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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: pasumarthisa

tum uthti aur ek muskaan deti
tum hastii aur mera din ban jaata

mai har din tumhare payal choota hoon
aur sapne ko hakeekat banne ki khushi paata hoon

humaari raatein honge madhur
hamari baaton se, tumhari payal ki khanak se
tumhari baalon ki khushboo se tumhari aawaaz se

yeh har din ab main kyuun dekhu sapna
jab haqueeqat hogi usse bhi sundar

mere sapnon ki raani aa jao
ab meri zindagi ko bahar bana do

yeh moti tumhari hai ab raj karo mujh par
par tum hi ho ek moti jis par
raaj karoonga mai kyun ki mujhe haq hai


Jesus Santhi ...im floored ...u are one serious kavitiri/shayara...👏

tum bhi apne sabhdoh ke moti uyhi piroona ,har dam, har pal,
yeh sundar malaye ,humko bhaya kitni janogi tum bhi , har dam ,har pal 👏
Edited by annete - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Saare khushiyian aayenge
Saras kumud ek honge

Unka milan hoga unke pyaar jaisa
Komal madhur ek kavi ki kalpana jaisa

Jisme honge sang Rehne ke vaade
Kabhi na Bhoolne ke vaade

Jisme honge chandni raatein
Wo raat bhar ki baatein

Ab tho Saare adhikar hain ek dusre par
Tan man Dhan aur zindagi par

Phir bhi saras nahin Chodta kumud ke baalon ko sehlaane ki aadat ko
Aur kumud nahin chodti apne aap ko usme bhoolne ki aadat ko

Ek ka sapna karega dusra poora
Iss tarah hoga Unka bandhan poora

Ek ke man ke iraade dusre ki lakshya bante hain
Ek ke dil ke aansu dusre ke aankhon se nikalte hain

Inka pyaar anokha hai
Ram ji aur sita ji ki tarah

Inka pyaar dekh kar dil bhar aata hai
Unke Milan ki raat ka ab intezaar hai




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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
I cannot thank you both enough.
Arshi, who creates lyrical and poetic masterpieces everyday at will.
And Annete, who gives us these motis at will and has inspired me to write.
Never in my life I thought I could write anything on these lines. I know they are prosaic and mediocre. But still the fact that I got here, is a big step.
Thank you both.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Nasseb azmaney ke din aa rahe hai
Kareeb un ke aney ke din aa rahe hain

Jo dil se kaha hai, jo dil se suna hai
sab unko sunanaey ke din aa rahe hai...
ke lutney lutaney ke din aa rahe hai
Tapakne lagi un ankhon se masti
nigahen churani ke din aa rahe hai...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Like button is not working

But Anu Santhi cant tell you how much I love this

our very own saras kumud mushaira

Anu thanks for creating this unique thread

Santhi we can never be as good as true poets

but thats not the point here

its about sharing and expressing and I think we are doing great

auron ke lafzon se bhi keh sakte hain apni baat hum

par jo dil main hai usko dil de kaho toh dil pe lagti hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: pasumarthisa

I cannot thank you both enough.
Arshi, who creates lyrical and poetic masterpieces everyday at will.
And Annete, who gives us these motis at will and has inspired me to write.
Never in my life I thought I could write anything on these lines. I know they are prosaic and mediocre. But still the fact that I got here, is a big step.
Thank you both.



Santhi

They are in no way mediocre! They come from the heart, inspired by Saras-Kumud and the depth and intensity of their love!

How wonderful to be able to express in such poetic verses! Beautiful !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Arshics

Like button is not working

But Anu Santhi cant tell you how much I love this

our very own saras kumud mushaira

Anu thanks for creating this unique thread

Santhi we can never be as good as true poets

but thats not the point here

its about sharing and expressing and I think we are doing great

auron ke lafzon se bhi keh sakte hain apni baat hum

par jo dil main hai usko dil de kaho toh dil pe lagti hai




Arshi n Sanhti please dont pull my leg...im just a scounger(dont know if its even the right word) one extremely lucky day i stumbled upon a group of extremely talented n beautiful ppl..(.my son accuses me of plagarism when i steal these shers) ... its just that another lucky day i stumbled across this beautiful site of shayari...n wanted to share it with you all ...nothing original i afraid...as for my reluctance for startin a post ...i may be a senior in yrs ..but still a baccha in w.w.w which includes here...half the things buddy list ,pm etc i dont understand😆...n havin an uncanny ability to step on unsuspectin toes n annoyin ppl with my twisted sense of humour... i was frightenned of committin...


But what the hell i love u guys n share your love for saraswatichandra😃
Edited by annete - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Jab se yeh pegham mila hai
jaana tum aaney waali ho
mausam ne saare ghar ki tarteeb badal daali hai
chokhat par ek chaand bhi aa kar bathe gaya hai
yeh sitaare lounge par kab se pare hua hai...
Phoolon ne mil kar sab kohne baant liye hai
jugnu kab se chat par , ghar ke
har goshay mai chamak rahe hai
suraj aur barish bhi kal se saaye baan kar tikkay hua hai
dheemay dheemay chehak rahe hai
shaam toh kab se kaayi tarah ke mausam le kar
is kamrey mai ruki hui hai, jis kamrey mai tum thehro ge
tum aaogi to ye shaam hazaaron mausam
sunder sunder sajji hui aankhon ko de kar
kho jayegi...
Tum aa jao na
aa bhi jao...

Wasi Shah
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Khawab aur khushboo
dono hi azada rooh hai
dono qaid nahi ho sakte
Mera Khawab
Tumhari Khushboo...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: annete

Khawab aur khushboo

dono hi azada rooh hai
dono qaid nahi ho sakte
Mera Khawab
Tumhari Khushboo...

internet



Ufff. Mera khwab n tumhara khushboo. Kya bat hai.

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