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589799

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Posted: 14 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: Rubaldhillon
M I didnt put comment to Collect Like Yaar😳...I was just Joking to Shweta ...I read her Whole FF😳

I know. 😆Even I am joking. I know you wanted to tell me that I write well. Thanks a lot. 😃(extra big grin)😊

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Gurpreet Dhillon

@GurpreetD

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Posted: 14 years ago

#122

M U r Tooo Sweettt yaar😳...Mujhe Sugar Ho Jayagi agar tum itni Sweetly Baat Karogi Mujhse...I m not used to it😆

p.s.M dont like my comment otherwise I will keep on doing My Bak Bak😆

Edited by Rubaldhillon - 14 years ago

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_Procrastinator

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Posted: 14 years ago

#123

I know i m very late in commenting...

but Manju i hardly find words to comment when i read ur update...it is always sooo amazing...!!!!
U're a very good writer yaar...ur writing is more mature than me...😆😆
keep rocking..
love ur work a loads..!!! 😉

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589799

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Posted: 14 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: trueraginifan
I know i m very late in commenting...

but Manju i hardly find words to comment when i read ur update...it is always sooo amazing...!!!!
U're a very good writer yaar...ur writing is more mature than me...😆😆
keep rocking..
love ur work a loads..!!! 😉

You are not late. I posted this yesterday and then removed it and then reposted it a few hours back. Thanks a lot. I am so happy. I had written this story for a project in school. But wanted to post it here too so that I can find out how exactly it is. Thanks a lot for your comments. 😊

@R I wouldn't mind doing Bak Bak here. I love it. 😛😆

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Aneesha

@Ashis

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Posted: 14 years ago

#125

Very well written manju....i read it full it was soo heart touching...n u have taught a very good lesson through ths...superbIt was like i'm not reading a FF but a real story u r too gud manju

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589799

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Posted: 14 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: aneesha_sahani
Very well written manju....i read it full it was soo heart touching...n u have taught a very good lesson through ths...superbIt was like i'm not reading a FF but a real story u r too gud manju

Thanks a lot for your comments Aneesha. 😊 I have a question. What was the lesson I conveyed through the story? I myself don't know. 😛Thanks for commenting and appreciating. 😃

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Feefi

@Feefi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#127

OMG manju i totally forgot about this!! SORRYYY!!!! but finally forced myself to read it!!!

this is awesome!! 👏 👏 👏 you are a really good writer!!!!! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

I wish cancer treatment was this easy... 😭

once again, great job and keep it up!! 😃

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Aneesha

@Ashis

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Posted: 14 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: ymanjushree10

Thanks a lot for your comments Aneesha. 😊 I have a question. What was the lesson I conveyed through the story? I myself don't know. 😛Thanks for commenting and appreciating. 😃

Sushan make the doctor realizing his mistake n his responsibities as a doctor...tatz wht i liked in the story the most sushan thought him
Try not to become a man of success but rather try to become a man of value.

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589799

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Posted: 14 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: Feefi
OMG manju i totally forgot about this!! SORRYYY!!!! but finally forced myself to read it!!!

this is awesome!! 👏 👏 👏 you are a really good writer!!!!! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

I wish cancer treatment was this easy... 😭

once again, great job and keep it up!! 😃

Thanks a lot Feefi. I am glad you liked it. And it is completely ok that you read it now. About the cancer treatment, I too wish that. I think it will be possible in the near future. Keep hope. Thanks for liking my short story. 😊Listen to this song. http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XMTM1MjYwMjQw.html

It will make you happy. 😊

@Akhilesh Thanks a lot for reading the short story. Thanks for your comments. 😊

@Aneesha Seriously? 😲 I didn't know that. I didn't read the story again because I knew I would end up spoiling it. So, that's why. Thanks a lot for your reply. 😊

Edited by ymanjushree10 - 14 years ago