Sushaan FF~Tumse...Chapter4-Page12(guys pls cmnt)

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Lekha Ishwar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#91

👏Superb Job Leo meri jaan

And Yes Tonight I'll update my FF also so no fret

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Sanaya

@Sanayaa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#92

👏 Awesum part leo 👏
Psycho lesbians 🤣 ahem ahem Rajni nd Disha par doubt ho raha hai🤣.....
Inder nd Rajni were chooooo cute...
Luved their scene... Man they are so much in luv 😍 nd suhana madam ne to unhe cousins hi bana diya 🤣.....
Luking fwd to the next part...hmmm suhana's interaction with the other family members would be interesting to read 😳
Haila Ishu's entry not even in this part 😭...lolz leo kitna wait🤣
Nyways gr8 part nd plz update soon haan😆
Btw chowlie for not commenting on the last part😳

Hehe leo if it was dus ka dam then shounak should be given10cr 1cr to kuch bhi nhi hai🤣

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amotlymileo

@amotlymileo

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: trueraginifan
Lovely part leo.. 👏 👏 👏
Inder-Rajni were soo cute..luved deir interaction
aur Suhana toh alwayz roxx usme toh koi shak hi nhi hai 😆 😆

continue soon dear..will b waiting for d nxt update..!! 😉

thnku vipu....i hadn't expected that u guys wud find Inder-Rajni cute...glad thats happening😆

don't worry Suhaana will always keep rocking....

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amotlymileo

@amotlymileo

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Posted: 15 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: -Destiny-
👏Superb Job Leo meri jaan

And Yes Tonight I'll update my FF also so no fret

Thnx Lekha...u r making us wait too long,update ur FF soon😳

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amotlymileo

@amotlymileo

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: Sanayaa
👏 Awesum part leo 👏
Psycho lesbians 🤣 ahem ahem Rajni nd Disha par doubt ho raha hai🤣.....
Inder nd Rajni were chooooo cute...
Luved their scene... Man they are so much in luv 😍 nd suhana madam ne to unhe cousins hi bana diya 🤣.....
Luking fwd to the next part...hmmm suhana's interaction with the other family members would be interesting to read 😳
Haila Ishu's entry not even in this part 😭...lolz leo kitna wait🤣
Nyways gr8 part nd plz update soon haan😆
Btw chowlie for not commenting on the last part😳

Hehe leo if it was dus ka dam then shounak should be given10cr 1cr to kuch bhi nhi hai🤣

thnx Sanu😃...

umm Rajni ka to i can understand but ye Disha pr kyu doubt ho rha hai g??🤣🤣

m glad that you found Inder-Rajni cute....

aww don't be sad...i promise Ishu will enter by Chapter 6😉...even if i need to merge two chapters together...me too dying to bring him into the scene...

don't feel sorry dear...m happy that u found time to comment here..

and thats what i was asking shounak,,,,i tht the game was for 10 cr but if he's satisfied with 1 cr to baaki k paise i'll keep🤣🤣

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Lekha Ishwar

@-Destiny-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#96

@ LEO
sorry jaana I am not keeping well

I will for sure update Today after dinner

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amotlymileo

@amotlymileo

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: -Destiny-
@ LEO
sorry jaana I am not keeping well

I will for sure update Today after dinner

what happened??😲😲

hope there's nothing serious...

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Lekha Ishwar

@-Destiny-

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#98

@leo no no just some ear bleeding and weakness that's all

Taking medications

I am making a promise I will update 3 chapters today

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BeOptimistic

@allizzwell

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#99

@amotlymileo

Leo.... Amazing chapter yaar..... can say romance was in full bloom??? yes.... U have given Inder-Rajni a new dimension...👏. given them a beautiful romantic angle and it was so much fun to imagine Inder as romantic ....😍.....as we know how he is in SGP....😆.... he always fools around with all .... so loved his image makeover here.....

and leo....i was lost in my visuals when reading your script.... have to admit... yaar.... jaan daal dethe ho likawat mein.... so loved and enjoyed reading it....😉