Sushaan FF'JAANE TU'updated part-04,page-10 - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: laxmi_s

Haaki.... cute segment yaar..... really felt bad for Ishu.... poor thing.... Suhana must know him better now....😉.... your attempt is excellent in writing the triology..... keep keying in good stuff like this dear....😃

thanx laxmi di... thanq u so much for reading and commenting on the parts, ur comments made me😃......plzzz keep reading and commenting!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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uff...another part after sooo many days...Guys I seriously apologise for the delay in the part.....okay here goes....
JAANE TU.....
part-04
Ishaan(thinking):Why am I feeling wierd now, why am I just thinking about Suhana?She told frankly that I am his friend. I should stop loving her and divert my feelings...But Why I cant? Why she will only be the person in my thoughts? Why I want her company always? Why?And not only this,admist of all, Suhana ko sirf Sid hi mila, He is such a selfish and Arrogant person.Suhana doesnt listen if I say and there will be the chance of coming an end to our friendship...Bechari Suhana!!!! Her heart will be broken if she knows this...God!!!! why are you doing this all????
He was searching answers for all these questions which were moving in his mind continuously and he was lost in his thoughts when some one tapped his shoulder.........
Ishaan turned back and saw sanjana standing there..
Sanjana:Ishaan bhaiyya!!!!! Kya hua hain??? Aapke aankhein se yeh aansoon kyun aa rahe hain????
Ishaan:nothing sanju.... nothing!!!!
Sanjana: then wherez the smile on your face???
Ishaan pasted a fake smile on his face and told: Now I am smiling....
Sanjana: Bataana nahi chahte hon to mat bataao... Waise bhaiyya...Ek baat poocho...
Ishaan: No....
Sanjana: Why?
Ishaan: Whatz this Sanju???? U can ask me anythink freely...Ask me what u wanna ask...
Sanjana: Aap Didi se bahut pyaar karte hon na???
Ishaan was Surprised for he never know that Sanjana could soo easily catch his feelings....
Ishaan: woh....there's nothing like this....
Sanjana: Bhaiyya!!!! aap mujhse jhoot mat bolo... sach sach bataao na..
Ishaan:Yes Sanjana... I love her a lot... But God doesnt listen to me...I am one unlucky Person... But U know what? Suhana's happiness is my happiness...My happiness lies in her tender smiles only...The both look at Suhana who is smiling like a kid and talking with sid....
Sanjana: Lekin Bhaiyya... I want to tell u something...
Ishaan: hmm!!! bolo...
Sanjana: I dont like Sid...He is such an idiot... I have seen him with another girl at a mall... When he saw me... He just tried to leave frome there...And when I asked him, he told that she is just a friend of him...But the way he behaved with her was some what different....
Ishaan:He is not a good guy Sanju... Bechari Suhana, she is soooo innocent and fell in the trap of sid... He have many girl friends... And he ditched many of them...U know...He challenged me that he destroys Suhana's life... I tried many times to tell suhana but she doesnt listen. I donno when she gets to know his real side.... And more over, I am worried for how her reaction might be after getting to know him....
Sanjana: Main baat karoo di se...????
Ishaan: No...She dont listen u.... lets see... I think that the time only solves every problem....
Sanjana: But, I feel that I want a jeeju like u, caring, understanding and cute.....
Ishaan: Thats impossible Sanju..... No way.... Even if I wish it couldnt happen...
Sanjana: Where there is a will, there is a way bhaiyya.... And I bet, dad also talks to badimaa to make u his son-in-law..
Ishaan: But Suhana wont accept...She sees e only as her best friend...
Sanjana: Lets see bhaiyya, U only told na...Time changes everything... But I pray to God that I get a jeeju like you....
Ishaan: hmmm!!! okay!!!!
Sanjana: I will be leaving now!!! Good night...
Ishaan: Good night !!! Sweet dreams
Sanjana: oops!!! I forgot to tell u, there's juice on the table, plzzz have it and, be ready tomorrow morning, we are going to shopping and movie with Suhana di....
Ishaan: Phirse Shopping!!!! O god!!!!
Next Morning:
Ishaan, Sanju, Ishika are ready for going outside... Suli and Sudi also reached the Bajpai's home... But Suhana was still sleeping like a rock... dolli didi and Gopi kaka are afraid to go into her room.... No one dared to go there... Finally, Ishaan took the tray of coffee and Juice and went to her room....He placed the tray on the table and called her.
Ishaan: Suhana!!!!
Suhana adjusted and continued to sleep...Ishaan slightly removed the blanket from her head and called her again...This time Suhana threw the pillow on his face...Then Ishaan called her in a high voice...
Ishaan: Suhana!!!! Whats this...
Suhana opened her eyes and smiled at him.....She wished him Goodmorning.. Ishaan handed over the coffee to her.... She had a sip and was about to throw it away but she quietly drank it after seeing Ishaan's expression...Perhaps, this is the firsttime she drank the coffee without throwing away.....Then Ishaan said
Ishaan: Go and get ready soon... U planned shopping and movie na??? go and get ready soon.. We are waiting for you...
Suhana: Shopping?? Yes!!! shopping!!!! will be down within 10 minutes....
Ishaan: okay!!!!
Ishaan went down...Every one were sitting in the drawing room and Suhana came down.... They left for a mall to do Shopping!!!!they reached the mall.... And the girls started to select the dresses and accessories...They are trying many outfits,...Ishaan was getting mad on seeing them... He came with 5 girls who are fond of shopping... His situation is just so unpredictable.... After succesfully shopping for 4 hours, they paid the bills and came out... Each of them gifted a present to Ishaan... Ishika gave a shirt, Sanju gave a key chain to him secretly and there was an alphabet 's' on it... Suhana gave him a wrist watch... And Suli and Sudi together gave him goggles....
After this... they all went to a movie, had dinner at a restaurant and finally went to their respective houses.......
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So guys!!! this was the update!!!
Sorry for being late!
Hope you like it...
Plzzz leave your comments!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
AWESOME
UPDATE
HARIKA

👏Please keep on writing👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
hi haarika,nice update yaar.but sid challenging ishaan dat he'll destroy suhaana's life-felt a li'l bit filmy routine otherwise awesome update.keep posting ur updates.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: smiley_moon80

hi haarika,nice update yaar.but sid challenging ishaan dat he'll destroy suhaana's life-felt a li'l bit filmy routine otherwise awesome update.keep posting ur updates.

was in a bit filmy mood today yaar!!! and also little upset!!! so it happened...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
Haaki........lovely update dear...............n me luvd the Ishu-Sanju moments.... so glad that Sanju could read Ishus eyes n see how much he luvs Suhana..😳
n wow......ek akela Ishu wit 5 girls..god bless him..can imagine how frustu he mite b feeling...but its so sweet to see that everyone gifted him....... cute..!!
Great update haaki........u sooooo totally rockkkkkkkkkkkk ❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
it was soo good....especially when sanju was telling ishaan that she wants a jiju lyk him😊😆
n also when ishaan woke suhanna up...please update soon😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
love it sweet heart 🤗
luv the cute moments between them
continue sooon
take care
luv
naley
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
YAY! A FF on Ishaan and Suhana, lol I was dieing to read one. I love the sketch you came up with, great job, yaar!
Edited by Jasmin_N - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
hey just caught up with ur ff today and im loving it to every bits plz do wrtie more soon and i would love it if u would PM me when u update it next time :)

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