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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Since i gave a track for 3 months, in case CVs get short of ideas for SaMud moments let me add wat Shana said as one scene:

"prammmy will be having center stage again with samud going merry go round him...kumud ji doing seva...saras ji watching...pramad taking sadistic pleasure giving winner look at saras

wanna here the dialogue from kumud...ek patni ke naate nahi .mai insaaniyat ke naate aap ki seva kar rahi hoo


hope kumud cooks food for pramad and for two other sick people in his ward...and make them eat ...showing pramad how she equally care for other patients of his ward...making saras smile with pride...and pramad fume with anger...🤣 "


and my add on for this scene goes on next day:

"N cherry on the cake, Saras n Kumud having khaana just outside his window on a bench!! Saras ko mirchi Lagta hain n Kumud gives him water n share a cute smile with eyes oozing love n patient Prammy in hospital clothes looks on his eyes spitting fire"

N then the next day according to Shana:

"window wala breakfast for samud..while pramad stands on his window like thakoor of sholey with big shawl around...and asks ...moorkhdaas to bring chullu bhar pani...as usual moorkhdaas will bring it carefully and prammy will jump out of window seeing moorkhta of moorkhdaas insidehouse and samud romance outside house"

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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Continuation of precap scene

After Kumud walks away in shock, Saras follows her ( we have option of whether he will wait to wear his shirt, or walk out without one) 😊


Kumud says, "mujhe jaana hoga saras, and removes her payal and gives it back to him"

Saras says "nahin Kumud, maine kaha na, main tumhe yeh payal utarne nahin doonga"

Maine kaha na, humara pyar kisi ke aage nahin jhukega, Hum dono saath milkar Pramad ke akhri dinon mein uska khayal rakhenge"


There is an eyelock.

Pramad is in hospital, and horrified to find Saras and Kumud on either side of him. Kumud brings the soup and says, Kalika ne apne haathon se apne chote seth ke liye banaya hai, tumhe peena hoga Pramad and Saras is ready with Ganga jal !

Pramad gives up and says, Saras main haar gaya, tum mere jiteji Kumud ki maang mein sindoor bhar do, taaki main chain se mar sakun.

This time Saras doesnt falter. He bharoes the Sindur, and Pramad dies !

Kalika comes and says "mere chote seth ke bina main zinda nahin reh sakti" and kills herself! (and really becomes bhatakti atma! )

Out goes Kalika, and out goes Pramad. The heavens shower flowers on out mahaan Saras and Kumud.

We await the arrival of Guman ! 😊

I hope this comes to an end on Monday, and we start fresh on tuesday with better episodes ! 😊
Edited by -sudha- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13


Posted by Sudha

Maine kaha na, humara pyar kisi ke aage nahin jhukega"

Hum dono saath milkar Pramad ke akhri dinon mein uska khayal rakhenge"

There is an eyelock.

Pramad is in hospital, and horrified to find Saras and Kumud on either side of him. Kumud brings the soup and says, Kalika ne apne haathon se apne chote seth ke liye banaya hai, tumhe peena hoga Pramad and Saras is ready with Ganga jal !


Pramad gives up and says, Saras main haar gaya, tum mere jiteji Kumud ki maang mein sindoor bhar do, taaki main chain se mar sakun.

This time Saras doesnt falter. He bharoes the Sindur, and Pramad dies !




Reading first line gave me heart attack...like how can Kumud take out the payal...and then came that blue para and that red words made me laugh hard ...this thread is gonna make me mad...wow...aap sab ne to weekend bana diya
Edited by ShanUlas - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
@ sudha
🤣
I love this but u r very fast!! At this rate, the show will b over at the end of November!!😆
But no way Kumud is removing the paayals! Change it please
Before she does it, Saras should stop her and says - tum meri ho! Pramad is not an old furniture that we can discard like this i admit! Lets go n take care of him together.
Prammy as u said jeete ji mar jayenge donon ko saat dekh kar!!😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh Lord have mercy!!🤣 My tummy is aching! I am supposed to b working on an assignment which i have to submit on Tuesday at latest n i am fooling around!!🤣
Now i want arshi, ad and Kat n others to build on this track.😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

@ sudha
🤣
I love this but u r very fast!! At this rate, the show will b over at the end of November!!😆
But no way Kumud is removing the paayals! Change it please
Before she does it, Saras should stop her and says - tum meri ho! Pramad is not an old furniture that we can discard like this i admit! Lets go n take care of him together.
Prammy as u said jeete ji mar jayenge donon ko saat dekh kar!!😆



Oh but Jaanu, you didnt read properly. She doesnt remove the payals, and Saras says we will take care of Pramad together !

