FF RaYa and SUSHAAN Part 1 Updated

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Heyy guyzz i m writing FF on Sushaan( Ishaan suhana) and RaYa ( Ram Priya) Hope u all like it.

hope u all like it here is character sketch:

RAM KAPOOR:- 40 years old bachelor business tycoon for whom family is most imp. and is good frnd of Kamal kishore bajapayee and treat KK's daughter suhana & sanju like his sisters.

Priya Sharma:- 33 years old single girl who lv her family and live fr them and treat kasyaps asher own family and ishan as her real brother.

Suhana bajapayee:- 24 year girl full of life , beautiful,intelligent short tempered but she hv a golden heart.

Ishaan Kashyap:- 25 year old boy who work as a Sw.engg in Indias top Sw company , he is
Very intelligent, innocent,kind hear-ted loves his family alot Simplicity is anathore name for Ishaan

Families:-
Kashyap's:- Family who leaves together eats together dies together Kashyap's live in Chawari bazar delhi they belong to middle class no one can give love as kashyap's give

Sharma's:- priyas family which hv Kartik priya's brother her mom and dad.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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All the Best Vinay...👍🏼
A small request from me,,,,,,,,,
Can U please give the Updates only in English ,without using Hindi words in b/w ,,,,,,,I am very poor at Hindi lang
Thanks in Advance
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: SweetIshaan.

All the Best Vinay...👍🏼

A small request from me,,,,,,,,,
Can U please give the Updates only in English ,without using Hindi words in b/w ,,,,,,,I am very poor at Hindi lang
Thanks in Advance


thanxx sweetishaan
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Posted: 13 years ago
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U can call me Harsha...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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can't wait...i am all eyes😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Priya seating in her room & thinking abt how She met with a Ram suddenly her phn rings priya reccives the call

Priya: hello heyy ishaan hw r u ??

Ishaanr: I m fine& I m nt talking to u.

Priya : why what hppnd ?

Ishaan: aap mjhse puch rhi ho kya hua aap ram kapoor se shadi kar rhi ho aurr mjhe batana jaruri nhi samjha mjhe News se maloom chala ki priya di ki shadi ho rhi hai thts nt fair yarr.

Priya: Sorry Ishaan bt mjhe bhi news se hi pata chala.

Ishaan : wht?

Priya : hmm lambi kahani hai jab milega tab bataungi .

Ishaan: kk to engagement kab hai mjhe ana hai ya wo bhi mai news channels pe hi dekh lu.

Priya: pagal hai kya jo news channels pe dekega kal hai engagement aurr maine card ghar pe bhej dia hai

Sabko leke aanaa.

Ishaan: Card? Wo bhi humein ye kya hai priya di.

Priya: Aree Ishaan ye Mr. Kapoor ke yaha card se hi entry honi hai aurr sun tjhe dance bhi karna hai.

Ishaan : dance aurr main kya priya di har time majak mat kiya karo.

Priya : main nahi janti kuch tjhe dance Karna hoga chal mai jaa rhi hu maa bula rhi hai.kal milte hai gd nt.

Ishaan : gd nt tc di

Engagment day: kapoor Mention

Priya: Ishaan abhi tak aya nahi mai call kar k puchti hu Priya calls Ishaan

Ishaan : ha priya di bolo

Priya: Mai kya bolu tu hai kaha ye bata?

Ishaan : wo main offc me hu party k liye hi nikal rha hu.

Priya: tu abhi tak offc me hi hai ??

Ishaan : ha di wo client k sath call me busy tha abb party ke liye hi nikal rha hu

Priya: Tu direct yaha mat ana pahle ghar jaa maine tere liye Dress bheji hai use pahan ke ana.

Ishaan : Kyn mai offc k kapdo me Kyn nahi aa sakta mai Dress change karne ghar nahi jaa rha.

Priya: Mere bhai tu party me aa rha hai to offc k kapdo me ayega jo maine tere liye select kiya hai use pehen k aa kya pata iss party me tu bhi kisi ladki ko pasand aa jaye aurr ghar to tjhe jana hi hoga card lene to abb jaldi jaa aurr jaldi se aaja.

Outside Kapoor mention

Ishaan : ohh shit mai card lana bhool gaya shit man .

Inside kapoor Mention:

Suhana hugs Ram congrats bhai.

Ram : thanxx tu abb aa rhi hai ??

Suhana: ha bhai colleage frnds k sath bahar gayi thi apke engagement ki news sun k aa gayi. Mjhe meri bhabhi se milna hai.

Ram :kk and calls Priya.

Priya:Ha Mr.Kapoor

Ram: Isse milo ye hai mere bussines partner KK sir ki beti suhana Mere behen jaise hai ye mere liye.

Priya : Hi suhana u r lkng very preety


Suhana aap bhi bhi bahut achi lag rhi ho bhabhi Ram bhai is Very lucky.

Ram: Chup kar jab dekh masti karti rehti hai

Priya's phn rings

Priya: Ishaan tu abhi bhi Mjhe Phn kar rha hai hai kaha tu??

Ishaan: srry di wo main bahar khada hu aurr card lana bhool gaya hu

Priya : uff Ishaan tu sudhrega kab? Rook main Mr. kapoor se bat karti hoon.

Priya: Mr kapoor

Ram : haa bolo Priya

Priya: tell him about Ishaan.

Ram:kk and call the security.

Ishaan enters and meat Priya

Priya: Mr.kapoor ye Ishaan hai

Ram: helo Ishaan

Ishaa: hii jiju

Priya: aurr ye hai Mr.kapoor ki behen Suhana .

Ishaan sees suhana and thinks she is so cute so preety.

Suhaana: Hii Ishaan card kaha bhool aye and thinks dikhne me to smart lagta hai par akal se bholu hai.

Ishaan : hii suhaana and feels embarrassed😳

Priya: Ishaan dekha tu mere select kiya kapdo me kitna handsome lag rha hai.


Ishaan : hmm thanxx di

Precap: Ishaan-Suhana in shopping mall.

Hope u all like it plzz give commnts

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: SweetIshaan.

All the Best Vinay...👍🏼

A small request from me,,,,,,,,,
Can U please give the Updates only in English ,without using Hindi words in b/w ,,,,,,,I am very poor at Hindi lang
Thanks in Advance


srry harsha ths 1 was typed frm nxt time will post in english
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vinan2050


srry harsha ths 1 was typed frm nxt time will post in english


Its ok vinay,,,,,,,no problem
any ways , I will try my best to understand,,,,,,,,,
If U have any problem to update only in English,,,,,,,go on with Hindi
it doesn't looks good also ,,,,,to update in English only for my sake
as many of the forum members knows hindi,,,,,,,,
I am fine with this,,,,,,don't worry
anyways thank U so much
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: SweetIshaan.


Its ok vinay,,,,,,,no problem
any ways , I will try my best to understand,,,,,,,,,
If U have any problem to update only in English,,,,,,,go on with Hindi
it doesn't looks good also ,,,,,to update in English only for my sake
as many of the forum members knows hindi,,,,,,,,
I am fine with this,,,,,,don't worry
anyways thank U so much

itzz kk harsha i will try ma bestbto help u hope u liked part 1
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vinan2050

itzz kk harsha i will try ma bestbto help u hope u liked part 1


To b honest vinay,,,,,,,I didn't understood most of the FF,,,,,,,,as it is almost in hindi
Hope other forum members will like it,,,,,😊
All the best 4 rest of d parts too👍🏼

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