left hand on his forehead while thinking something.He used to do this when tensed, Ragini knew this gesture wvery well..so she knew he was a bit tensed!

Both of them didnt spoke for around five minutes.

The silence was broken when Shobhit turned up with water bottles in his hand.

Shobhit : Hey Guys

JayRa looked at him and gave him murderous looks😆

Shobhit : umm..Shall we go?

Jay : Shobhit..you come this side. I want to drive..

Jay said so as he wanted to do anything that distracted his mind. He had never wanted to see her, meet her or talk to her and here she was right beside him for so many hours'..and so near to him that he wanted to touch her...hug her...he was thinking how come she still looks so GORGEOUS...he wanted to keep looking at her..he did not want to loose her again..she still was the same girl..who replies blunty..aaahh..she is the SAME GIRL..I fell in love with!


Shobhit : I don't mind


Jay was a pretty good driver. They drove fast as the roads were almost clear.

After a while, Shobhit turned to the back seat where Ragini was adjusting her luggage'..taking out a scarf to save her hair from the rough wind, novels and some snacks.

She looked at him and smiled.

Shobhit : So'.how come you missed the flight?

Ragini explained to him how her car was giving her troubles and how she reached just a few minutes before the flight departure but they did not let her in.

He asked her about her family members and their well being and she asked about his.They kept talking non-sense, according to Jay for about one hour.

In all this conversation, one major thing that Jay noticed was that she was engaged to some person working in New York and she herself was working with a top MNC as a financial consultant. He felt a little uneasy.

He asked himself. : Why? Why should I even bother? She is just engaged. In fact she could have turned up with a hubby and two kids. What were you expecting dude?



Since the morning fiasco, Jay & Ragini had not talked to each other and Shobhit sensed it.He was surprised because he was expecting a lot of fireworks but both of them did not give him a chance to be worried about.


Shobhit : You know Gini'.

Just then Jay turned his face towards Shobhit with a deadly look'seeing this Shobhit corrected himself by saying.

Shobhit : ohh sorry Ragini.


Jay since the time of college daya didnt like it when any other GUY excpet him called her "Gini"



Shobhit talked some randon stuff & soon felt asleep..after he slept..either Ragini used to steal a glance of Jay for 2-3 sceonds...or Jay used to look at her from the rear view mirror☺️



TO Be CONTD...


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I hope u guys like it..I was busy..so could write only this much.


plz do comment on this part..i'll be waiting for ur comments 😃

Edited by -MadRaginiFan- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
vipu...LUVD UR DIS PART AGAIN AS USUAL...its midn8 nd m ittle bit busy now... but again vl b cmmnt wen got tym..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tajkea

vipu...LUVD UR DIS PART AGAIN AS USUAL...its midn8 nd m ittle bit busy now... but again vl b cmmnt wen got tym..


Thanks for the short & sweet comment faiza🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Classy vipu as usual ,love u waiting for ur next ff 😃

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