SS~It's Complicated(story of Toni & Saras)p6 P54

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-bornalee-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: hunnybunch

Bonu, Bonu🤗🤗
Are you going to go on blushing aur kuch karegi bhi?😆

Pakdo, aur Danny haath se niklenge😆

Cliff hangers, oh I love cliff hangers

kaha jayega baag ke,wapas tohmere pass hi aana hei😳 😳 😳

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Ayushi

@Ayushii_Angel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: -B.N.K-

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">hi .. thank ..i got ur pm but buddy this is the only show i watch ...but will try to read ur FF soon.
if u write any FF or OS just let me know i will make u VM ...and i think u asked to be part of the NL team ...did u change ur mind yeah u still want to </font>

Hi toni thnks alot dear.. 🤗 ofcourse i still want to be a part of NL team..it would realy be a pleasure for me..ofcourse i'll suerly ask u for VM..bcoz ur very creative nd awesm VM maker 👏 its ok dear if u cant read the FF as u dnt knw abt character..its ok dnt fry ur mind for me meri sweeto.. 😆 m planning now nd will suerly write for sarmud asap .. 😳 but realy toni..i mean ye ho sakta hai..i can be part of NL..i must say m not such creative but ya i love to write..so plz plz tell me if i can do anything

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Ayushi

@Ayushii_Angel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

Hi zu.. 😊 sholly for late 😛 bt here i m to coment on ur beautiful peice of writing 😳
Ch1 : Love to read abt my handsime hunk..who hs back from dubai..a perfect bzns tycon..an aadarsh son..loving brother but he also hs a dark past..sunny seems to be hv feeling for toni..thts y musibat mein usi ki yaad ayi.. 😆 but i thought wts wrong abt tony y she wanted to escape from saras.. 😲

Ch2: Saras king size bed scene was written beautifuly..OMG he hs a past like danny's present 😆 he shouldnt hurt hr this much..pool scene was nice.. 😉 nd how coldly he said her about break up nd evrything..very bad saras..intrsting point is tgt wo ab itna seedha kaise hogaya?

Ch:3 is on the qay will cmnt on it soon.. 😳

Note: Toni i thought z a side character as u wanna mk happy apni toni.. but i realy wanna ask u tht ru using toni's name in replacement of kumud?plz do tell me..

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hunnybunch

@hunnybunch

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Posted: 12 years ago

#254

@ayushi
Thanks so much for the lovely comment

As for your question, I had Toni in mind when I started the story, so no Kumud on my mind and you won't feel any similarities with the character of Kumud too. Reel life mein sub Kuch hote hain na, so I'm trying to give a chance for Toni in reel life 😆