Originally posted by: littles12
Omg this was so amazingly written nd incredibly great!😆even before I go to the os I must say dude ur an amazing writer! I loved the way u conveyed all ur emotions nd portrayed the characters so perfectly! At some points I thought I was watching it its was so descriptive that I was like damn this girl knows how to write! Keep writing like this! Have u ever thought of writing a real book nd getting it published! I swear u will probably get super famous even before u know it! Then maybe ur book can turn into a serial as well! I'm not even kidding totally serious! Think about it! I will be ur biggest fan!
Nd now to the os! AAAHHH! It was so amazing I know I said amazing like a million times already but man ur too good I don't even know to praise u I'm still captivate by ur is still in samud a dreamland!😃😃 I freaking loved ur own editions to it especially those kisses heheh! 😳😳
I think cvs should take ur writing in consideration to their show it might help them in the future! I seriously am really amazed the way u described her feeling! Ugh I said amazing again! 😲
But it was short that I was like nooo! I felt so bad for her! She was so devastated! 😭 I wanted to cry myself just reading it! 😭 I swear I really don't know what to say this was just so magnificent! Honestly feel like Jenny should read this because her acting looks forced these days especially when she has to stare at guatam looking a crazy lover nd when she cries I mean she's good but it seems as if she tries to hard! 🥱 I mean there's gautam working his ass off nd I feel like she just ruins it! In the beginning of the show she was amazing! Perfect but now it's kinda irritating! Anyways did I tell I am like in love with ur title who am I kidding i am like so in love with this piece of work! I saved it on my phone forever!😳
I think I should probably shut up, did not realize it got this long! I still have so much to say but don't know how to put it in words! Like again ur amazing! I'm still in the trance after reading ur os! Darling ur really good with ur words! I was totally serious when I told u think about writing a novel! Do write more nd pm me when u do so! Sorry for my annoying comment! I will try to keep it short next time! But I still have so much more to say!😳
-love Zainab<3
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