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Posted: 14 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: ice.maiden
Really liked it Manju 😊 Fabulous 😊 I could picture the whole thing...
Thanks Manju 😊

Thanks a lot Sushma!! 😃

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Netri

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Posted: 14 years ago

#172

Awww, Manju, I loved that U wrote the scene around Meethi. Most of the time adults think that by diverting child's mind, kid wont know if anything is wrong. but they r so wrong, kids have this amazing sense when it comes to their parents. I loved everything, more so I can imagine that happening. Inder way better DAD than Ishawar ever was.

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crysind

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Posted: 14 years ago

#173

That was so so beuatifully imagined Manju...👍🏼 Loved Meethi's part very much... As your title says "Kash aise scenes bhi hote tho..."

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madhu_d

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Posted: 14 years ago

#174

@Manju : Maataloo Cheppalenanta Baga Raasavu.👍🏼 will wait for your next update!

What you have written about Meethi is Exactly true..they can sense easily if something is going wrong in the house...

it would have been superb if C.V's have shown us something in these line...

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Shwetha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#175

superb work manju...!!!!!

loved how u brought abt Inder and Meeti's scene...we have not seen the father side of Inder yet...it will be nice if we have a scene like that...😊 keep up the good work dear...

iam still waiting for ur work on BP track...😊

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589799

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Posted: 14 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: netri
Awww, Manju, I loved that U wrote the scene around Meethi. Most of the time adults think that by diverting child's mind, kid wont know if anything is wrong. but they r so wrong, kids have this amazing sense when it comes to their parents. I loved everything, more so I can imagine that happening. Inder way better DAD than Ishawar ever was.

Thanks a lot Nets. Ya, adults do think that they can divert a child's mind, but they are so terribly wrong. Something similar happened to me too and I can't tell you how wrong the adults were. 😊

@Bold That was the underlying message in the FF which I wanted to convey. Glad that you caught it. 😊

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589799

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Posted: 14 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: crysind
That was so so beuatifully imagined Manju...👍🏼 Loved Meethi's part very much... As your title says "Kash aise scenes bhi hote tho..."

@Febs So glad that you are back and replied. Thanks a lot for reading. Regarding Meethi, I feel there is a different aspect to Meethi's character which the CVs haven't shown yet. So, just an attempt. 😊

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589799

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Posted: 14 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: madhu_d
@Manju : Maataloo Cheppalenanta Baga Raasavu.👍🏼 will wait for your next update!
What you have written about Meethi is Exactly true..they can sense easily if something is going wrong in the house...
it would have been superb if C.V's have shown us something in these line...

Thanks a lot Madhu. Naku telikunde that you were Telugu too. I am really glad that you liked the scene. Ya, kids do understand what is going on in the house. I wanted the CVs to include a Meethi - Inder scene but that's ok. 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: Shwets1502
superb work manju...!!!!!
loved how u brought abt Inder and Meeti's scene...we have not seen the father side of Inder yet...it will be nice if we have a scene like that...😊 keep up the good work dear...

iam still waiting for ur work on BP track...😊

Thanks a lot Shwets. Glad that you liked Inder and Meethi's scene. Ya, from what we know about Inder, I think he is a really good father to Meethi. Just felt like writing it, so wrote it. There are two more scenes that I can write after this but I am not able to connect it to what I wrote and it is driving me crazy. Will try to include that too.

Regarding the BP track, I am still thinking about it. The CVs have done such a good job that they aren't allowing me to think out of the box. I need some time to think.

Thanks a lot for reading. 😊