How can we let Kumud remove the payals?

But seriously I cant stand this torture of Kalika for long. And this is about as mahaan a death that one can give to pramad.

Uske baad Kusum/Guman sab hain na, show ko aage badhane ko?

Not to worry !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Worst Case Scenario(do read , u wont regret , i promise !!)


Scene I : Beti Kumud Decides to be Bahu again

Pramd ki maa Saubhagwati Devi requests Kumud to come back to Dharmadhikari Haveli and bring back the khoosiya.

SD : pls kumud beta come back.If not as wife to pramad than as bahu of dharmadhikari pariwaar.

Kumud : I will Maa

All surprised.!!!

Khotee kaki : Kuch to samajh aayi is kalmoohi ko .Ye jaaye to humari haveli me khooshiya aaye

Saras takes Kumud suitcase from her hand and confidently says lets go

Kumud surprised .Vidyachatur smiles.Comes andgives Kumud hand in saras hand and says

VC : Beta aaj mai apni beti ka haath tumhare haath me deta hu.Meri beti ka khyaal rakhna and sahi salamat cvaapas le aana...Badi bholi hai ye...par mujhe pata hai tumhare saath humesha mafooz rahegi.

...


Scene II : .Dharmadhikari Haveli...Kumud ka Grih Pravesh


SD waiting with aarti ki thaal to welcome ghar ki laxmy kumud.She takes kumud aarti saras in background .SD maiyya smiles when she sees saras.


Saras indicates her to enter first in house .But she holds his hands and they both enter together in house.

Prammy sees and fumes.SD maiyya smiles and thanks saras for bringing back kumud the ghar ki laxmi.


...
Scene II: Maang Bharo Sajna

Prammy whoops and coughhard.SD maiyya says Kumud to wear sindoor for pramad ki long life .Kumud says no .She is no wife but will do pramad seva as she is her bahu

SD maiyya knows what works on Kumud her pyaari bahu . SD maiyya teary eyed hands it to Saras and asks him to tell Kumud to do so as she will never say no to his request.

Saras is stuck...ek taraf muh boli maa ...ek taraf ziddi premika.

Family drama.

Saras : pls kumud wear it if maa ji feels it will inc. pramad life.

SD BD MD smile at Saras ka saras tyag.Pramad coughs even more hard insifying the need of kumud to wear sinddorr.Kumud looks at him tears fall from her eyes

Kumud says : I wil wear it for sure .Par meri bhi ek shart hai .

SD maiyya : Beta i will fulfill it all.

Pramad : Say it Kumud .I give my words i will fulfill it .(smiles that his dream to seprate samud is fanally to be fulfilled )

Kumud : Think before u say

SD maiyya pramad and budh dhan repeat the promice.Saras confused.

Kumud teary eyed and gives sindoor to Saras

Kumud : Put it in my maang.Put it for the long life of Pramad.Put it for SD Maa and for BD Papa

Saras stunned .All stunned .Screen Freezes.!!

SD maiyya: Beta Saras bhar de humari bahu ki maang .

BD nods in yes .Pramad coughs harder.This time out of shock .Saras decides. Mila hai mauka maaro chauka. And fills kumuds maang.

Kumud touches Saras feet.then SD maiyya and then BD papa.Finally she comes to Pramad and says now u will live long and smiles her purest smile .

Pramad stands and throws away his shawl .All surprised

SD Maiyya eyes fill with tears : Ise kehte hai sindoor ka chamatkaar !!!.Mera Beta theek ho gaya.Arrey mathai bato. Shehnai bajao.Meri bahu kisi devi se kam nahi hai .

(SD maiyya and BD papa do garbha together and pramad searches for danda.!!)

