OS - Jealousy Works!! Part 2

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OS: Jealousy Works!!
Part i:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/saraswatichandra/3582616/os-jealousy-works

To b continued...

As soon as his lips touched hers, Kumud's eyes snapped open and once again she shied away and turned to move from him with her breathing uneven and her cheeks all flushed.

This time Saras didn't grab her wrist as he always does. He knew she wouldn't go too far. This time there was no running away because she was trapped between the wall and him. Does she even know what she does to him when she runs away leaving him longing for more?

Saras closed the distance between them, stopping only inches away from her. She had her back facing him and he could not stop his finger to run a feathery caress on it. He felt her straightened her back. This one touch gave Kumud's goose bumps and she shuddered and...closed her eyes in anticipation when she heard him utter her name with a voice loaded with passion.

Her heart started drumming. She was afraid... not of him but of herself. This man knows all the tricks to make her lose control over her senses and heart. And ...right now she would not be able to resist him if he would keep fanning the back of her neck with his breath.

When Saras wounded his arms around her from behind and started stroking her belly through the thin dupatta, Kumud knew that she didn't really want to resist him anymore. Does he have any idea what havoc he was creating within her right now??

He was killing her softly and she must be the only person in this world who is ecstatic to die in his arms. A very discreet moan escaped through her lips which didn't go unnoticed by Saras. He was as vulnerable as she was and controlling himself around her was proving to be a Herculean task. He nuzzled her closer and brought with his mouth to her ear to demand huskily:

- Look at me Kumud?

Without waiting, he lifted his hands from her waist to rest them on her shoulders to turn her around to face him. But Kumud would just not open her eyes.

She was a sight! A beautiful one!! Shy and innocent!

Is she the same bold and feisty Kumud Sundari who would blast him right, left and centre? Is she the same girl who confessed that she was sure she loved him?? Saras wondered.

His lips curved to form a small smile, a smile full of love and... pride. Her flushed face, uneven breathing and quivering lips was an open book to read the effect he was having on her. Slowly he lowered his head to hers and brushed her eyes, her nose and then her cheeks with his lips. For Kumud it was as if he was blowing life in her!! Caressing her flushed face with the back of his hand, he whispered:

- Open your eyes Kumud. I want you to look at me when I kiss you.

And... Kumud obliged.

Saras didn't wait any longer; he angled her face, leaned down and took her lips. They felt...words were not enough how they felt under his. He has been craving to kiss her. His mouth lingered on her lips and devoured them gently and softly. He felt her lips parted and inviting him to explore her mouth; He deepened the kiss and experienced pure bliss when he found her responding too.

When they finally stopped for air, they were both flushed and their eyes reflected an unbounded happiness. Saras cupped her face to stare in her beautiful eyes, sighed and brought his forehead to hers

They looked into each other's eyes and shared a 'conspiratorial smile!!

Realising what has just transpired between them, Kumud blushed profusely and lowered her head to hide herself in Saras' arms. He smiled to himself and tightened his grip. She was lost in her abode when she heard him:

- Kumud?? Why were you really upset?

She pulled away from the hug and looked at him:

- Why were I upset han? How would you feel if someone hugged me'

He shushed her with a finger on her lips and said

- Nobody has the right to hug you Kumud except me

- Same pinch!!

He chuckled and pulled her in his arms and teased her:

- She is a nice girl you know!!

She looked up, her nose high and retorted

- Yeah but for me it was dislike at first sight and you better keep your distance from her.

Miss Spitting Fire Kumud Sundari !! He laughed!!

That special laughter who made him look liberated and happy.

Dobo che Saraswatichandra Vyaas!!

Well not so dobo...!! N kumud couldn't help but laugh back!!


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ok this second part is for all my friends who wanted some more details!! Though i am a die hard romantic, i can b very shy too so i dont know if it was to ur expectations my beautiful ppl. U know the drill. Like n comment if u really like n give feedback if i shud improve!!
Thank u
Hugs to all


Edited by omshreejaanu - 12 years ago
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Open your eyes Kumud. I want you to look at me when I kiss you.

Hailaaa this is too sexy of a line.☺️ Saras can be cute and adorable and sexy and hot at the same time. What a man!!☺️
Jaanu i love this second part. Very subtly written, hot and romantic. I am happy me and Usha pestered you for this. You write one more for Sunday😆
Thanks for pming me. I am not coming because of exams so this has helped to lose concentration. Thank you🤣
Edited by dazzzling - 12 years ago
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*blush*...*blush*..jaanu...

u know this is what i have been also talking to Tony for a long time...jealousy track...wow..wonderfully written Jaanu...

The kiss was magical...I coud hear his husky voice..."KUMUD" 😳 **goosebumps**

Simple and realistic... i would say...thanks for the delight dear...

Please write more and dont forget to PM me...😉






Edited by lakhy - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dazzzling

<font color="#FF0000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Open your eyes Kumud. I want you to look at me
when I kiss you.

<font color="#0000FF">Hailaaa this is too sexy of a line.☺️ Saras can be cute and adorable and sexy and hot at the same time. What a man!!☺️
Jaanu i love this second part. Very subtly written, hot and romantic. I am happy me and Usha pestered you for this. You write one more for Sunday😆
Thanks for pming me. I am not coming because of exams so this has helped to lose concentration. Thank you🤣
</font>
</font>



Hey Dazzler. Thanks dear. It really means a lot.
Honestly I wanted to write something hot n may b bold also but cudnt write more bolder than that. 😳
Oh my!!😆 sorry for ruining ur concentration dear.
Keep it touch ok. Best of luck.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...it was so romantic...hay hay mujhe kuch horaha hai...ossom dear...👏
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Originally posted by: poorvika

wow...it was so romantic...hay hay mujhe kuch horaha hai...ossom dear...👏



U r too cute poorvika 😆
Thanks.
Btw congrats for turning Goldie!! 😃
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Originally posted by: omshreejaanu



U r too cute poorvika 😆
Thanks.
Btw congrats for turning Goldie!! 😃

thank u di...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very very nice kissing scene!..loved it Han!..
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Originally posted by: omshreejaanu



Hey Dazzler. Thanks dear. It really means a lot.
Honestly I wanted to write something hot n may b bold also but cudnt write more bolder than that. 😳
Oh my!!😆 sorry for ruining ur concentration dear.
Keep it touch ok. Best of luck.



Seriously jaanu!! This is very sexy and hot. I love your style. Oh well I don't mind to get such romantic interruptions 😉 reading for exams is boring. I'd rather read this one I'll keep in touch for sure.

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