Kumud ... - Page 2

Originally posted by: arshicritic

... Kumud...

Kumud, when I see you

I see not the tears that you shed

But the hurt in you eyes

I hear not the bitterness of the words

But the anguish of your soul

I see not pride and ego

But a proud woman standing tall

I can see the weight on your slender shoulders

Of relationships that you are trying to protect

Of new bonds that you are trying to forge

An iron will to not break, nor surrender

Hopeless your plight, yet helpless you are not

You have nowhere to go, life has put you in a spot

You burned your past and tried to move ahead

What you thought was done over and dead,

Is back to torment you in ways that are "new"

What you thought would be your future

Lays fallen, drunk before you

Yet your spirit is not broken

Nor the will to fight

Kumud Sundari Desai

You're a true heroine!

Originally posted by: Infofan

Its beautiful Arshi, So well written. @ bold esp touched my heart.

Originally posted by: pasumarthisa

Beautiful.

But Kumud's spirit is shattered actually. Yeah, her will to fight didnt. The girl has never seen sadness in her life. And now is in total misery.

She is waging a lone battle with herself and world around her. And the more she fights, the more misery she is being pulled into. And no1 has answers. Desai clan dont even know the problem. Long way to go.

The day she smiles is to watch for.

Originally posted by: happychappy

Arshi, love your Ode to Kumud! 👏

I dont know how you do it! Seriously, you are a natural writer, just like Mr Rode is a natural actor. 👍🏼

As you mentioned elsewhere, the CV's are taking great pleasure in unveiling the truth of the other's reality layer by layer, thus prolonging the guilt and agony for both of Saras and Kumud, (and the agony of anticipation for us!) Talk of putting our hearts through the shredder...

The way this track is working out, I am more bothered now about Kumud surviving and conquering her "sasuraal" than the eventual re-union, or otherwise...Would like Kumud not to be the typical bahu, so keeping my fingers crossed to see a Version 2.1 with more of the directness and chutzpah of the original Kumud...

Originally posted by: Anki_KJSG

Very well written arshi... Rejectn frm lover before 2 days of marriage nd marriage to a drankard person who treat her lyk a doormat...aftr going through ths pain she is still strong.. the girl who always got love from everyone nd brought up in a secure environment nw trying to handle d drastic change in her lyf...it surely must b difficult for her...Saras should say thanks to God dat his Kumud is nt weak lyk his mother who did suicide cz of his father's betrayal...

Idk y ppl always say dat its her ego... Self respect naam ki bhi koi cheez hoti hai... She z nt flawless n dats makes her human being nd nt a saint...
Nw if saras really wants to help her den he should b stronger dan kumud... Jus lyk in dat FB scene Kumud says whr she was angry on saras... "Meri madad karana chahte ho Khud ko toh sambhalo pahele"