Edited by ShanUlas - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Are you guys really for real??? 😆
You are an amazing bunch of people. I am reading and laughing my ass off.
I will try to add my option too but I don't know if I can match yours
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: dazzzling

Are you guys really for real??? 😆
You are an amazing bunch of people. I am reading and laughing my ass off.
I will try to add my option too but I don't know if I can match yours



Dazz happy to see u here. Plz add ur creativity to thus thread. We are having a blast reading and laughing aloud too. I am sure u r as good if not better than us!!
Time to take this track with a pinch of salt n not let it damone our mood n increase our tension.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShanUlas

Worst Case Scenario(do read , u wont regret , i promise !!)


Scene I : Beti Kumud Decides to be Bahu again

Pramd ki maa Saubhagwati Devi requests Kumud to come back to Dharmadhikari Haveli and bring back the khoosiya.

SD : pls kumud beta come back.If not as wife to pramad than as bahu of dharmadhikari pariwaar.

Kumud : I will Maa

All surprised.!!!

Khotee kaki : Kuch to samajh aayi is kalmoohi ko .Ye jaaye to humari haveli me khooshiya aaye

Saras takes Kumud suitcase from her hand and confidently says lets go

Kumud surprised .Vidyachatur smiles.Comes andgives Kumud hand in saras hand and says

VC : Beta aaj mai apni beti ka haath tumhare haath me deta hu.Meri beti ka khyaal rakhna and sahi salamat cvaapas le aana...Badi bholi hai ye...par mujhe pata hai tumhare saath humesha mafooz rahegi.

...


Scene II : .Dharmadhikari Haveli...Kumud ka Grih Pravesh


SD waiting with aarti ki thaal to welcome ghar ki laxmy kumud.She takes kumud aarti saras in background .SD maiyya smiles when she sees saras.


Saras indicates her to enter first in house .But she holds his hands and they both enter together in house.

Prammy sees and fumes.SD maiyya smiles and thanks saras for bringing back kumud the ghar ki laxmi.


...
Scene II: Maang Bharo Sajna

Prammy whoops and coughhard.SD maiyya says Kumud to wear sindoor for pramad ki long life .Kumud says no .She is no wife but will do pramad seva as she is her bahu

SD maiyya knows what works on Kumud her pyaari bahu . SD maiyya teary eyed hands it to Saras and asks him to tell Kumud to do so as she will never say no to his request.

Saras is stuck...ek taraf muh boli maa ...ek taraf ziddi premika.

Family drama.

Saras : pls kumud wear it if maa ji feels it will inc. pramad life.

SD BD MD smile at Saras ka saras tyag.Pramad coughs even more hard insifying the need of kumud to wear sinddorr.Kumud looks at him tears fall from her eyes

Kumud says : I wil wear it for sure .Par meri bhi ek shart hai .

SD maiyya : Beta i will fulfill it all.

Pramad : Say it Kumud .I give my words i will fulfill it .(smiles that his dream to seprate samud is fanally to be fulfilled )

Kumud : Think before u say

SD maiyya pramad and budh dhan repeat the promice.Saras confused.

Kumud teary eyed and gives sindoor to Saras

Kumud : Put it in my maang.Put it for the long life of Pramad.Put it for SD Maa and for BD Papa

Saras stunned .All stunned .Screen Freezes.!!

SD maiyya: Beta Saras bhar de humari bahu ki maang .

BD nods in yes .Pramad coughs harder.This time out of shock .Saras decides. Mila hai mauka maaro chauka. And fills kumuds maang.

Kumud touches Saras feet.then SD maiyya and then BD papa.Finally she comes to Pramad and says now u will live long and smiles her purest smile .

Pramad stands and throws away his shawl .All surprised

SD Maiyya eyes fill with tears : Ise kehte hai sindoor ka chamatkaar !!!.Mera Beta theek ho gaya.Arrey mathai bato. Shehnai bajao.Meri bahu kisi devi se kam nahi hai .

(SD maiyya and BD papa do garbh together and pramad searches for danda.!!)


I don't regret reading this!! 😆
Awesome
!! But wats full on drama without a back ground music n song for effect. The SD n Kumud babu scene should have a song as message

- mein bahu tere mansion ki, koi nahin mein, koi nahin mein, koi nahin mein, tere Pramaad ke!!
N Kumud goes to Saras who looks on teary eyes n sighing as he realized his dream to marry Kumud is finally realizing thanks to his tez dhaar Kumud Sundari

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