touch me not romance!

these days we r all experiencing touch me not romance of kumud and saras..i guess pms ke baad craze khatam ho gaya..since we r not going to get any touch waala romance, lets see what ideas we all can come up with to make the touch me not romance look pleasing to the eye..

as we all know they r both great looking, so half the battle is won there..lets say for example in today's episode they did not have to show the boring kc, which looked so forced and out of place..now this is how my scene would have been..

saras giving surprise to kumud and saying..kumud tum pure chaand ki raat ko mera chat par intezaar karna..tumhare khayaalon mein aane waala is saras ka khayaal wajood mein badal jayega.

..and then kumud is waiting chat pe on a long reclining chair, classical style waali, the one they showed in devdas..blue light and chaand ki chandni touching kumud's face..and saras comes from the back door..chupke se..goes straight to the chat without anyone's knowledge..

now saras entering and kumud looks out of this world!..simple and beautiful..hawaa chali..the latt is playing with kumud's face..saras comes and blows the latt away without touching her face to see the eternal beauty..the song playing in the background..

..chaudavi ka chaand ho ya aaftaab ho jo bhi ho tum khuda ki kasam laajawab ho
..zulphen hai jaise kaandhon pe baadal jhuke hue
..aankhen hai jaise meh ke pyaale bhare hue
...masti hai jisme pyaar ki tum wo sharaab ho
..chaudavi ka chaan ho ya aaftab ho..
...chehra hai jaise jheel mein hasta hua kanwal
..ya zindagi saaz pe cheri hui ghazal
..jaane bahaar tum kissi shayar ka khawaab ho
..chaudavi ka chand ho ya aaftab ho..
..hoton pe khelti hain tabasum ki bijliyan
..sajde tumhari raah mein karti hai kehkashan
..duniyan mein husan o ishaq ka tum hi khitaab ho
..chaudavi ka chand ho ya aaftab ho jo bhi ho tum khudaa ki kasam laajawab ho..

..the song is playing and saras is looking with tears in his eyes not believing that this sleeping beauty belongs to him..silently admiring and then kumud realizing his presence through his garam saans touching her saans..remember no touch..just saans ki saans se touch..

then the beauty wakes up and can't believe its saras goes back to sleep again thinking that its her dream and does not want to disrupt her dream by waking up..saras is sitting by her side all night not disturbing her sleep and sleeps close to her on the floor..no touch again!..and when gets up in the morning..misses his flight and the deal with mr. lal..

kaisa laga touch me not ka kissa..any other ideas of touch me not romance..since separation track is starting there will be lots of such scenarios, so please do share ur ideas😉

comment please..throw ur creative ideas of touch me not romance, then we will choose the best idea..lets see who wins!!!

Mandy I am a very touchy person so it's really hard for me to write no touch wala romance. 😆 let me scratch my head n come up with something 😆

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Mandy I am a very touchy person so it's really hard for me to write no touch wala romance. 😆 let me scratch my head n come up with something 😆

touchy person! bhool jayo touch ko..don't u know that this is saraswatichandra jiski lead kissi ki wife hai, therefore no touch me romance is only allowed, so put ur thinking cap on dear😉

Ok my no touch wala romance

Kumud talking to Saras on the phone: I am missing u a lot. Don't u miss me?
Saras: of course I do. Listen to my heart beats n u will know.
Dhak dhak dhak...Saras put his phone on his heart n Kumud cud hear her name resonating rather than the regular dhak dhak!! 😆
Saras: did u hear wat my heart was telling u?
Kumud: yes!! Aur kuch mat kaho!! Listen to my heart beats n feel the love oozing out of it.
The two lovers stayed like this for some time with both unwilling to disconnect but Gun was calling Kumud to make aachaar n Mr Peela another business associate was waiting for Saras ...
At night:
Kumud is looking at the moon on the terrace thinking of her moon n how he told her- we share the same sky.
Suddenly a light breeze starts blowing and his ehsaas spreading in the air around her. She takes in a deep breath and closes her eyes and she hears her name. Kumud!
She turns around to see her Saras. As he draws closer, her heart starts dhakdhaking. He traps her between the wall n his arms without touching her n they stare.
Saras finally says: I have boarded a plane just to meet u n do this!! Kumud's breath hitched as he closes in... keeping his face inches away ...blows on her face n down her neckline.
That was enuf to turn both the lovers hot n they stare at each other with hooded eyes n finally Saras leaves for Dubai an hour later after a good session of MF!!


Ok u asked for it now buk do!! One of my crappiest story i guess!!!🤣

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Ok my no touch wala romance

Kumud talking to Saras on the phone: I am missing u a lot. Don't u miss me?
Saras: of course I do. Listen to my heart beats n u will know.
Dhak dhak dhak...Saras put his phone on his heart n Kumud cud hear her name resonating rather than the regular dhak dhak!! 😆
Saras: did u hear wat my heart was telling u?
Kumud: yes!! Aur kuch mat kaho!! Listen to my heart beats n feel the love oozing out of it.
The two lovers stayed like this for some time with both unwilling to disconnect but Gun was calling Kumud to make aachaar n Mr Peela another business associate was waiting for Saras ...
At night:
Kumud is looking at the moon on the terrace thinking of her moon n how he told her- we share the same sky.
Suddenly a light breeze starts blowing and his ehsaas spreading in the air around her. She takes in a deep breath and closes her eyes and she hears her name. Kumud!
She turns around to see her Saras. As he draws closer, her heart starts dhakdhaking. He traps her between the wall n his arms without touching her n they stare.
Saras finally says: I have boarded a plane just to meet u n do this!! Kumud's breath hitched as he closes in... keeping his face inches away ...blows on her face n down her neckline.
That was enuf to turn both the lovers hot n they stare at each other with hooded eyes n finally Saras leaves for Dubai an hour later after a good session of MF!!


Ok u asked for it now buk do!! One of my crappiest story i guess!!!🤣

mind blowing MF yaar🤣..i hope they show all this in separation phase..they need to rise above the gheesa pheeta ideas of holi /genda pms and kc ka half baked huggi(jhooti waali)..any more touch me not gutter thoughts candidates..come on toni and lee where r u???

i think it was all just very same mandy ...say even better ...i am in love with the dialogue these days...they reveal the depth of saras kumud love so so much

seeing the show reminds me of my all time favourate novel Wuthering Heights where their was no touch at all but the romance so epic that i still re read the novel...will u belive many of the dialogues seem to belong to book though they have still not reached that madness

Wuthering Heaights's Heaithcliff and Catherine were so much in love ...that it never mattered to them where they lived with whom they lived and who was around...they just belonged to each other irrespective of all...thats what i see in saras and kumud

ok here is another one..thora gutter wala😉

saras comes on the roof through the back door which danny opens for him to surprise kumud..its night time and kumud is waiting for him with lantern in her hand..saras comes from the back and whispers in her ear..ku..mu..ud! kumud gets arousal by the touch of his breadth so close to her ear..she moves away and turns around to look at him..all they have is lantern in between..saras takes the lantern from her and turns it off, so that no one sees them..

kumud does the same she whispers sa..ra..as! in his ear as she had promised to call him saras when he surprises her..saras can feel her breadth skin deep leading to the trigger of love hormones that bring a naughty smile on his face, as if saying aaj na chorenge tujhe kumud!..saras advances and kumud says do not touch me otherwise i will not be able to control myself..saras saying..ab hosh ka naam mat lo main tumhari baahon mein kho jaana chahta hun is hoton ki rangat churaana chahta hun..

kumud - ye sab shaadi ke baad..genda phool bas ek hi baar..doosri baar gulaab ka phool deke mujhe impress mat karo tumhe kuch nahin milne waala..ho gai bechare saras ki klpd..ab to hug se bhi gaya..😆

Originally posted by: shana0127

i think it was all just very same mandy ...say even better ...i am in love with the dialogue these days...they reveal the depth of saras kumud love so so much

seeing the show reminds me of my all time favourate novel Wuthering Heights where their was no touch at all but the romance so epic that i still re read the novel...will u belive many of the dialogues seem to belong to book though they have still not reached that madness

Wuthering Heaights's Heaithcliff and Catherine were so much in love ...that it never mattered to them where they lived with whom they lived and who was around...they just belonged to each other irrespective of all...thats what i see in saras and kumud

shana, if they want to show touch me not romance, then they should not have shown the pms, it seems like they r reversing everything..this type of love looks good when two people r in the process of falling in love or they have newly fallen in love..anyway the whole concept of romance is getting confusing rt now, its more to do with the acting part too, especially after the pms fiasco!

Originally posted by: mandygill

shana, if they want to show touch me not romance, then they should not have shown the pms, it seems like they r reversing everything..this type of love looks good when two people r in the process of falling in love or they have newly fallen in love..anyway the whole concept of romance is getting confusing rt now, its more to do with the acting part too, especially after the pms fiasco!

yaar its just that their love has matured ...those touch and grab and pinning to wall happen either in teenage romance ...new lovers ...or the do kaudi ka love hate romances which i am fed up with😆

even i am married , and i tel u we launge for verbal expressions more then physiacal...coz being physical is no more a deal so is with saras kumud...their love has reached higher levels...thats why tv shows maker never show consummation or pms thing so early coz they want to cash on it for long...

thats why twist is very much needed to make their story afresh ...we enjoyed their start up and i promice we will enjoythe start up once again😃

thats why the shows that r based on just love stories of two leads never go far more then a year or two...coz story matures very soon ...and such shows can survive only if they keep bringing twists and renewing the story line and chemistry